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Tarin
I'm pretty sure this is where to do this?
I ended up pretty happy with this one, so I thought I'd share it with you.


[Bringer of Pain]
upon me you cast
your powerful spell
forever to last
you cast it so well

a lone tear escapes
the memories you evoke
the emotional scrapes
my gentile smiles cloak

great amounts of joy
that a smile can feign
as my heart you destroy
O, Bringer of Pain
AFriendlyFace
QUOTE (Tarin @ November 19 2007, 01:13 AM) *
[Bringer of Pain]
upon me you cast
your powerful spell
forever to last
you cast it so well

a lone tear escapes
the memories you evoke
the emotional scrapes
my gentile smiles cloak

great amounts of joy
that a smile can feign
as my heart you destroy
O, Bringer of Pain

Ohh, very interesting! My guess is that it's about a break-up? In any case I love the rhyme scheme and the general lay out! Way to go specool.gif

-Kevin
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