I enjoyed writing this quite a bit, and I do hope you all enjoy reading it too. I've gone through and self-edited this so most of the kinks have already been worked out. I may end up making a few subtle changes here and there a bit later though. It was very hard to write this story because I kept getting caught up in action... likewise its been hard to focus on the editing when I'm still getting lost in the story... Please enjoy this little peak into the lives of two young lovers... I know I certainly have

http://www.gayauthors.org/efiction/viewsto...3&warning=5

Edit: As I was writing chapter 3, ideas came to me on how to open this story up into something longer. I went with it and instead of our characters snuggling up peacefully beside each other the end of chapter 3 has them on the edge of disaster. I haven't received a great deal of feedback though so I was wondering if there were many people interested in seeing this story continue or if I should rewrite the ending of chapter three so its more closed off.

I posted a review of this short but wonderful story. I also just finished reading D'Émotion d'Amour and did a review of it. We need to find a way to expose more readers to your stories. I've only read two so far. But I will be reading the rest of them today. I'll tank you in advance for what I'm sure will be an enjoyable afternoon.

You're welcome...

I've been working on getting a bit more exposure, for quite some time I was in a dry spell where I wasn't writing much, but now that I'm back into the swing of writing I'm starting to work more on that.

I just finished Liberty Island. I reviewed it as well. If there's not a discussion thread about this either you or I should start one. That's a great way to let more people know about you and your great stories/poems.

BTW, I wish the stars that show up for a review properly reflected the actual rating. I'm very conservative with my ratings. Anything above five is high praise. And yet when I give you a rating of six only three stars show up. Please keep that in mind when you look at your reviews.

I've kind of put Liberty Island on hold for a while until I get a bit further into some other projects. I am working on it on the side though... just the other day I came up with some great ideas on where to take it...

Part 2 is now posted and available for your enjoyment

I'm heading off to read it right now.

ADDED: I posted a good review Ashton. Thanks for another wonderful chapter about these two lovers. It was great to get a little back story in this chapter. That's as much of a spoiler as I want to post right now.

That was a great chapter. Those two are really hot. It makes me want to find someone to have such a steamy relationship with.

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Chapter 3 now up for possible refit.