WOW Snowy!! I loved this story! It was incredible. Not only was the storyline extremely interesting, but it was also very moving (yeah I cried again ). I was so disappointed when things returned to "normal", but then the last few chapters were so positive and inspiring that it ended the story on a very hopeful note. I also hope (and firmly believe) that things can turn out that way for the author too .

Thank you so much for sharing with us what must have been a very difficult story to write. It was truly amazing and inspiring If you get a chance I'd love to read more of your work! Awesome job, take care, and good luck with everything!!

Kevin

yes i loved this one too, liekd the sexy Doctor with the familiar name too but i thought it really was a great twist and very different to anything i have read. I think you should write more. I really felt sad when he woke up in his real life knowing he had lost the other life that hadn't been perfect but it had been better and it was heartbreaking that he lost the love that he had just found, left me wondering what happened to his lover in the other world and think you need to write more of it infact i DEMAND you do or at least write more of something becaus eyour very good.

Mark

I loved the “technical” details. They set things up nicely and made things feel completely believable.

It was a great story. A great idea and I love the way you wrote it. Waking up and not being able to understand language would be absolutely terrifying. I think the most touching moment in your story was when the man started showing him the children’s book and started trying to teach him to understand the language. *laughs* Yeah, got lots of tears out of me with that one. You managed to do that at several points.

I hope you keep writing.

I loved this, Snowey!!! I'm a huge fan of technical details, and your storyline was very, very moving, all the moreso because of your life similarities with it.

It was also hilarious in places.. I loved the quote from DO!!!

What a great mix!! I do hope you will keep writing!

Brilliant! I love 'technical' science fiction, especially where I know a little but not nearly enough. Nice spin on the title too. 'Mind Swap' a VR vacation I'd happily book ... minus any catheter removal pain of course.

Kudos Dr Dog! and more please.

Camy