Well it's up, and kind of interesting - OAT + TGT.



Nice

Stupid Owen and stupid Aiden!

Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter. As much as I love Travis, I am very attached to the TLW characters.

LOL that was an interesting chapter, I wonder what it was exactly that Owen wanted to say to Aiden, and thank god for Travis.

I love Travis.


That is all.

Travis was indeed nifty in this chapter.

I love the direction this story is taking!! I think I'm just a sucker for the relationship side of Dom's stories. Great chapter.

Great chapter, Dom!

Travis is becoming more likeable. Although his behavior is sometimes peculiar, he seems thoughtful of others, especially of Aiden and Owen's fractured relationship. In earlier chapters, he was hitting on both of them; now he is seeking to get them to talk to each other and dragging Owen away from a likely confrontation. Maybe that's because of his night in Dennis' bed. Are Travis and Dennis headed for some kind of commitment or is Travis satisfied with an occasional one night stand?

Ready for chapter 16.

I hope Travis and Dennis are heading towards something more. Travis might think it's nothing special, but I'm guessing he'll get there eventually.

I got all riled up by the end of this chapter, I expected Owen to walk in there and kick Aidens ass for some reason. lol I was expecting that...thank god for Travis. Travis is become VERY lickable now.

Lol Travis got some finally and I couldn't help smiling during that part of the chapter. The whole 'FAKER' part made me laugh, I wonder if Dennis and Owen will talk about it later in Chapter 16. Hmm?

I think that is reserved for Gordon right now.

Of course as we witness life, many of out attitudes , approaches and reactions change over time. I think this is happenning to Travis, remembering of course this is just a piece of fiction.

Ahh... Has Dennis kept something from all of us... hm.. hmm .hmm... Naughty Dennis.

This also makes Kurt curious.

Kurt

It was hinted in TLW that Dennis had fooled around with Leo. I'd always assumed that 'fooling around' consisted of casual experimentation - mutual masturbation or perhaps even traded blow jobs, but no more. However, Travis' little tribute to the jar of Vaseline certainly made it clear that he and Dennis had gone all the way, which sure seems to suggest that Dennis has had real experience.

I wonder who was the bottom.

Also likeable.



Vaseline? Maybe Valentine.

Now there's a freudian slip if there ever was one. Sorry, Altimexis, no vaseline this time around.

By the way, never use Crisco as a lubricant. It's shortening.

WOW!

I LOVE DENNIS AND TRAVIS and hope that they're relationship becomes deeper than that.

O and I doubt I'm alone in being disapointed that we didnt get to witness Travis' skilled seduction method... I mean how did he get Dennis into bed the night before and who did who?

Shortening? Who in his right mind would...

So at the end Owen & Aiden will be together again, just as in TLW

And Travis and Dennis will be together and Valentine as an interested third party

But what will happen to the young Reilly? Will he be the only one that stays alone?

The story is getting more interesting with each chapter.

You're not.... Hope we eventually get to read all about it in the next couple of chapters...

I third that... Travis must have been pretty convincing...

...or Dennis pretty horny.

Travis is a strange cat. Once you think you got him figured out he goes out of his way to help Owen and really Aiden also

I fourth that...

But remember when Dom asked his fans about whether they enjoyed reading the sex scenes? Lot's of people were saying they didn't read them or that they skipped them over . Apparently Dom listened.

Take Care ®,

Vic

People totally lie. Nobody on the planet skips Dom's sex scenes. They aren't the backbone of his stories... but they do rock.

LOL I skip... It just doesn't appeal to me.

Did Hell just freeze over, or are you the victim of identity theft??

Sharon

I started writing 'maybe because your female' then I was like wait a minute ... I'm female

Same, usually. I read the first few in TLW, but not many of the other ones.

Hear hear! I mean how can you possibly _not_ read his sex scenses, when his "kissing" scenes are already that... yummy!

Luv them.

Cheers,
Joana

Well here's hoping Dom will write at least a few steamy scenes between Travis and Dennis...

Hey Menzo,

I can understand the ladies skipping the sex scenes, but 20yo gay boys skipping them?

Cause I gotta tell ya, Dom writes good gay sex.

To each his own I guess

Take Care®,

Vic

Haha, if I wanted to, erm, ...you know, I'd go to nifty. I read Dom's stuff for the plot and the character development and phenomenal-ness. (And, reading 1500+ word gay sex scenes gets tiresome.) Also, never having a sex scene with Luke and Rory was a soul-crushing experience that turned me off sex-scenes from Dom

I'm soooo sorry I teased a fellow LRITEr. Your justification for skipping Dom sex scenes is entirely appropriate.

LOL but Rory and Luke weren't together...

Anyways I don't have a problem with them, I'm just more in a rush to see what happens next, I read the scenes that lead up to it, and after it, but not 'it'. LOL.

But sometimes when I read the story again I read it all... but I just read... it doesnt really do anything for me...

That's the problem!

<3 to Vic for being an LRITEr! (I personally hold out hope for them in a sequel )

Somehow I feel like I'm going to get totally blamed for this... don't know why!!!

I would have like to have read about what happened in Dennis' room. It would have filled in some holes about what we know about Dennis who is my favourite character. I would have rather read about what Dennis did once Travis was gone and how he reacted when Reilly went to seen him....

I'm hoping that Travis and Dennis end up in something long term... it would be good for both of them (plus it would suit the romantic in me!)

Steve

Dennis, your favourite character??????

While I like Dennis & Travis together, and am glad that Dennis isn't quite the jerk he was in TLW, I still can't forgive him for how he 'Bullied' Aiden, Owen, Riley and countless others in High School.

Delivering Pizzas and living in a basement? His ass needs to perform a lot more penance and have a lot more suffering before he can be forgiven.

Take Care®,

Vic

More a pounding eh

I like Seth and Rory a as a couple but have to say would like to see a threesome with them


Dennis to me is becoming more lovable

HAHA, I gotta agree with you there, Vic.

great to see ya



How delightfully dirty of you, Drew!

I guess we all know what theory Drew holds with regards to who bottomed.

I can't wait for the next chapter...well I suppose I can, but I'd rather not!
Have an awesome day and
Take care (unregistered) all
-Kevin

Pretty soon I'll have to get back into reading this story... I dropped it when school picked up again, and then got into reading Lydon's Falcon Banner Series, halfway through book 3 now.

The real problem will be figuring out exactly where I left off LOL.

I didn't particularily like Dennis in TLW but Dom has managed to make him a sympathetic character by this point in the story... and Owen & Aiden should be thankful I'm not a character in the story as I would have pulled a Lacey type move and cornered them in a room, yelled at them about being stubborn idiots and then locked them in until they talked. Owen I like at this point of the story since he's befriending Dennis against all popular opinion and alternates between brooding and obsessive about Adian ( who just plain annoys me at this point).

oh, and my thinking is how would Travis know that Dennis was experienced in gay sex:



if Dennis didn't bottom for Travis?

Steve

Ummmm, maybe Dennis didn't gag when he took Travis' entire len...errrmmm, nevermind.

Take Care®,

Vic

He lost his gag reflex