Shortz
December 22 2007, 11:13 PM
Anybody want to talk? Im up for it.
Conner
December 23 2007, 12:21 AM
You're in the right subforum. You may want to ask one of the mods or admin folks to move this thread to efiction discussion. Your story is in efiction here at GA.
Great start to your story. I did leave you some comments already. Is this your first story?
Conner
Ieshwar
December 23 2007, 04:47 AM
Hmm, the link?

Ieshwar