Moonwolf – Our Time, 2008 G.A. Spring Anthology |
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Moonwolf – Our Time, 2008 G.A. Spring Anthology |
  March 24 2008, 08:34 PM
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 Hosted Author / Writer Support Lead / Moderator  Group: # Administrator Posts: 6,900 Joined: February 15, 2006 From: Nowhere near a cliff Member No.: 2,141 Gender: Male Age: 36  |
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March 25 2008, 12:37 AM
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Hosted Author / Writer Support Lead / Moderator Group: # Administrator Posts: 6,900 Joined: February 15, 2006 From: Nowhere near a cliff Member No.: 2,141 Gender: Male Age: 36 |
Review by TL The Writing Tiger
This is a truly beautiful poem about struggling through life until you find the other half of your soul. Call me a helpless romantic, but I thought it was one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. 
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March 29 2008, 08:54 AM
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 Cool Member  Group: Advanced Member Posts: 384 Joined: December 08, 2007 From: New York, NY and Ann Member No.: 6,103 Gender: Male Age: 32 |
A truly lovely poem, it really recaptured the emotions of a very special weekend.
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March 29 2008, 05:13 PM
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 The Devil's Advocate  Group: Promising: Promising Author Posts: 1,369 Joined: September 12, 2007 From: Montreal, Canada Member No.: 5,830 Gender: Male Age: 22 |
A really nice, heartwarming poem it is. It's thoughtful from the very start to the end. You describe very well the painful steps that led the way to something magical!
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March 29 2008, 08:19 PM
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 Sweet Candy Girl  Group: Author: Author Posts: 832 Joined: February 05, 2008 From: Arizona Member No.: 6,328 Gender: Female Age: 24 |
*dabs at eyes* I've said it once, and I'll say it again. This is a beautiful poem. Well done, moonwolf.
 I love it so much.
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March 29 2008, 08:37 PM
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 Gay Dad / Anthology Coordinator  Group: Moderator: Forum Moderation Team Posts: 5,180 Joined: August 09, 2006 From: Melbourne, Australia Member No.: 3,412 Gender: Male Age: 45 |
That's great, Jason. I was very pleased to have gotten to read it early. The idea of walls to protect your inner self is a well known one, but it's still very true. The fact that it's autobiographical in nature just increases the power of the poem. Well done!
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March 30 2008, 02:00 AM
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 Cool Member  Group: Editor:Editor Posts: 264 Joined: December 22, 2003 From: montreal canada Member No.: 102 Gender: Male Age: 23 |
you guys... thanks...
 really from the bottom of my heart thank you... that poem was really emotionnal for me when I wrote it... I think this must be the most personnal piece I have ever written and shared for anyone to see... Thank you for taking the time to read it, it's trully appreciated Jason aka Moonwolf |
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March 30 2008, 07:58 AM
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 Author/Editor/Beta Reader Group: Author: Author Posts: 3,598 Joined: December 11, 2006 From: Chandigarh, India Member No.: 4,164 Gender: Male Age: 17 |
QUOTE (C James @ March 25 2008, 11:07 AM)  Review by TL The Writing Tiger This is a truly beautiful poem about struggling through life until you find the other half of your soul. Call me a helpless romantic, but I thought it was one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. I concur... I am a hopeless romantic and this poem drove the point right home... Left me with a wuzzy feeling and more so, because both the poet and his partner are very close friends of mine.... I am sure this would not have been easy to write, Jason. But you still delivered it beautifully...  BeaStKid |
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April 5 2008, 07:51 AM
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Cool Member Group: Editor:Editor Posts: 264 Joined: December 22, 2003 From: montreal canada Member No.: 102 Gender: Male Age: 23 |
QUOTE (BeaStKid @ March 30 2008, 08:58 AM) I concur... I am a hopeless romantic and this poem drove the point right home... Left me with a wuzzy feeling and more so, because both the poet and his partner are very close friends of mine.... I am sure this would not have been easy to write, Jason. But you still delivered it beautifully... BeaStKid Sorry for that delay without responding BK.. it hasn't been easy to write but I guess I managed to make something good about our time together... the way it happenned, how it happenned... as for it being beautiful don't thank me thank Sacha instead... he's the light in all this Jason aka Moonwolf |
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