Alright by Dolores Esteban

[Graeme]

Alright by Dolores Esteban

 

Things had changed definitely. I was asking myself why and when things had changed.

 

 

:nuke: :nuke: Spoilers Below!!! :nuke: :nuke:

Edited March 10, 2011 by Graeme

[Nephylim]

It was a nice read, almost a poem, maybe a prose poem after all. But I don't understand it.

 

 

[Dolores Esteban]

Never mind! Don't bother figuring it out. It reflects my thoughts on an incident. Thanks for reading and commenting.

[colinian]

I love this story. The repetitions, the way the pace of the story changes as you read, becoming faster and faster, until it ends and I'm out of breath. Now I'm left wondering why things changed and why everything became so strange.

 

Colin

[Frostina]

Loved the depiction of the incident! but i do have a question... Why did u name it 'Alright'?

[Dolores Esteban]

Thank you so much for reading leaving a feedback. I'm glad you liked the story.

 

The narrator feels that things have changed for the worse. But once you accept it, it is alright.

[Frostina]

Thank you so much for reading leaving a feedback. I'm glad you liked the story.

 

The narrator feels that things have changed for the worse. But once you accept it, it is alright.

 

Oh! thank you!

**smacks self** cant believe i didnt see THAT! :wacko:

[Toast]

This is simply stunning and elegant. It deserves praise. Thank you for this.

[Dolores Esteban]

Thanks for your kind comments on my story. Really makes me happy.

[Menzoberranzen]

Sterling.

 

Loved the ambiguity of it all, and loved the short, sharp sentences. Simply excellent.

 

Menzo

[Dolores Esteban]

Thank you, Menzo!