Shade of Reality by kevduenas

[Graeme]

Shade of Reality by kevduenas

 

A poem on time and memories.

 

 

:nuke: :nuke: Spoilers Below!!! :nuke: :nuke:

[Red_A]

The sentiments are like mine, how I wish I could express them as well as this.

 

I also think the presentation is perfect.( white on black, and clouds)

[Toast]

Thank you for the poem. I think gray is so much more interesting than black and white. And whether time and memory shape us or simply feds the flame that consumes us, is something I wonder about also.

[jian_sierra]

Thank you for sharing. I always enjoy a good poem and I think this one is quite good! I very much like the word play

[Nephylim]

I keep saying I am not really into poetry but I like this one... and I have come to the conclusion that perhaps I do like poetry after all

 

Time is something that has always interested me, and the things it does to the mind. I mean just trying to work out what time actually is, is a headful. This was really interesting.

[Dolores Esteban]

Excellent! I like it very much.

[Kev de Cauchery]

Hmm. Very interesting and very personal. Love the metaphors and the theme on memories.

 

Also love the title. Makes me sad that it's true all memories fade overtime. O well.

 

Great Read.

 

 

[kevduenas]

i thank you all for your comments. sorry for the late reply but i just now found out this story discussion even existed. if you haven't already read them here's a link to the rest of the stuff i have written. feel free to take a look if you are interested, if not then that's okay too.