Full Version: Rich Boy:Awakening
... ugh... I don't know what to think of that one.
if i was michael i'd go to bed and cry myself to sleep 
he wants to let go of jeremy, nooo T__T
he wants to let go of jeremy, nooo T__T
BTW, I really didn't like what happened in this chapter...but sometimes I have to write the story as it comes out, not the way I'd prefer the story to go...
QUOTE (dkstories @ September 27 2007, 09:04 PM) 
BTW, I really didn't like what happened in this chapter...but sometimes I have to write the story as it comes out, not the way I'd prefer the story to go...
Wow
This is the best evidence that your characters are "live" beside you. Only the best authors are able to let them live as they want and not as the author want it.
Fine story DK, and thanks for the publication rate
Great chapter!
I thought Stacy was rather harsh with Michael when she said Rob was meant for "your path, not mine." Anyway, Micheal didn't seem upset by it. He seemed more concerned that he's have to teach the dude.
I'll tell you one thing, spell "delivery" just got a lot more fascinating.
Michael's decision around his relationship with Jeremy kinda sucks.
He can't see himself being faithful to Jeremy. It seems Michaet has already forgotten Jamie's words from the night before....
Anyway, I have to give Michael the benefit of the doubt though....at least for now. Jeremy is not going to do well at all when he hears it from Michael.
This chapter's best line came from Mike, Michael's wrestling opponent...."Nice cock."
Conner
I thought Stacy was rather harsh with Michael when she said Rob was meant for "your path, not mine." Anyway, Micheal didn't seem upset by it. He seemed more concerned that he's have to teach the dude.
I'll tell you one thing, spell "delivery" just got a lot more fascinating.
Michael's decision around his relationship with Jeremy kinda sucks.
He can't see himself being faithful to Jeremy. It seems Michaet has already forgotten Jamie's words from the night before....QUOTE
“Look, loving someone is not weakness. If it was, Light Mages would not ever get anything done. Most of our magic is based on one form of love or another. Love can be a strength, too, if you use it right.”
Anyway, I have to give Michael the benefit of the doubt though....at least for now. Jeremy is not going to do well at all when he hears it from Michael.
This chapter's best line came from Mike, Michael's wrestling opponent...."Nice cock."
Conner
Wow, so some of Worthington escaped in that little episode, and Micheal really never had any control of it. It makes me wonder if Michael, or Worthington was the one to decided to bond him.
Earlier on in the story I asked a question about if you could control someone's mind to have sex with you, would it be a good thing or a bad thing.
I think as this story goes on, I am 100% convinced that it is a bad thing.
Many more chapters like that one Dan, and you might have to put a parental warning up first .
Not that the chapter was bad, but what Michael seems to be slowly turning into, the former Worthington, is a little scary.
Looking forward to the next chapter as I want Michael to get control of the geas and start acting like a respectful boyfriend once again. I know, big hopes on my part.
Steve
Earlier on in the story I asked a question about if you could control someone's mind to have sex with you, would it be a good thing or a bad thing.
I think as this story goes on, I am 100% convinced that it is a bad thing.
Many more chapters like that one Dan, and you might have to put a parental warning up first
.Not that the chapter was bad, but what Michael seems to be slowly turning into, the former Worthington, is a little scary.
Looking forward to the next chapter as I want Michael to get control of the geas and start acting like a respectful boyfriend once again. I know, big hopes on my part.
Steve
QUOTE (wildone @ September 28 2007, 12:51 AM)
Earlier on in the story I asked a question about if you could control someone's mind to have sex with you, would it be a good thing or a bad thing.
I think as this story goes on, I am 100% convinced that it is a bad thing.
I think as this story goes on, I am 100% convinced that it is a bad thing.
I agree. Freewill always brings a sweeter 'taste' than force, but I think that those who thrive on force will always prefer that.
QUOTE (wildone @ September 28 2007, 12:51 AM)
Looking forward to the next chapter as I want Michael to get control of the geas and start acting like a respectful boyfriend once again. I know, big hopes on my part.
Oh Wildone - have you read NONE of DK's other stories?
Gods above and below, y'all make me sound like a monster!
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