Timothy M. Posted May 17, 2015 Share Posted May 17, 2015 Soooo, the good news is I sent the full chapter to Kitt and AC for joint editing and beta reading late last night. The better news is they both like it after the initial readings. I need you to send lots of nice and grateful thoughts to both of them for giving CC priority and doing super fast editing, making even LT dizzy. I shall do my best to finish fiddling with the twins today. 2 Link to comment
Timothy M. Posted May 17, 2015 Share Posted May 17, 2015 Here you go then - https://www.gayauthors.org/story/timothy-m/cluelesscamping/11 enjoy 1 Link to comment
Kitt Posted May 17, 2015 Share Posted May 17, 2015 HEHEHE I got to be the first like on the chapter, but I admit I cheated. I only had to skim to see what you might have changed! 2 Link to comment
EagleIsaac Posted May 17, 2015 Share Posted May 17, 2015 Great chapter Tim. Good to catch up with Russell and Jacob again. Heading out to a BBQ so I'll leave a review when I get back 2 Link to comment
Site Moderator drpaladin Posted May 17, 2015 Site Moderator Share Posted May 17, 2015 Soooo, the good news is I sent the full chapter to Kitt and AC for joint editing and beta reading late last night. The better news is they both like it after the initial readings. I need you to send lots of nice and grateful thoughts to both of them for giving CC priority and doing super fast editing, making even LT dizzy. I shall do my best to finish fiddling with the twins today. Tim, I know you created them, but don't you think Jacob and Chris would object to excessive fiddling withe twins? Good work, my friend and thanks to Kitt and AC for speedy work! 3 Link to comment
Headstall Posted May 17, 2015 Share Posted May 17, 2015 Loved it, loved it, loved it! Well done, Tim... it was definitely worth the wait! 3 Link to comment
LitLover Posted May 17, 2015 Share Posted May 17, 2015 I was gradually coming to understand the difference between being possessive and controlling and being protective and caring. I just wanted to say how much I loved this line in the story. So many people...a lot of young people especially...mistake possessiveness and jealousy for caring and love. It's good to see that Russell seems to be realizing there is a difference. And by the way....loved the hot and somehow still innocent sex scene 4 Link to comment
Timothy M. Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 Thank you, all of you. I got up at five-thirty this morning and rushed down to see what had happened in CC. I need to go to work, so I'll reply to reviews tonight when I get back. 1 Link to comment
ColumbusGuy Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 I gotta say, Tim, that this latest chapter has made what were already great characters come to life for me in glorious 3-D. Fantastic job on giving us an intimate glimpse into their lives and psyches. 2 Link to comment
Timothy M. Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 (edited) I just wanted to say how much I loved this line in the story. So many people...a lot of young people especially...mistake possessiveness and jealousy for caring and love. It's good to see that Russell seems to be realizing there is a difference. That line was one of my favorites too. Russ and Evan are lucky, they have encountered the real thing and can see their father's behavior for what it is. I'm sure he has the proper feelings for his wife, but somehow he got it wrong with his kids. Edited May 18, 2015 by Timothy M. 1 Link to comment
Timothy M. Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 I gotta say, Tim, that this latest chapter has made what were already great characters come to life for me in glorious 3-D. Fantastic job on giving us an intimate glimpse into their lives and psyches. Thanks, I can see from your review Chris is the next guy I should focus on fleshing out. Probably in a talk with Isa. 2 Link to comment
Timothy M. Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 HEHEHE I got to be the first like on the chapter, but I admit I cheated. I only had to skim to see what you might have changed! I didn't change much so I'm guessing you barely noticed anything new. I often forget to check out the likes, since I have to go back into the chapter to do this, but I am grateful for them. However, reviews and comments here are what I treasure most. But I also did a small when the number of views went over 10,000 and there were a couple of new followers of the story. Link to comment
Timothy M. Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 Tim, I know you created them, but don't you think Jacob and Chris would object to excessive fiddling with the twins? maybe I'll let Jacob and Chris do the fiddling and sit back and watch. Who wants to join me? 2 Link to comment
homokarkitten Posted June 1, 2015 Share Posted June 1, 2015 tjis is one of the best really good novels i have ever read, its like fifty shades of grey took on a whole new turn and went homosexual also made the monalesa x 10 (basically really good) 2 Link to comment
Timothy M. Posted June 1, 2015 Share Posted June 1, 2015 tjis is one of the best really good novels i have ever read, its like fifty shades of grey took on a whole new turn and went homosexual also made the monalesa x 10 (basically really good) Thank you very much - I think not having read Fifty Shades nor having the best impression of that book from reviews etc. Link to comment
EagleIsaac Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 So not even these guys can entice your twins to come and play? 1 Link to comment
JohnAR Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 I think the barber is waiting for these twins before anything else <LOL> 2 Link to comment
Kitt Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 Aw come on J! The one on the left may not quite wear it high and tight, but its respectably short! 1 Link to comment
JohnAR Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 Aw come on J! The one on the left may not quite wear it high and tight, but its respectably short! I might agree except we see his underwear ;-). And the right one? 1973 Haight-Ashbury? What's next Woodstock II? ;-) Just kidding. They are perfect for Tim ... and if those get him motivated ... I'm all for targetting the message to the (unspoken) needs of the target ... 1 Link to comment
EagleIsaac Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 Aw come on J! The one on the left may not quite wear it high and tight, but its respectably short! respectably short - not too long - just enough to hold on to 1 Link to comment
Kitt Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 I might agree except we see his underwear ;-). LMAO - but a barber would not fix that! Maybe his momma and a wooden spoon ... 2 Link to comment
JohnAR Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 LMAO - but a barber would not fix that! Maybe his momma and a wooden spoon ... Depends on the kind of barber <back to my dirty corner> ... 1 Link to comment
EagleIsaac Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 I don't care if these guys are channeling their inner hippy - as long as it gave Tim motivation to get us the next chapter (after he licks the screen and dries off his keyboard of course) 3 Link to comment
LitLover Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 I might agree except we see his underwear ;-). Oh my god, that is such a huge pet peeve of mine. Who told any of those boys that baggy pants and showing off their underwear was an attractive look? 1 Link to comment
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