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| 8 | Nicely done. The time cut back and forth at the beginning was a bit confusing. I liked the camp, especially the trust exercises. It would have been fun to learn of more exercises. Given that the camp was all gay campers, it was nice to read that it had much the same discipline as a straight camp. It was very age appropriate. Thanks for writing the story. | More Reviews | 2010/03/10 |
| 10 | Man In Motion - CH 04 When Brad breaks down making love to Robbie. It was the best written emotional transference in a story I have read in a long while. The tears of release and sadness and happiness all in one. Very nicely written; it was verisimilar. What more can an author hope to achieve? | More Reviews | 2010/03/05 |
| 10 | I have always been a fan of Comicality, but he has outdone himslef with Agenda 21. ALthough only the first couple chapters have been completed thusfar, I am captivated and in awe at how incredibly Comicality can make a story like this come to life. I believe that this story could (should) be on bookshelves and I rate it as one of his best works. | More Reviews | 2010/02/28 |
| 10 | What a wonderful read. I thoroughly enjoyed your story. It is definitely a great addition to Mercedes Lackey's Valdemar world. While capturing the essence of her books through historical references you've created a new age with interesting characters, great dialogue, good plot lines, adventures, and new and old struggles - finding your path, discovering yourself, relationships with others. I'd recommend this to anyone who enjoys the world of Valdemar. I hope to see more of your stories in the very near future. | More Reviews | 2010/02/25 |
| 10 | Well developed . An very good read. | More Reviews | 2010/02/24 |
| 9 | very intriguing story so far. The writing flows well and the theme is an interesting one. | More Reviews | 2010/02/17 |
| 9 | Very good plot. Intriguing with enough action and love scenes to balance them out. Would be a great story for a late mellinia history buff. | More Reviews | 2010/02/17 |
| 10 | omg that was totally awsome, getting me all hot and bothered freakin awsome story dude=] | More Reviews | 2010/02/15 |
| 9 | Is this story finished, or is there more to come? There are so many strands to this story that need to be brought to a conclusion. Only a story worth reading would make me ask the question. The characters have been drawn with so much detail they seem real.-thats coming from a guy in England that knows nothing about being a baseball player in the USA.
Many thanks for sharing your work
Steve | More Reviews | 2010/02/10 |
| 10 | An excellent read. | More Reviews | 2010/02/04 |
| 9 | First--I enjoyed the story very much. I liked the way you developed the characters, especially Eddie's and Daniel's. I was pleased at how Joe and Elijah were introduced to the story and as to how their relationship played into the story. Thank you for the "fun"...I scored it as a 9/10 | More Reviews | 2010/02/03 |
| 10 | Seriously one of the best I've read. | More Reviews | 2010/02/01 |
| 10 | Great, as usual. | More Reviews | 2010/01/26 |
| 10 | Fascinating! Well done. | More Reviews | 2010/01/26 |
| 10 | Dammit, Dan, the sex in your stories always makes me stop reading and go do 'something' so I don't make a mess on my chair! | More Reviews | 2010/01/24 |
| 10 | Great short story. | More Reviews | 2010/01/22 |
| 8 | Good | More Reviews | 2010/01/22 |
| 9 | Nice short story. | More Reviews | 2010/01/22 |
| 9 | It needs to be said: Josh is as good a writer as Dom Luka. Unlike DL though, Josh does not write modern/contemporary stuff, his stories are mostly set back in the early 80ies, which i assume is the time he grew up himself and most probably the reason why they're not as popular as DLs. Oh, and Joshs stories contain a lot more sex, Sea Change being no exception. In fact, i think it's fair to categorize this as porn. Although that would go too far, because he always has a nice storyline and well developed characters. Still, the amount of sex can be overwhelming sometimes and is the reason why i'm not giving 10 points (i found myself skipping most of the sexscenes from chapter 30 or so, can you believe that?). Nevertheless - highly recommended.
Find all Joshs stories on awesomedude.com! | More Reviews | 2010/01/22 |
| 10 | Very well written. It kept my attention | More Reviews | 2010/01/20 |
| 10 | Great | More Reviews | 2010/01/20 |
| 9 | Good | More Reviews | 2010/01/19 |
| 10 | You're truly an artist. I got hooked on the CAP saga, and it just keeps getting better. Thank you for sharing these stories. | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 10 | Excellent | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 10 | Another masterpiece. I only hope the saga continues!! | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 10 | Absolutely fantastic final chapter!!! The whole story is worth every minute reading, and more, so you better start with it!
Thank you Mark Arbour for your truly delighting stories, like always reading them made my day :) | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 10 | Nice way to close it off, Mark, well done! Now I find myself wanting to read the next one, since we've all been debating whether or not you'll pull in Brad, Robbie's and Jeanette's kids...since they're in Junior High by now it should make good reading. | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 10 | A great story about these two boys that is in love but too scared to admit it! A very clean, romantic story - please keep it up. Cannot wait for the next chapter of these two guys lives. | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 9 | You sure got us going right to the end. You are evil... but not as evil as me :) | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 10 | Great story, hope it continues | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 10 | What a great ending to a fantastic story! I looked forward to each episode of Bloodlines. This story should be used for a television series. The series would be as suspense filled and enjoyable as Brothers & Sisters. I can hardly wait for the next in this series. | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 10 | Bloodlines is one of thos stories that take you through various emotions. Its great to read about this families problems and realise that we are all the same. Everyone is striving for love and acceptance. Mark, thanks for this great story - this epic history of this family. I will truely miss the weekly almost dayly episodes. (Hope that you will somehow come up with another angle and write another part of this unique family) | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 10 | I did not want to rate this story until I had gotten to the ending, and I am glad I waited. This story just got better and better along the way. I have read all of the CAP stories at least two or three times each and this really maybe my favorite since the original. I really enjoyed how diffrent people are continually being intoduced to the story that further the development of the series as a whole. I cannot wait for the next chapter in the series... | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 10 | Wow! What an end to Bloodines. I hope we continue this families saga... | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 9 | Really well-done. I enjoyed the emotional roller-coasters and the conflicts. But what I enjoy the most is...well, the family. They're always there for every member of the family. | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 8 | i'll give it an eight, as the kidney thing was....well...an overboard ending. But all in all i think it had a great begining and middle!! some chapters are #1 in my books.....it was great!! But still be-Rad i think will be my favourite because i started there.....wierd how i got hooked though's months ago.......Can't wait for the Squeakuil! lol | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 9 | Great ending, great story. I enjoyed it immensely. | More Reviews | 2010/01/18 |
| 9 | Tests of Blood was great! Never heard of that whole valdemar thing, but the story stood on its own very well, and I really enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing it! | More Reviews | 2010/01/11 |
| 9 | Good | More Reviews | 2010/01/11 |
| 9 | I judge stories by the hours they keep me from sleeping. This had me til 6:30 am.
I especially like the time passing between chapters, it keeps the pace and the story progresses so much faster.
The last chapter has the particular interesting twist of describing some action, yet not too much action. I think you found just the right amount. Teasing is after all half of the fun.
I kind of miss Jake already, will Cal go back exploring that particular relationship soon? What about his dad? It just cries for a clash!
Anyway, you had me at the first chapter. | More Reviews | 2010/01/10 |
| 9 | enough detail to make the characters real and worth careing about. Not too many people in the story that the main people get lost in the details. Not everything in the real worls goes to plan and its good that not all stories make out that life is easy.
Thank you for posting | More Reviews | 2010/01/07 |
| 10 | One of the best pieces of fan fiction I have ever read. In my opinion it is at least as good as the books it is based on. I'm looking forward to reading any future works you write, as you are a writer to watch.
Keth | More Reviews | 2010/01/03 |
| 9 | Good | More Reviews | 2010/01/03 |
| 9 | Good | More Reviews | 2010/01/02 |
| 7 | I know love at first sight exists and i'm aware of the naivete of youth. Nevertheless I have a problem with stories in which the main characters declare their infinite love and kinship of their souls already 48 hours after they first meet.
That aside Coupé is a good story, funny and smart and well worth reading. | More Reviews | 2009/12/30 |
| 10 | Excellent. Just excellent. I went for LRITE back then, but am perfectly happy with how the sequel (Hello Stupid) turned out. The chapter where Rory began to see Seth in a different way was unbelievably funny/amusing. DL is one of the best writers. | More Reviews | 2009/12/30 |
| 10 | Another great coming out story by Dom Luka. You will be swept into the world of (main character) Quinn Moore and won't be able to stop reading until the very last chapter. After/While reading you will begin to experience the first signs of Domaholism on yourself (check http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/topic/1809-join-da/page__p__10638#entry10638). Have fun. | More Reviews | 2009/12/30 |
| 10 | Dom Lukas writing is outstanding, but "With Trust" seems to be his very best story so far. It's everything - the characters, the surroundings, the storyline, the pace and the whole mood... perfect for me.
Unfortunately this story is on hiatus since a few years now (stuck after chapter 11). I sincerely hope that DL will eventually find the inspiration to return to this story, but even unfinished it's still great. | More Reviews | 2009/12/30 |
| 5 | As with a lot of other stories - the idea behind this one was good, but the writing, the characterization... no, it just didn't hold up. It's still better than a lot of other crap on nifty though. | More Reviews | 2009/12/30 |
| 10 | This short story is a sequel of both Dom Lukas previous stories "Desert Dropping" + "The Ordinary Us" and just as great. It can stand on it's own, but will be more fun if you read the other two first. | More Reviews | 2009/12/30 |
