Three Words
by hashbrown

"I love you", you said as the sun came down,
My smile and heart were foreign to a frown.

Your arm around me, holding me tight,
Embraced by your warmth, not a worry in sight.

Why it won't work, I'll never know.
Your love and mine, the world we'd show.

The cointinuous shuns have yet to give me a clue.

Three words I wish I could say

I hate you.

Wow... that's pretty good. You have some potential as poet. The best poetry comes from the heart, and you've already learned that important lesson. Good job!

I agree with Tiger, it was very good! like he said, you have potential to be a poet so why not you stay around at GA and write some poems while talking with other members, having fun in some of the topic, post pictures, anything!!