is posted

http://deweywriter.com/chapters/dewey/tpw/tpw27.htm

Damn i still feel so bad for these two, I still angry with pete though.

Just wish they could sit down and talk but really talk.

It would appear that Brian is heading for another meltdown. Will he wake up in time to save himself? At least Pete and Brian started talking a little bit. I think they both still need each other. They both still have their demons to get past. Apart, I don't think either one is strong enough to do it.

Jan

Talon you do have a point, Ray is right though also who is going to save him this time? he's not eating, he's working himself up to death again.

Okay, but where is 28? (I love being able to say that when it's not my story!). I really feel for both these guys, and have to say that the perceptions from Brian's perspective are absolutely wonderful. He really is in denial and that's what it looks like a lot of the time.

Hey DK,
"....I love being able to say that when it's not my story..." Hehe... I will remember that if necessary, but I must say that you are really "in time" now with your chapters and I appreciate it
Wonderful story....I followed it from the beginning, sharing the different perspectives of both Brian and Pete, hoping the best and fearing the worst. "They both still have their demons to get past." Thats make the story so "likeable".