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Ieshwar
My Dark Prince

I saw him the other day,
Amongst the tears and pains
He stood there, passive and still
Those black pools, long hair, pale face,
Everything pulled me towards him

After that I was never the same
I was the shark that had tasted blood
Every day, every night, I thought of him
I wanted him, even at the price of my life
I looked for him, yearned for him

I heard stories about him, false stories
He was another victim of man’s mind
They said he was cruel, pitiless
But all he did was to salvage
And I yearn for salvation

I found it- the love potion
Which will give me my Dark Prince
I’m going to be his
He’s going to be mine
We are going to be one, forever!


Ieshwar
The Reaper
I like a poem with no periods or anything, it leaves it open to personal interpretation (about the dynamics of the sentences) wither puts pressure on the lyrics, and when the lyrics are powerful it means so much more.bravo
ixyam
This is beautiful Ieshwar , darn ! now I have to look you up for more worshippy.gif
Ieshwar
Sorry for being late!

Reaper said:
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I like a poem with no periods or anything, it leaves it open to personal interpretation (about the dynamics of the sentences) wither puts pressure on the lyrics, and when the lyrics are powerful it means so much more.bravo


Thanks! I never bothered putting much punctuation in poetry. Never understood is it should be period or comma!

ixyam said:
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This is beautiful Ieshwar , darn ! now I have to look you up for more


Thanks a lot! blush1.gif

Ieshwar
AFriendlyFace
Great poem, Ieshwar!!

But don't leave us in suspense! I'm dying to know what happened after the protagonist made the potion!!

Awesome job! Really good imagery! specool.gif

-Kevin
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