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Whispers
by Hylas
If I die today, bring me not to heaven,
Nor drag me down to hell,
But bring me to my beloved,
So I may whisper the words,
I've never had the heart,
To tell him in life
I love you forever...
by Hylas
If I die today, bring me not to heaven,
Nor drag me down to hell,
But bring me to my beloved,
So I may whisper the words,
I've never had the heart,
To tell him in life
I love you forever...
This is beautiful! It reminds me of "What Dreams May Come" and Dante's Inferno. It's a very romantic thought that even death, heaven, and hell cannot succeed in separating lovers.
Wonderful job, Hylas
-Kevin
I love this piece. But unlike Kevin who said
This is beautiful! It reminds me of "What Dreams May Come" and Dante's Inferno. It's a very romantic thought that even death, heaven, and hell cannot succeed in separating lovers.
I don't believe this piece was about love overcoming death. I think it actually goes the other way. The author is telling us to have the guts to say those things we should have during life. I really like this.
Jason R.
This is beautiful! It reminds me of "What Dreams May Come" and Dante's Inferno. It's a very romantic thought that even death, heaven, and hell cannot succeed in separating lovers.
I don't believe this piece was about love overcoming death. I think it actually goes the other way. The author is telling us to have the guts to say those things we should have during life. I really like this.
Jason R.
yep Jason R is right, Kevin (may I call you that? 
AFriendlyFace is too long hehe). It's more about getting courage while still alive. 
Thanks, and glad you both liked it.
AFriendlyFace is too long hehe). It's more about getting courage while still alive. Thanks, and glad you both liked it.
QUOTE (Hylas @ October 19 2007, 03:32 PM) 
Kevin (may I call you that? AFriendlyFace is too long hehe).
AFriendlyFace is too long hehe).Of course please do!
QUOTE (Hylas @ October 19 2007, 03:32 PM)
It's more about getting courage while still alive. Thanks, and glad you both liked it.
Thanks, and glad you both liked it.Well that's a lovely thought too!
Way to go
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