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Dr. Ditch by BeaStKid

Two families stumble upon a strange sight when spending their holilday at their summer retreat in Orbit Reserve. The reveletion sparks off a startling controversy dealing with rape, murder and kidnapping.

Based on a true story. The author advices caution while reading due to the content.




Originally written for The Hub's Abstract Anthology with the title 'Shack'
Rose Strailo
Since no one has said a thing about this story, I found it well written, if short. It gave you enough information to know what was going on while leaving most of the work to the imagination of the reader. I liked it, if it was a bit squicky.
BeaStKid
QUOTE (Rose Strailo @ July 25 2008, 04:05 AM) *
Since no one has said a thing about this story, I found it well written, if short. It gave you enough information to know what was going on while leaving most of the work to the imagination of the reader. I liked it, if it was a bit squicky.


Awww...thanks for the nice review and the kind words, Rose. I was indeed wondering why no one has responded in the threads or in the review, as the read count is growing steadily over the days... Guess, it is being read by the lurkers... laugh.gif

Anyway, I am glad you enjoyed it. smile.gif

BeaStKid
Rose Strailo
QUOTE (BeaStKid @ July 25 2008, 09:07 AM) *
Awww...thanks for the nice review and the kind words, Rose. I was indeed wondering why no one has responded in the threads or in the review, as the read count is growing steadily over the days... Guess, it is being read by the lurkers... laugh.gif

Anyway, I am glad you enjoyed it. smile.gif

BeaStKid



I liked it, like I said. And I noticed that my story 'A Campers Nightmare' has yet to get one single review. *pouts at people*
Anyways, I'm off to research kinks for a future story. For now, keep writing dearest and I'm sure you'll get more reviews eventually.
BeaStKid
QUOTE (Rose Strailo @ July 27 2008, 09:10 AM) *
I liked it, like I said. And I noticed that my story 'A Campers Nightmare' has yet to get one single review. *pouts at people*
Anyways, I'm off to research kinks for a future story. For now, keep writing dearest and I'm sure you'll get more reviews eventually.

Thanks, dear. I do intend to keep on writing... smile.gif wink.gif
jovian_w2002
Wow, this is really fast paced and suspenseful biggrin.gif Excellent Work! I'm not sure if any judge would allow a defense to converse with him privately, but still, this is an awesome story! Really biggrin.gif
BeaStKid
QUOTE (jovian_w2002 @ July 28 2008, 10:52 PM) *
Wow, this is really fast paced and suspenseful biggrin.gif Excellent Work! I'm not sure if any judge would allow a defense to converse with him privately, but still, this is an awesome story! Really biggrin.gif

Thanks jovian, for the comments. smile.gif I am happy that you enjoyed the story.

In high profile cases, the judges can (at their discretion) permit private talk in their chambers. smile.gif

BeaStKid devilsmiley.gif
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