Faust – Almost, 2008 G.A. Spring Anthology |
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Faust – Almost, 2008 G.A. Spring Anthology |
  March 24 2008, 08:23 PM
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 Hosted Author / Writer Support Lead / Moderator  Group: # Administrator Posts: 7,237 Joined: February 15, 2006 From: Nowhere near a cliff Member No.: 2,141 Gender: Male Age: 36  |
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March 25 2008, 12:46 AM
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Hosted Author / Writer Support Lead / Moderator Group: # Administrator Posts: 7,237 Joined: February 15, 2006 From: Nowhere near a cliff Member No.: 2,141 Gender: Male Age: 36 |
Review by TL The Writing Tiger
On the edge of society and worrying about staying alive is an adequate description of this one. The character is seeking refuge, using masks and shadows to hide. Will he survive, or will he pay the price? I was definitely intrigued by the format. I was on the edge, wondering what delights and woes the journal would reveal unto me. This one is deliciously dark. Read it if you dare! |
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March 30 2008, 07:12 AM
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 Cool Member  Group: Editor:Editor Posts: 269 Joined: December 22, 2003 From: montreal canada Member No.: 102 Gender: Male Age: 23 |
I love the way you wrote that story... it was realy fun to edit
Great work Faust 
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March 30 2008, 10:35 PM
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 Gay Dad / Anthology Coordinator  Group: Moderator: Forum Moderation Team Posts: 5,646 Joined: August 09, 2006 From: Melbourne, Australia Member No.: 3,412 Gender: Male Age: 45 |
It's a great little story. The mixture of journal entries with newspaper articles is very well done. There are a few things left unsaid, such as how the protagonist is constantly found, even after he removed the tracking device (common sense says he would have searched for other such devices after discovering the first one), but that's minor.
I love the ending... almost 
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March 31 2008, 12:32 AM
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 Gold Member  Group: Writer Support: Writer Support Team Posts: 56 Joined: August 06, 2006 From: PG County, MD Member No.: 3,388 Gender: Male Age: 22 |
Thank you to you both. I just wanted to do something here that I have never seen done and from my P.O.V. I think it was well worth the time and effort. I mostly wanted the character to be portrayed as human as possible. I wanted him to be vulnerable and distressed. and follow the entire range of emotions I would expect to feel if i was running for my life. But I thank you for reading and giving feedback. and you too moonwolf. I thank you for helping me to produce the story
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