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tales
Just wrote my first short story, Just a Trim..., modern romance, if I categorized correctly. Don't know how to put a direct link to it here. Comments on appropriateness of rating, etc, appreciated. Thanks.
Graeme
Link: Stories by tales

I've given the link to tales' author page, rather than the story itself, because of the content warning.

A nice little story. Well written with lots of clear detail. I think labeling it as adult is too harsh -- it's an M rating but you didn't describe anything explicitly so I don't think you need to give it an MA.

Keep writing, tales! smile.gif
tales
Thanks, Graeme. Based on his comment, I've updated the rating to M. Other comments, let me know.
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