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2. Bad Dreams Reviews

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Aug 03 2012 11:29 AM

(Chapter 2 Review)

Heart wrenching sadness. Incredibly well written. You need a good proof reader but its still awesome.
I DO proof read if you have not yet found one.
Well done. On to the next.
Foster%s's Photo

Apr 18 2012 12:35 AM

(Chapter 2 Review)

Well, you told us what was going to happen in the prologue, but it still hurt to read it. Well done chapter.
Lisa%s's Photo

Feb 21 2012 12:14 PM

(Chapter 2 Review)

Ok Caffled, you really need to put a warning at the beginning of this chapter: Will induce severe sadness, will make reader broke from buying Kleenex.

I did run out, btw, damn you.

Shit, what an emotional chapter. I can certainly see why Jon would blame himself and think it's his fault his mom got into that accident. That poor kid.

It was wonderful his friends and parents were so great with his coming out, but now he's going to blame himself for the rest of his life for this tragedy.

I think I said this in my review of the first chapter, but I'll say it again: this is an excellent story and so well written. Except for a couple of your instead of you're and were instead of we're, it's pretty much perfect. :)

Just the whole crying my eyes out thing and not being able to see the keyboard, so yeah. Gonna go out and buy some more Kleenex. Damn you. =)
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