This is a story I first started posting on Nifty but have now moved here, in addition. People on nifty want too much sex...

Anyway, any comments, questions or criticisms are more than welcome.

http://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewstory.php?sid=300

~Menzo

Oh, I've been reading this on Nifty. And I've been enjoying it. Good story.

Sharon

Thanks, Sharon, I'm really glad you are enjoying it. If you have any criticisms, I'm always willing to listen.

Thanks again,
Menzo

This is an excellent story! Very well-written with great characters and portrayals.

Wow, am I ever glad that I had a free evening tonight. Checked the forums and saw eight chapters posted of a story that I hadn't come across before. You had me hooked after the first chapter, and craving the next chapter after the second.



I have to agree, didn't take long to get familiar with all the characters and who they are.

I now have another story that I'll watch to be updated in the future.

Thanks,

Steve

Thanks so much Steve, I'm glad you liked the story. I always prefer reading the whole story at once, preferably as late at night as possible

Thanks for commenting,
Menzo

hey there,
i've read your stories and you know what?
it was realy great. and nice too~!! (evnthough i just read the 3rd chapters)
Thnx~!!

I like this story a lot, I just found it two days ago and read all 11 chapters in one sitting