Finishing Lyrics is the first story Unbeliever has posted here.

I really love it. It has an edge to it that much of his writing has, an edge which feels as sharp against your brain as a knife feels against your skin. He leaves things unsaid, yet you can sense them. This story is short but sharp. It leaves you wanting more.

I enjoyed it It was very different to what I normally read -- more edgy -- but it was good. I had a momentary pause at the comment about breeders, since technically I'm one, but it's only a story and that comment suited the character at that point. Well done!

I enjoyed it very much, though I'm glad I didn't hear 'Guiltless' until after I read it, as that was not at all the way I imagined his music. A wicked video btw.

Thanks.

I like edgy, keeps things interesting. I'm happy to see you mentioned this was his first story posted. That means there are more to come.

Sharon

Thank you for reading, I'm really glad you guys enjoyed it. And I'm glad to know people enjoy edgy. Though I do not think there will be more Neal to come here, he has mostly written himself out for the general public.