QUOTE (Demetz @ March 14 2008, 10:06 AM)

I like poems like this.... they make me think, wondering what some things refer to, and then putting everything together as the poem continues, forming a coherent interpretation...
Very nice

Thanks Demets,

I had a hard time working on this one, spent a better portion of the night writing this making it all this imagery. G;ad you liked it
QUOTE (TL The Writing Tiger @ March 15 2008, 12:09 AM)

Those are nice, Jason. I actually gave haikus a try myself. I must call you the master though.

thanks Tiger.

Master ?? I wouldn't say that... I just have a muse working for me through good and bad times. I just let my fingers type and make it in imagery which is the point in haikus leaving people wondering "what the heck does it mean exactly ?"
Glad you liked it
Jason aka Moonwolf