Yep, if you look you'll see I've yanked the original version, added some Web Spiffiness, and an edited and somewhat rewritten version is going up.

Chapters 1, 2, and 3 are up, more to follow over the next few weeks.

And now chapters 4 and 5 are up.

Dang!! I went there to check on a friend and found the story missing a few chapters and the site going thru a overhaul. It's a nice surprise. I get to read the updated version now, to bad it's not done.

Can't wait till "Carp Diem" is ready.

I'm also reworking my story, really making it come alive. Even I'm surprised.

thanks for the update
i cant wait for more
i've already made 3 of my freinds obsessed with the story
and one of them isnt even a guy

waiting eagerly for more
btw please please please do the second part

I thoroughly enjoyed it the first time, I'll have to read it again.

Still checking in every couple of days, Zot... it would be great to see an update.

I usually end up at Nifty and read the old version. Get my fix that way.

I really liked it the v2 version since its the one I found here and I really want more!!
lol great writing:)
J