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MikeL
Chapter 22 and Chapter 23 have been posted.

Two more great chapters, Dan. I particularly enjoyed Worthington's negotiations with Domas the dark dwarf. At least he didn't lose his shirt. He also has to test his wits against the Demon Lord and a real life DHS agent. Lot's of intriguing twists and turns in these chapters.
Rabble_Rouser
An excellent couple of Chapters!!! It was good to see the Light Mages start to recognize Worthington's and Jamie's contribution to protecting the community. I'm eager to see what Rob can do since he's being trained by Worthington to be a bodyguard\solder Mage.

Steve
Conner
I guess I should have known that the government would get involved in all this. thumbsdownsmileyanim.gif There's a lot to be said for having a spry young body...to tempt others with, that is. tongue.gif Another government official who couldn't keep his dick in his pants.... although, this time it was outside the oral office. whistle.gif

Ok, so Worthington was holding his own with the Demon Lord, then Jamie became available, why didn't they go for a kill on the Demon Lord? wacko.gif All the Demon Lord offered was to exclude Worthington and all identified by him from the demon attacks. Not really a great deal, in my view. It strikes me demons are far worse at keeping deals than the dwarfs .

It's a curious offer though. It exculpates Uncle Sinclair as being the summoner....I think. Yes, something quite sinister is going on. I think Worthington should have a threesome with Jamie and Jeremy...you know...just in case things don't go well at the meeting with the Demon Lord. cool.gif

I hope Worthington thanked Jamie for his increased girth. biggrin.gif I wonder if Jeremy knows about that yet. ohmy.gif

Again, great chapters, Dan! worshippy.gif

Conner
MikeL
QUOTE (Conner @ November 2 2007, 09:04 PM) *
.... although, this time it was outside the oral office. whistle.gif

I hope Worthington thanked Jamie for his increased girth. biggrin.gif I wonder if Jeremy knows about that yet. ohmy.gif

Was that a Freudian slip or did you not intend to say "oval office"?

I think Jeremy knows about Worthington and Jamie especially since he's been taking nude pictures of them as they slept.
Rad
Hi Dan,

just finished reading this story.
Wow....all the magic, mages, demons. It's like Harry Potter with sex. Oh & I always love the sex smile.gif but seriously? I was hooked.

Worthington, his life, his journey, his love. Jamie, Jeremy, Brandon & Rob. BTW I found how he "tamed" Rob really sexy. Also how he let Rob worships his cock, lol! laugh.gif

I have to tell you though that I was quite taken aback by Worthington's many incarnations =) losing directions there. Lemme see..... Worthington, Mikie, Mike? But I find his dedication to his family comforting. Also, his defiant attitude towards Light Magic. He was Dark & proud of it =)

Looking forward for more Dan! Also, looking for more of Davey & BRian wink.gif wub.gif

Cheers!

Rad
wildone
Interesting couple of Chapters Dan specool.gif .

I still get the feeling that Worthington/Mikey may be more powerful than both the Light and Dark Mages give him credit for. Although he is still using Dark magic, he seems to be doing it with a conscious. Could he be the one to maybe unite the two sides in the end? It seems the history that you have given, with the exception of the demon wars, that the two sides generally dislike each others.

As for Norman, the DHS agent, I'm curious if when Mikey had control of him with his dick in his mouth, if he maybe should have ripped his pants down, spun him around, and spread his butt cheeks to see who was really behind (no pun intended) the government involvement.

It seems his Uncle will go to any length to get at the family fortune and eliminate Worthington. He already has a Judge and court investigator in his back pocket, so what other government officials may he have under his influence.

I also picked up on something that may be a bit of foretelling in the conversation with Barry. When Barry inquired about Jeremy being okay with Worthington wedding a female, he didn't come out with a resounding "No Problem". Could it be that this is going to be a major problem in the future?

Thanks for the two chapters, as usual, can't wait for more.

Steve cool.gif
Lugh
heh you go DK...
excellent writs.
pitchan
Wierd thing happened the other day. I was online on gtalk, and my friend asked me what I was doing so I told him I'm reading the new chapters of this story. He was interested in the plot and he told me he actually wouldn't mind reading the story if only it didn't have the gay sex. Still he asked me to summarise the whole story for him without all the innuendo and sex. Said it sounded complex tongue.gif
Nice update Dan! Why am I not surprised that the government makes a foray into the story? xD
GN-001 Gundam Exia
I really liked the newest chapters to Rich Boy: Awakening. I have just been thinking this question since I finished reading Ch. 22 & 23. Why doesn't Worthington just do the mind rape/ torture or the blood bonding to bond Norman to himself? This way Worthington can have time to discover whats behind Norman's mind barrier while at the same time get a new magic teacher since Jones isn't coming anytime soon and a useful pawn at least for the time being. Also when is Jaime's fantasy of a brotherly double team going to finally come to pass?
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