My Heart's Desire by Linxe Termoil
Pat screwed up, and now he has to fix it. Not only for his heart's sake, but for the love of his life's sake as well.
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Posted 12 June 2009 - 01:15 AM
Posted 13 June 2009 - 11:13 PM
And then Pat failed to follow it.
I figure, if youíre in a relationship and one partner is doing something you donít like you sit down and talk to him, let him know whatís bothering you, not start ignoring him for no reason.
Posted 14 June 2009 - 12:10 AM
And he still failed to follow the advice, though from the receiving side, when his mom asked him what was going on. It took her persistence (I think that's where he got his advice from in the first place, though he never says), to get him to open up.
There's a price to be paid, but he's decided he's willing to pay it. He may be ignorant as to what that price really is, but then we all tend to be ignorant on the true price of things. If he's happy to pay the price, then that's all that's really important.
Posted 14 June 2009 - 01:23 AM
Posted 14 June 2009 - 02:01 AM
Edited by Linxe Termoil, 14 June 2009 - 02:03 AM.
Posted 14 June 2009 - 02:11 AM
Exactly right I personally used the word "influence" because parents do have influence, but the ultimate decision is always up to the person in question. Pat made his decision, and he accepted the consequences of that decision. Can anyone do any less?
Some of you are of the opinion that parents have a say, some of you are of the opinion that they don't. Ultimately it does not matter. All that matters is that you think for yourself, and keep an open mind.
Posted 14 June 2009 - 12:52 PM
...My Heart's Desire is a terrific blend of sweet, absurd, and wildly entertaining...
Please look for my stories at:
David McLeod's stories
in GA Stories.
Posted 14 June 2009 - 01:09 PM
Posted 14 June 2009 - 02:10 PM
That was a great scene; I loved it! LOL interestingly a couple of days after reading it I was out one afternoon and came across a skater who perfectly fit the description! Mind you I wasn't stalking anyone at the time, but I was certainly distracted.
Another great scene is as the skate boarder leaves and Pat stares at the boy's underwear after marveling at his abs: Pat is in love with Scotty, he's just been caught stalking him, and yet he's lusting after the skater. That opened a huge window into Pat's character.
Posted 14 June 2009 - 03:20 PM
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Posted 15 June 2009 - 01:58 PM
This is another sad and beautiful story with a strong message. You finished the story with a 'happy ending'. But I think the story has just begun. We don't know how things will work out in the end. You leave the readers thinking. Very good
Posted 16 June 2009 - 01:26 AM
"And we all know that CJ doesn't use cliffhangers"~ Tallonrider 11-10-08
"CJ, you're a lurker, you never use cliffhangers, and you'd never use blackmail." ~Wildone 10-03-07
"We all know that CJ is neither a cruel author nor does he leave cliffhangers." ~ Clydee 3-23-11
"CJ doesn't use cliff hangers." ~ Low Flyer 3-23-11
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Posted 26 June 2009 - 03:11 PM
1) I personally do not know anyone with AIDS so it could be a very hard thing for me to try and write something within that p.o.v. I would have to use my imagination (which I have no problem doing whatsoever, mind you), yet I'm afraid that I would do no justice to the reality of the situation.
Consider my post as a first call.
Would I be willing to finish it anyways and post it on its own? Yes, if there were enough calls for me to do so.
Posted 09 July 2009 - 02:11 AM
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