It was so subtle and gentle, and yet it segued into such an intense (and HOT!) passion. Much like an infection subtly and gently begins to consume one's body until eventually you're burning with pain and misery. Yet this of course was the complete antithesis. Where the infection eventually brings suffering First Time gradually consumes the reader delight and pleasure until once again you're burning up!
Everything was so beautifully and exquisitely described. Lucas' feelings (both physical and emotional) so completely and perfectly told that the reader not only understands the story but is completely consumed by it.
Not only that but it was just really hot and erotic
Fantastic Job, Luc! Everyone should go and read this if you haven't already. NOW!!
Have a great day everyone and take care,
Edited by AFriendlyFace, 13 August 2006 - 05:32 AM.