QUOTE (meg @ June 25 2005, 03:49 AM)
YESSSSSSSSSSS i am done chapter 5!!!! sorry for taking so long. i feel bad.
I sent it to Ann, but i realise that she's not at home or something? and i'm feeling a bit lazy to send it to nifty...cause i forget how. lol. but i'm not sleepy yet so i'll try to go find out. anyhow, it should then maybe be up day after tommorrow on nifty or something...but if its not, then you can e-mail me and i can send it to you or something...but only if you be nice and comment on the story, cause i love feedback
Meg!!!!
Meg,
It's a powerful chapter and very real, raw emotions that I am sure many of us, myself included, can identify with, in wanting love, family and feelings of self worth! It brings tears to my eyes and has given me much food for thought! I loved at the end that David said that he wants what D wants...(notice that D said he wanted a husband). You left us with a cliffhanger to make us wonder is David Gay or Straight! Kinda makes me chuckle and smile but the way he spoons and is so loving and appears to really love D and the way he looks at D makes me hope that he is Gay.
I hope you keep writing because its a very powerful story and to me, IMHO, an ageless one and not just coming of age. My thoughts for saying that is I feel we all worry about self worth issues ("am I worthy and good enough" and want love, family, happiness and the struggles and pains we all feel and that sometimes the loneliness is as you said a low level drip drip daily kind of thing we can get through and sometimes the Joy and Happiness appear fleeting and then when we have them wondering if it will last and do we deserve it while we have it) Its a powerful theme and I can't wait to read more. Thank you for sharing it with us and it is well worth the wait and well worth the read. It sits in my mind and in my heart in a big way. Thank you again for a powerful, amazing chapter and great story...it even had humor in the baseball bat scene and the cute kitten.....Damian and David, IMHO, acted like and looked like happy in love husbands...that makes me smile to no end!
How did you get so much wisdom and insight and so much power in one chapter? WOW!!
Rainbow Hugs and Hershey Kisses and Rainbow Jelly Beans and well, thank you again:)
Michael