gstrdr15
April 20 2005, 12:44 AM
This poll will help me in determining how this story ends up and how it's sequel will begin. Please, if you vote, give me a basic description of what you want in a reply.
GR15
ethan thorn
April 20 2005, 12:56 AM
You know the pols here don't let you pick more then one thing so i am just going to say what i would like to see and thats more of everything.
gstrdr15
April 20 2005, 09:31 AM
QUOTE (gstrdr15 @ April 20 2005, 01:44 AM)
This poll will help me in determining how this story ends up and how it's sequel will begin. Please, if you vote, give me a basic description of what you want in a reply.
GR15

THANKS!!!! (He said sarcastically)
GR15
ethan thorn
April 20 2005, 01:02 PM
There i voited armor how ever i still want more of everything.
gstrdr15
April 20 2005, 03:24 PM
QUOTE (ethan thorn @ April 20 2005, 02:02 PM)
There i voited armor how ever i still want more of everything.

Okay, you got it.
GR15
jimboylan
April 20 2005, 05:34 PM
I voted for "Unit Divers", because I am a S.C.U.B.A. diver, and I'm curious what Yakima River diving is like. Are there train and ship wrecks? Do the fish let you touch and feed them?
Most of the other choices also interest me. Legal issues and the relations and interactions of the Unit with the outside world and its people are also interesting. It's nice to escape for a while to a place where kids have a better time than I did at their age.
I like plot, suspense, and continuity more than gratuitous sex. I've already read the Gay Sex Story, so the excerpts that show up in "Kombat Kids" should have something to do with the story and should not be able to easily stand alone. I do want to learn more about the characters. I wonder if any of your loyal readers will appear in the story in some form.
Eventually you will get to the Fall 2004 Turkey Hunt or Shoot, but I hope that isn't the end.
Will the characters from "Nature Walk", now on Nifty and ASSGM, visit your World?
jimboylan Lower Bucks County, Pa.
Gentim
April 23 2005, 05:43 PM
I voted for "Interpersonal Relationships," but really that's only because I had to pick one. I would really like to see more of everything.
Drewbie
April 28 2005, 05:11 PM
I would like to have everthing with some sex. but mostly action and aviation, more traing with the military.
Myr
April 29 2005, 08:28 PM
what I'd like to see more of is the next chapter
acfan
May 5 2005, 08:03 PM
I like the SEAL parts, since I'm ex-Navy (not a SEAL tho). You've got yourself a great group going here; and are doing the one thing which is hard with a cast this size - keeping their personalities and attitudes on track. Having just finished Part One of my own saga "Memories", I know what it is like trying to keep a cast this size organized; I believe you are doing an awesome job.
jamessavik
June 2 2005, 11:26 AM
I'm going to go off the reservation and suggest something not listed: more outreach!
Bring in more kids that need guidance and a safe place to be.
Start other Units: in the South, back East.
Oh yeah-- JAP for President!
Thanks Ghostryder! Love the story.
I would have traded a kidney to have been a part of something like this when I was a kid.
JustynC
July 2 2005, 01:06 PM
I agree with the Everything thing umm like Drew said Sex of course & Training Blood n Guts specially on Daddy Prince . I would love to see that umm ( is cussing allowed here lol ?) go down BIG time . I'm also hoping that Gunney satys somewhat active with the Unit . Ok to break it down it would be Sex Action Training , Intepersonal, Just Everything dude lol . I like Jamessavik's suggestion too And maybe a little more humor I love the part where JAP & Jacky got their barces all tangled up lol Too Kewl
jsand713
July 6 2005, 09:09 PM
I voted for interpersonal relationships, although I like sex and general action too.
John
brax
August 2 2008, 07:21 PM
BLOOD AND GUTS No story involving lots of firearms is any good without a good amount of blood and guts! To be honest Jap's one shot one kill moments were my favorite. Blowing up some heads makes for good reading... but then I'm a crazy gun nut myself so...
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