creative Prompt #314 - Creative

[comicfan]

Two months ago a rare find in Mexico happened. Inside an old pyramid, a perfectly preserved body was found. On closer inspection they found the body was actually still alive, but in some sort of suspended animation. The body has been on tour, nicknamed the Sleeping Beauty. You go to the exhibit and discover something truly unusual about the two hundred year old beauty. What is it?

[Valkyrie]

Here's mine

 

https://www.gayauthors.org/story/valkyrie71/2014promptresponses/13

[Ron]

     "Hot damn, he’s gorgeous!" Max had never seen a man more strikingly masculine: long, dark, shoulder-length hair of loose ringlets fanned out from his head to lay upon the pillow on which his head rested, an unlined forehead sloped to heavy brows lined with thick, combed eye-brows, long lashes, broad nose – nostrils seemingly flaring in the act of sensual overload, and full, dusky, rose-colored lips. The neat, full beard couldn't hide his sharply defined jaw and strong chin, and added contrast to the beautiful sun-kissed, mocha color of his skin.

     

     "What do you mean . . . he?" Gorge asked. He thought Max—was gorgeous, and couldn’t help the twinge of jealously he felt. Possessiveness and hope, he still harbored after the two weeks they’d spent fucking their brains out - Max fucking his brains out - six weeks ago, and was slow to leave, and matched his feeling of loss.

     

     Before Max could offer an answer, Macy butted in, "Have any of you noticed the number of suites stationed around the hall?" Having a head for these sorts of things, it struck her as odd before any other of the group of friends noticed.

     

     "It looks like two of them are headed directly for us." Janice, Macy's hot, love-you-for-life girlfriend, announced.

     

     "Shit, we just got here and we're already in trouble." Gorge's diminutive best friend, and some-time worry wart, Aleck, who was often enough the instigator of the trouble they two often found themselves in, complained.

 

Click to read the rest of my story: To Sleep, to Dream, and Hunger    It being my first real attempt at writing outside of first person, I hope you enjoy it.

Edited April 10, 2014 by Ron

[Percy]

Took a few weeks but I got a short story put together for this one.  Thanks for a cool prompt, Comicfan!  

 

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