Hey,

I'm pretty new here. I joined about two days ago I think. I do have three stories posted here, but eh. I really do like this site and I like that eFiction is like a large open spot where everything can happen within the site. Like no outside emailing or waiting for a chapter to be added and such.

Lol.. that would probably help..

Good Guys Finish Last

He Got To Me

Are You Christian

There they are.

Heys, I just read the first chapter of "Good Guys Finish Last", got me interested enough to read more. Kudos. I like your writing style.

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db

Hey

Thanks .. I try.. lol.

Krista

I just read the first five chapters of "Are you Christian".

GREAT story Krista!! I really like your style, and the characters. I do hope you will be posting more of it at some point?

I will be, may take a little while. I'm currently working on NINE stories at once.. lol. So thanks for liking this story it is one of my favorites to write.

Krista

That's just crazy talk. Try taking one spoonful of peanut butter and spread it over NINE pieces of toast.


After reading through the rest of what you have posted in GGFL, I was a little turned off by the whole believability of your main character, who seems to have problems worrying about stuff most gay guys actually worry about. He was also ridiculously lackadaisical when his so called best friend outed him to a total stranger, and he didn't seem to care (at least, I didn't get that sense from what you wrote). It felt a little rushed and too convenient. Anyways, still a pretty good story, this is all just my opinion of course.

db

Hey,

That's something to think about really. I already do have a lot of chapters wrote for this story and hopefully the believability of Charlie comes back. I mean I like writing realistic stories so I'd really have to think about this story. It is an older story.

But anyway, thinking is good for me it keeps me fresh and inspired.. lol

So thanks for the feedback.

Wow Krista !! Didn’t know you joined up here! I absolutely loved Something Unexpected from long ago. And loved the way Nothing Worth Leaving was starting off, but I will say it went in an odd direction hehe. It’s weird but just the other day I remembered about your yahoo group and went back for a visit and saw it was finished and caught up, great ending to a strange trip. Then I was poking into some of the other stories getting reacquainted and now you’re here! Welcome!

Hey.. lol.

I had no idea you were part of my group... oops. lol. I am glad you like Something Unexpected too. I won't be posting it here though because the first 15 chapters are just terribly written... lol They were wrote when I had absolutely no idea of what I was doing.

And Nothing Worth Leaving was ended because I didn't really like writing the story the way it was going and I had, "He Got To Me, and "Are You Christian" in the early planning stages and I was just too into those stories to want to continue down that 'weird' road. So the Spin-off of that story will hopefully save that story when I decide to do it.. lol. Not too proud of it reguardless.

Krista

I'm enjoying "He Got to Me". Interesting to be inside the head of one of those many jerks who helped make junior high the worst years of my life. Our hero is being pulled in the right direction by at least one of his peers. So far though, I don't care what happens to this particular jerk, so long as he doesn't grow up to be President.