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Xiao_Chun

May 28 2007, 01:42 PM

Will Phillip leave Jarred to be with Andrew?

Here is a quote from Ch. 2 of My Jump Off, Jarred's words about Phillip:

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If there was one thing I could do well, it was that I could control my boyfriend. Sure, he snapped at me from time to time, but anytime I wanted to, I could make him back off just by changing my tone and being forceful. One time, while we were having an argument, he didn’t back down the way I wanted him to, so I reached out and slapped his face. It wasn’t hard, but it was enough to make him sit quietly in a stunned state while I told him why he earned it. It was the only time I ever felt like I had to do it, but I knew that in the future, if I ever had to, I could simply give him another slap across the face and he’d shut up.

So in the relationship between Jarred and Phillip, Jarred is the dominating one. It seems to me that Phillip is not fully satisfied with this kind of relationship.

With Andrew things are different. Andrew is gentle, submissive, faminine, bottom; exactly what Phillip wants. I can't wait to see how things will work out at the end.

Awesome job Nick

Michael.

Conner

May 28 2007, 11:14 PM

Speaking of faminine, there was a faminous period between the last chapter and this one.

While this story is intriguing (as in I'm totally hooked), I can't see it ending on anything approaching a happy note. It's a triangle of betrayal. I'm reminded of the old adage "Oh, the tangled webs we weave, when we practice to deceive." (Sir Walter Scott).

Conner

Bondwriter

May 29 2007, 11:21 AM

Yes, I won't take bets on the ending. I loved the party scene, and the unspoken matters that will arise. It looks like Phillip is really in love, so will he eventually drop Jarred? If the one who'll finish with Andrew is the one who gets most love-making screen time, though, it looks like Phillip is the winner. But who knows of the devious tricks authors might play on us?

NickolasJames8

July 16 2007, 07:51 PM

QUOTE (Bondwriter @ May 29 2007, 12:21 PM)

Yes, I won't take bets on the ending. I loved the party scene, and the unspoken matters that will arise. It looks like Phillip is really in love, so will he eventually drop Jarred? If the one who'll finish with Andrew is the one who gets most love-making screen time, though, it looks like Phillip is the winner. But who knows of the devious tricks authors might play on us?

Bwuahahahaha!!!!!!

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