Anybody notice that I had posted this to the e-fiction gadget?

Actually, yes - but I haven't really been around long enough to know if that's an oddity or not. Do you not post stories often?

I'll add it to my "to do" list.

-Dez

Yhy.
I did. Yesterday.
Don't know why I missed your post earlier.

Looks good. What's interesting is that your story (so far) seems to be about 'normal' people, engaged in something way bigger then they are. It's kind of refreshing from all the Saviour-Of-The-Universe types. Definitly waiting for more.

I spotted this thread a while back, and then forgot to have a look. I remembered today, and read your story. I love it! I hope you continue it.