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moonwolf
Imagine a world
At his best and at their worst
Memories we share

Scent getting weaker
Oblivion is taking me
Rest is what I need

Raging inferno
You put that fire in us
Snow won’t put it out

Where do I go now?
Expecting things left unspoken
Entomb my sorrow

Time will only tell
If you can forgive my flaws
Extinguish my doubts


hope you guys like it smile.gif

Jason aka Moonwolf
Demetz
I like poems like this.... they make me think, wondering what some things refer to, and then putting everything together as the poem continues, forming a coherent interpretation...

Very nice smile.gif
scoopny
hug.gif
Tiger
Those are nice, Jason. I actually gave haikus a try myself. I must call you the master though. worshippy.gif
moonwolf
QUOTE (Demetz @ March 14 2008, 10:06 AM) *
I like poems like this.... they make me think, wondering what some things refer to, and then putting everything together as the poem continues, forming a coherent interpretation...

Very nice smile.gif


Thanks Demets, smile.gif I had a hard time working on this one, spent a better portion of the night writing this making it all this imagery. G;ad you liked it

QUOTE (TL The Writing Tiger @ March 15 2008, 12:09 AM) *
Those are nice, Jason. I actually gave haikus a try myself. I must call you the master though. worshippy.gif


thanks Tiger. smile.gif
Master ?? I wouldn't say that... I just have a muse working for me through good and bad times. I just let my fingers type and make it in imagery which is the point in haikus leaving people wondering "what the heck does it mean exactly ?"

Glad you liked it

Jason aka Moonwolf
Rose Strailo
Wonderful once more. I love the way you do haikus. Keep writing and posting for us. hug.gif Though, they have a bit of a sad tone to them, don't they?
moonwolf
QUOTE (Rose Strailo @ March 16 2008, 09:56 PM) *
Wonderful once more. I love the way you do haikus. Keep writing and posting for us. hug.gif Though, they have a bit of a sad tone to them, don't they?


Ya they do.... when I wrote them it was mainly to say sorry to sacha.. I was just closing myself to him and to everyone in fact. old instincts coming back to the surface
AFriendlyFace
I think this is my favourite of yours smile.gif

Well done, Jason.
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