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Jay
Chapters 17 & 18 are up!
Lychee
LOl yay two chapters, the movie part was pretty funny... And Owen's reaction at the time. Gosh and then when they let him lead them out of that track I was like noooo... Love Owen when his not obsessing over Aiden.

And wow Travis and Dennis... lots of bonding in this chapter.
JSmith
Only took you guys 7 minutes to find them this time. I'm impressed.
raz
I love Travis and Dennis so much! Ahhhh thanks, Dom, for posting two chapters this time around. They were amazing. I can't get over how good they were, actually. biggrin.gif
NaperVic
yay!!!! worshippy.gif worshippy.gif

I was planning on reading one and saving Ch 18 for later, but I have no self control.

There were sooooo many good parts & lines in both chapters, I don't know what to focus on wacko.gif .
writeincode
thumbsupsmileyanim.gif thumbsupsmileyanim.gif

And I'd like to mention...very maturely of course... that we now know who f**ked whom!!! tongue.gif
Bardeara
QUOTE (JSmith @ May 29 2007, 01:13 AM) *
Only took you guys 7 minutes to find them this time. I'm impressed.



Dude, are you impressed because of the speed it took, or rather how long it took?

Personally I think they like have call waiting to alert each other that the chapters have gone up.
Bardeara
QUOTE (NaperVic @ May 29 2007, 10:25 AM) *
yay!!!! worshippy.gif worshippy.gif

I was planning on reading one and saving Ch 18 for later, but I have no self control.

There were sooooo many good parts & lines in both chapters, I don't know what the focus on wacko.gif .


You know what Vic, I think that's actually the first time I've seen you lost for words. Actually, I'm interested in the little images Dom hasn't written... I have to wonder who's the top/bottom or do they share in the moment. Oh yes, and I have to wonder if Travis carries condoms because, lets face it Dennis up until now had no need to carry them.

Coming up next chapter, "the talk" between Owen and Chris and maybe even Travis and Kyle if were lucky.
Rabble_Rouser
Two chapters help salvage what up until now has been a crappy day! thumbsupsmileyanim.gif <sigh> I really hope that Dennis comes to grips with his relationship with Travis. Did anyone else find it funny that Dennis gets really uncomfortable being with Travis and retreats into his closet to rummage around?

I'm also pretty sure I'm not the only one who was shouting at the monitor to tell Dennis that he should not be following Owen in the forest at night!!! Maybe Owen neglected to tell him the story of going camping with his brothers when he was young.

Steve
I luv Dom
It would seem Dennis now likes Travis wub.gif

OMG I can't wait for more now!!!


That is all.
writeincode
QUOTE (Rabble_Rouser @ May 29 2007, 03:25 PM) *
Did anyone else find it funny that Dennis gets really uncomfortable being with Travis and retreats into his closet to rummage around?

I expected Travis to make a comment about it.
NaperVic
This is one of my favo(u)rite parts of Ch 17 - An exchange between Travis & Owen:

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“You know how before I said I like you, and I’m trying to do you a favor?”

“Travis...” Owen started skeptically, only to be cut off.

“I’m doing you another one. Don’t take things so... personally. If people piss you off, let ‘em know it. Be as loud as you damn well please if it makes you feel better. But if you’re gonna get mad, don’t do it because you assume people do things you don’t like just to hurt you.”


Travis is an extremely observant guy and I'm liking him more and more as the chapters go by. thumbsupsmileyanim.gif

Take Care®,

Vic
canundra
Yay for Travis and Dennis! biggrin.gif

I'm really liking how it's turning out.

Besides the ending of Chapter 18, my favorite part would be when they see Lacy and Chris in the car. I burst out laughing when I found out it was Lacy's car they saw. tongue.gif
Kurt
Frickin' amazing!
raz
I was a little worried that they were going to come across Aiden getting comfortable with someone.
NaperVic
QUOTE (Bardeara @ May 29 2007, 09:07 AM) *
... I have to wonder who's the top/bottom or do they share in the moment.


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QUOTE (writeincode @ May 29 2007, 07:59 AM) *
And I'd like to mention...very maturely of course... that we now know who f**ked whom!!! tongue.gif


Hey Sophie, it appears that Bardie not only skips the sex scenes, but he's skipping the arguments about sex too!!!

QUOTE (Domluka ITFB Ch 17)
“It’s too bad,” Travis suddenly said. “I knew you’d be the worst kind of closet case, but I actually believed that f**king you wouldn’t complicate...”


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NickolasJames8
I just have one question........ Where In The World Is Tony??????
NickolasJames8
Okay. one more thing....what's the deal with Reilly?? Is he still on the prowl for Aiden?? I mean, if he was, this would be the perfect time to make his move pickaxe.gif pickaxe.gif pickaxe.gif
Kanaye
QUOTE (NickolasJames8 @ June 3 2007, 09:43 AM) *
Okay. one more thing....what's the deal with Reilly?? Is he still on the prowl for Aiden?? I mean, if he was, this would be the perfect time to make his move pickaxe.gif pickaxe.gif pickaxe.gif


Why isnt Reilly dating someone! Or at least liking someone! Reilly come on! Get those hormones movin'!
MikeL
QUOTE (NickolasJames8 @ June 3 2007, 08:39 AM) *
I just have one question........ Where In The World Is Tony??????


With Jake maybe. Some couples stay together.
NickolasJames8
QUOTE (MikeL @ June 4 2007, 06:30 PM) *
With Jake maybe. Some couples stay together.



lol...i get that part....what I don't get is where they are in the story. Are they still on vacation?? How long is it supposed to last?
NaperVic
QUOTE (NickolasJames8 @ June 4 2007, 03:33 PM) *

lol...i get that part....what I don't get is where they are in the story. Are they still on vacation?? How long is it supposed to last?


While it seems like ITFB has been going for a lo(n)g time, I think that only 1 or 2 weeks has passed in story time. Plus Jake and Tony are twentysomething gay guys, they have all the vacation time in the world. Then again, shouldn't Tony be in school? blink.gif .

Also, for story purposes, it helps to have Tony away. If he were around, he'd be too grounding of an influence on Owen. Owen needs Tony away in order to be a bit psycho.

Take Care®,

Vic
NickolasJames8
QUOTE (NaperVic @ June 4 2007, 06:38 PM) *
While it seems like ITFB has been going for a lo(n)g time, I think that only 1 or 2 weeks has passed in story time. Plus Jake and Tony are twentysomething gay guys, they have all the vacation time in the world. Then again, shouldn't Tony be in school? blink.gif .

Also, for story purposes, it helps to have Tony away. If he were around, he'd be too grounding of an influence on Owen. Owen needs Tony away in order to be a bit psycho.

Take Care®,

Vic

hmmmm.....I think Owen was a lot more psycotic in The Lo(n)g Way than he is right now. I mean, even though he's all flipped out about Aiden and Travis and Reilly and their upcoming three way, he's actually been one of the more stable characters in this story.
AFriendlyFace
QUOTE (NaperVic @ June 4 2007, 05:38 PM) *
While it seems like ITFB has been going for a lo(n)g time, I think that only 1 or 2 weeks has passed in story time. Plus Jake and Tony are twentysomething gay guys, they have all the vacation time in the world.

LOL, this is true. Personally I feel like I've been on a vacation of sorts for over a year now tongue.gif

Actually though if I remember correctly Tony and Jake are supposed to be on a VERY extended vacation. Aren't they like touring Europe or something for like the whole summer (or longer)? I know Owen and Aiden were still together when they left.
QUOTE (NaperVic @ June 4 2007, 05:38 PM) *
Also, for story purposes, it helps to have Tony away. If he were around, he'd be too grounding of an influence on Owen. Owen needs Tony away in order to be a bit psycho.

QUOTE (NickolasJames8 @ June 4 2007, 05:51 PM) *
hmmmm.....I think Owen was a lot more psycotic in The Lo(n)g Way than he is right now. I mean, even though he's all flipped out about Aiden and Travis and Reilly and their upcoming three way, he's actually been one of the more stable characters in this story.

Hmm, I think Vic definitely has a point, but I mostly agree with Nick. I mean I think that supposedly if Tony had been there he'd have made sure that Owen and Aiden talked things out by now, but as far as "grounding" someone, I personally think it's Chris that is benefited/effected/whatever most by this particular plot device. I mean with Tony around I have a feeling Chris and Lacy's relationship either wouldn't have started at all or would be further along now.

Just my thoughts,
Kevin
Rabble_Rouser
Owen doesn't seem to able to benefit from talking about things to Ben because he's too close to the situation to give the advice he wants too...

Not that it would ever happen in a month of Sundays but Dennis could really use a few sessions with Ben.

Steve
NaperVic
QUOTE (AFriendlyFace @ June 4 2007, 05:20 PM) *
Aren't they like touring Europe or something for like the whole summer (or longer)? I know Owen and Aiden were still together when they left.


Ummm read.gif , there have been several references to snow and such (remember when Travis was sledding with Dennis & the Chelsey's), and I believe there was a reference to a date being in February. So maybe Tony is a taking a semester off or something from school.

Take Care®,

Vic
MikeL
QUOTE
His morning hadn’t started as peacefully as it had the last time he’d begun it beneath the Chesleys’ roof. But, that was probably because this time, he’d fallen asleep. It was a general rule for him to avoid doing that anywhere that wasn’t his own room, but lying there in the dark, comfortably warm as he listened to the slow pace of Dennis’s breathing and Valentine’s snoring below the bed had his eyes drifting, and then he’d slipped away. It had only been for a short time--an hour at most if he’d looked at the clock correctly. But it had still been long enough for him to forget where he was, and the sound of unfamiliar pipes whining behind the walls had startled him into reaching for his flashlight, which wasn’t there.

He’d calmed himself quickly, and ten minutes later after cracking the blinds to allow a little morning light into the room, he was sitting on the edge of the bed, his back comfortably against Dennis’s side and wearing pants that weren’t his low on his hips where they’d fallen after he failed to zip them up.


There's the flashlight again. Travis may or may not be afraid of the dark, but the flashlight is some sort of security blanket. It is a connection to Allan as is the little strip of photos. Now he seems to have another security blanket...Dennis.
NaperVic
QUOTE (MikeL @ June 5 2007, 01:13 AM) *
There's the flashlight again. Travis may or may not be afraid of the dark, but the flashlight is some sort of security blanket. It is a connection to Allan as is the little strip of photos. Now he seems to have another security blanket...Dennis.


Pennies seem to be a quirk for Travis too. I was thinking that he used the pennies to jam between the door and the opening, either as a way to lock in/out Bill & Sara, or as an early warning (when the door opened, the pennies would fall and make a lot of noise).

I'm not sure what else they could be used for blink.gif .

Take Care®,

Vic
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