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MikeL
Dan Kirk has released Chapter 27 of Rich Boy:Growing Pains.

Is it still Friday?
Demetz
I have a feeling Colin is going to backfire on our boys in a big way.
MikeL
Well, Worthington is now a full-fledged bureaucrat. He has been made Acting Director of whatever the mage agency is called (I forget). He has met with the President, the Secretary of DHS, and the Governator. Now, he can get to the important stuff.

Great chapter, Dan...a lot of plot development. Thanks.
D and B
QUOTE (MikeL @ July 13 2008, 03:42 PM) *
Well, Worthington is now a full-fledged bureaucrat. He has been made Acting Director of whatever the mage agency is called (I forget). He has met with the President, the Secretary of DHS, and the Governator. Now, he can get to the important stuff.

Great chapter, Dan...a lot of plot development. Thanks.


It was indeed an excellent chapter, with a great deal of plot development. Two comments:

1. I think Gerald Norman's death is highly suspicious, under the circumstances. Granted that coincidences do occur, for the chief honcho of the government's mage program to be killed just now... well, the old adage is "Once is happenstance; twice is coincidence; three times is enemy action."

2. I propose a new law, resembling Murphy's: "After the Do Over tetralogy, Dawn of Tears, and now Rich Boy, if you are the protagonist of a Dan Kirk story, and the President wants to talk to you, run, do not walk, and do not stop until you are in Tierra Del Fuego or living in Bali under an assumend name -- the results are going to be beyond your control and not ones you're going to be happy with."
old bob
QUOTE (MikeL @ July 13 2008, 09:42 PM) *
Great chapter, Dan...a lot of plot development. Thanks.

worshippy.gif worshippy.gif Dan, the rhythm is accelerating ! The old Dan from the DO saga is back biggrin.gif .
Thanks for all these battle preparations.
I enjoy in advance the next chapters.
old bob
Tiger
Worthington is definitely going to have a lot more headaches with his new responsibilities. I also agree about Norman's suspicious death. Something isn't right here...

Great chapter, Dan!
steph291
QUOTE (D and B @ July 13 2008, 01:25 PM) *
2. I propose a new law, resembling Murphy's: "After the Do Over tetralogy, Dawn of Tears, and now Rich Boy, if you are the protagonist of a Dan Kirk story, and the President wants to talk to you, run, do not walk, and do not stop until you are in Tierra Del Fuego or living in Bali under an assumend name -- the results are going to be beyond your control and not ones you're going to be happy with."

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steph291
I forgot to ask... did anyone else find it odd that Brandon was visibly scared of meeting the president? I thought he handled himself better when going to face the demons, no?
MikeL
QUOTE (steph291 @ July 14 2008, 12:24 AM) *
I forgot to ask... did anyone else find it odd that Brandon was visibly scared of meeting the president? I thought he handled himself better when going to face the demons, no?

Demons are a bit more routine for him now.
Tiger
QUOTE (MikeL @ July 14 2008, 06:44 AM) *
Demons are a bit more routine for him now.

I agree. Still, there has to be an intimidation factor in both cases.
Rabble_Rouser
I agree with Demetz that Colin is going to be trouble... I'm betting he'll throw a major wrench in things and could be a good antagonist for Rich Boys III. Hmmmm.... Colin is unhappy with Worthington and apparently everyone else and we haven't heard from "Uncle Dearest" lately.

Steve
Jamie2
This is the first time I have ever seen censored comments. What gives?
Great story Dan. mad.gif
Tiger
QUOTE (Jamie2 @ July 17 2008, 04:48 PM) *
This is the first time I have ever seen censored comments. What gives?
Great story Dan. mad.gif

Take your cursor and highlight the black text to reveal it. It took me a while to figure that one out. blush1.gif
steph291
QUOTE (Jamie2 @ July 17 2008, 02:48 PM) *
This is the first time I have ever seen censored comments. What gives? mad.gif

Just to clarify, they're not censored, but marked as spoilers by the poster. You should see an "Insert: SPOILER" over on the left under Quick Access when creating a post. They help users from accidentally reading something that may spoil the story. As Tim said, just click and drag over it to see the text. happy.gif
Rabble_Rouser
And today's Friday... I'm soooooo ready for another fix! biggrin.gif

Steve
BeaStKid
QUOTE (Rabble_Rouser @ July 18 2008, 11:26 AM) *
And today's Friday... I'm soooooo ready for another fix! biggrin.gif

Steve

You said it, dude!
Tiger
QUOTE (Rabble_Rouser @ July 18 2008, 12:56 AM) *
And today's Friday... I'm soooooo ready for another fix! biggrin.gif

Steve



QUOTE (BeaStKid @ July 18 2008, 04:51 AM) *
You said it, dude!

Nuff said! Yippee!
BeaStKid
QUOTE (Tiger @ July 18 2008, 06:38 PM) *
Nuff said! Yippee!

Sush! Do you realize that it has been 10 hours since Friday came?

Ah! The nuances of timezones... mad.gif

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BeaStKid devilsmiley.gif
MikeL
QUOTE (BeaStKid @ July 18 2008, 11:25 AM) *
Sush! Do you realize that it has been 10 hours since Friday came?

Ah! The nuances of timezones... mad.gif

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BeaStKid devilsmiley.gif

I guess we're all a little on edge awaiting RB2/28. Some of us have just been awake longer than others. Some of us will get a nap in before it arrives.
BeaStKid
QUOTE (MikeL @ July 18 2008, 11:22 PM) *
I guess we're all a little on edge awaiting RB2/28. Some of us have just been awake longer than others. Some of us will get a nap in before it arrives.

It is 11.35 pm here...I am sure to get a nap (or else my dad would kill me!! laugh.gif )
MikeL
QUOTE (BeaStKid @ July 18 2008, 01:05 PM) *
It is 11.35 pm here...I am sure to get a nap (or else my dad would kill me!! laugh.gif )

I guess so. You live on the dark side of the earth. cwm27.gif
dkstories
I've sent 28 to Myr. He'll get it up when he can.
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