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C James
Moonwolf – Our Time






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C James
Review by TL The Writing Tiger

This is a truly beautiful poem about struggling through life until you find the other half of your soul. Call me a helpless romantic, but I thought it was one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. wub.gif
scoopny
A truly lovely poem, it really recaptured the emotions of a very special weekend. thumbsupsmileyanim.gif
FrenchCanadian
A really nice, heartwarming poem it is. It's thoughtful from the very start to the end. You describe very well the painful steps that led the way to something magical!

thank you
Rose Strailo
*dabs at eyes* I've said it once, and I'll say it again. This is a beautiful poem. Well done, moonwolf. hug.gif I love it so much.
Graeme
That's great, Jason. I was very pleased to have gotten to read it early. The idea of walls to protect your inner self is a well known one, but it's still very true. The fact that it's autobiographical in nature just increases the power of the poem. Well done! thumbsupsmileyanim.gif
moonwolf
you guys... thanks... smile.gif really from the bottom of my heart thank you... that poem was really emotionnal for me when I wrote it... I think this must be the most personnal piece I have ever written and shared for anyone to see... Thank you for taking the time to read it, it's trully appreciated smile.gif



Jason aka Moonwolf
BeaStKid
QUOTE (C James @ March 25 2008, 11:07 AM) *
Review by TL The Writing Tiger

This is a truly beautiful poem about struggling through life until you find the other half of your soul. Call me a helpless romantic, but I thought it was one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. wub.gif

I concur... I am a hopeless romantic and this poem drove the point right home... smile.gif

Left me with a wuzzy feeling and more so, because both the poet and his partner are very close friends of mine.... I am sure this would not have been easy to write, Jason. But you still delivered it beautifully... worshippy.gif

BeaStKid
moonwolf
QUOTE (BeaStKid @ March 30 2008, 08:58 AM) *
I concur... I am a hopeless romantic and this poem drove the point right home... smile.gif

Left me with a wuzzy feeling and more so, because both the poet and his partner are very close friends of mine.... I am sure this would not have been easy to write, Jason. But you still delivered it beautifully... worshippy.gif

BeaStKid


Sorry for that delay without responding BK.. it hasn't been easy to write but I guess I managed to make something good about our time together... the way it happenned, how it happenned... as for it being beautiful don't thank me thank Sacha instead... he's the light in all this wub.gif

Jason aka Moonwolf
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