Anyway if you have read it yet here is the link to it... http://www.gayauthors.org/anthology/summer...cksawriter.html
so anyway... go read it and tell me what you think... good or bad...
later ~ nick
Full Version: Finding My Summer Adventure
So guys.... i know that this topic will get like one or two post tops but those one or two posts will help me with my writing... so here it goes... what did you all think about my story... was it to sappy and corny... was it at all believeable... i have no self esteem for my writing... so please tell me if i am just wasting my time... also feel free to tell if you liked it and what you liked about... and just so you know that was my first time writing a sex scence...
Anyway if you have read it yet here is the link to it... http://www.gayauthors.org/anthology/summer...cksawriter.html
so anyway... go read it and tell me what you think... good or bad...
later ~ nick
Anyway if you have read it yet here is the link to it... http://www.gayauthors.org/anthology/summer...cksawriter.html
so anyway... go read it and tell me what you think... good or bad...
later ~ nick
QUOTE (nicks_a_writer @ July 30 2006, 10:35 PM) 
So guys.... i know that this topic will get like one or two post tops but those one or two posts will help me with my writing... so here it goes... what did you all think about my story... was it to sappy and corny... was it at all believeable... i have no self esteem for my writing... so please tell me if i am just wasting my time... also feel free to tell if you liked it and what you liked about... and just so you know that was my first time writing a sex scence...
Anyway if you have read it yet here is the link to it... http://www.gayauthors.org/anthology/summer...cksawriter.html
so anyway... go read it and tell me what you think... good or bad...
later ~ nick
Anyway if you have read it yet here is the link to it... http://www.gayauthors.org/anthology/summer...cksawriter.html
so anyway... go read it and tell me what you think... good or bad...
later ~ nick
Dude, you're totally not wasting your time....just keep writing for us and we'll keep reading
QUOTE (nicks_a_writer @ July 30 2006, 07:35 PM)
So guys.... i know that this topic will get like one or two post tops but those one or two posts will help me with my writing... so here it goes... what did you all think about my story... was it to sappy and corny... was it at all believeable... i have no self esteem for my writing... so please tell me if i am just wasting my time... also feel free to tell if you liked it and what you liked about... and just so you know that was my first time writing a sex scence...
Anyway if you have read it yet here is the link to it... http://www.gayauthors.org/anthology/summer...cksawriter.html
so anyway... go read it and tell me what you think... good or bad...
later ~ nick
Anyway if you have read it yet here is the link to it... http://www.gayauthors.org/anthology/summer...cksawriter.html
so anyway... go read it and tell me what you think... good or bad...
later ~ nick
I thought it was really good! Please keep writing!
BTW, have you seen the other thread for your story? FriendlyFace made on for you in the cafe, and it has detialed comments there, including my own.
http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/index.php?showtopic=5129
QUOTE (C James @ July 31 2006, 02:56 AM)
I thought it was really good! Please keep writing!
BTW, have you seen the other thread for your story? FriendlyFace made on for you in the cafe, and it has detialed comments there, including my own.
http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/index.php?showtopic=5129
BTW, have you seen the other thread for your story? FriendlyFace made on for you in the cafe, and it has detialed comments there, including my own.
http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/index.php?showtopic=5129
OMG I DIDNT KNOW THIS!!! i am glad that you pointed it out to me or i would have never found it... lol!
later ~ nick
QUOTE (nicks_a_writer @ July 31 2006, 07:13 PM)
OMG I DIDNT KNOW THIS!!! i am glad that you pointed it out to me or i would have never found it... lol!
later ~ nick
later ~ nick
Glad I could help, and glad you will keep writing!
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