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26. Breakfast on Saturn Reviews

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Roan
Jan 28 2012 06:31 AM

(Chapter 26 Review)

Another great chapter, and its so good to see the guys strength coming through. Cant wait for the next installment.
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Rebelghost85
Jan 27 2012 04:30 PM

(Chapter 26 Review)

His swimming coach is THE MAN. I loved this chapter and I'm so happy things are looking up. You hinted at it with review replies last chapter but I was worried.
Once again, great chapter. The entire situation felt really authentic.

View Post Reply from Sean J Halford (author)

Thank you!
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Kiltie69
Jan 27 2012 02:22 PM

(Chapter 26 Review)

God Sean you sure now how to tug a heart string or two.  Fantastic chapter, can't wait to see what happens to Dawkins, can't wait to see were this goes.  As always fantastic writing.  

Tom.


View Post Reply from Sean J Halford (author)

Thanks. I've particularly enjoyed writing the last few chapters... I must be an evil god to my poor creations...
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Lisa
Jan 27 2012 01:45 PM

(Chapter 26 Review)

Omg, another cliffie! lol But at least this time it's a happy one! :)

I'm so glad Chris is back and apologizing to Caleb. I'm so glad Caleb's dad is ready to tear Dawkin's head off. I'm so glad Caleb's swim team members don't want to swim w/o him. Wow, a lot of good things happened in this chapter!

I can't wait until the Headmaster comes back and hears what happened. I hope he fires Dawkins' ass.

Great chapter Sean! :)

View Post Reply from Sean J Halford (author)

Thanks... I'll *almost* say sorry for all the anguish I've put you through... ;) ... but I'm pleased to give you some breathing space with Chapter 27. Thanks for reading :)
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Conner
Jan 27 2012 01:25 PM

(Chapter 26 Review)

Often, when left to our own devices, we end up joining the "haters" and condem ourselves as well.  Such a horribe place that is.  Posted Image   It's only when people who care about us drag us from that place, sometimes kicking and screaming, are we able to re-balance ourselves and re-discover our self-worth.  It's still tough though.
This chapter is a testament to that.  Wonderful job, Sean!!  Posted Image Posted Image
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Terry P
Jan 27 2012 01:15 PM

(Chapter 26 Review)

Thanks for this chapter.  There are some good people out there after all.  I can't wait for the shit to hit the fan when the headmaster gets back.
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