stonerboy

Oh, holy hell. That was really good. At the end, I felt like I was standing on that beach, alone, at night, with a cold, strong shore wind blowing past me.

mrow.

Welcome to adulthood! You need Urban Dictionary. Merry Christmasizzle, fo shizzle!

the sound of crickets in here is deafening...

Of course, there is such a thing as blogging too little...

As Dan Savage might say: DTMFA.

That's an awfully large topic. Can you point to more specific issues or questions? BTW, I'm not sure this is the appropriate forum for this question, since it doesn't address Dom's stories. You might want to try one of the forums on the main Gay Authors page. Edit - This Thread was moved to the GENERAL forum. - Vic

Be nice to us, please. Our mildly corrupt but competent pro-gay government was replaced today by a bunch of conservative wingnuts. We need hot chocolate. And new chapters.

I concur with Raz and Tarantio. I think Jim has done a very adept, light-handed job in smoothing out the rough edges of DD, but the revision of TLW doesn't ring true. It's a bit too staccato, and lacks that certain Dom-ish rhythm. Trust your writing skills, Dom. A million Domophiles can't all be wrong.