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[Luc] The Shower


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#1

Andy

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Posted 02 May 2007 - 06:13 PM

I highly reccomend reading Luc's newest submission, the first part of a series of fantasies he is writing: The Shower.

It is an enjoyable well written read :D

Here's a link.

http://luc.gayauthor...s/theshower.php


Start talking. That's an order. :P

*resists the urge to post spoilers*
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#2

viv

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Posted 02 May 2007 - 06:35 PM

OH

MY

GOLLY

LUC!!!

Always SO DAMN GOOD!!! :wub:

I think I may spend more time in the shower! :P

Thanks Luc, for sharing and making me smile fantastically!
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Posted 02 May 2007 - 07:00 PM

Erotic as hell, and beautifully written.

The analogy of the milk was great, and my favourite line has to be "Is this finally real?" :)

Thank you , Luc

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shadowgod

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Posted 02 May 2007 - 10:54 PM

Definately have to agree with Camy! "Is this finally real?" rocked as a line and said tons about wants that were only hinted at previously.

:worship: great writing Luc!

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Posted 02 May 2007 - 11:52 PM

WOW...I mean...WOW...Really good :2thumbs: :2thumbs:

I'd step into the shower to cool off but I don't think it would help any this time :lmao:

Hugs,

Tom

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#6

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Posted 03 May 2007 - 01:56 AM

A nice tale of frustrations at last unleashed. I have to agree that the writing makes the story fresh and attractive. And there's definitely an ascending move throughout the story, this eventual question being a nice climax (in the literary meaning).
Come on along with the Black Rider
We'll have a gay old time
Lay down in the web of the black spider
I'll drink your blood like wine
So come on in It ain't no sin
Take off your skin And dance around your bones

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Posted 03 May 2007 - 01:33 PM

Let me add my kudos as well, Luc. :worship: Erotic and sensual. I really liked the palm thing. :wub:

I keep asking for a smilie that smokes. :lol:

Conner

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Posted 03 May 2007 - 06:28 PM

I keep asking for a smilie that smokes. :lol:

The story was smokin'! Erotic, loving, uncomplicated and rewarding. Super fantasy, Luc. I look forward to more in the series.

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Posted 03 May 2007 - 08:42 PM

WOW

*Wipes perspiration off forehead*

WHOA

Congratulations Luc - what a great job! Rarely have I seen so much energy, passion, and eroticism captured in such a short space! That story felt like 5 chapters because you put so much in there. Awesome!

I really enjoyed it - thank you.

Centaur

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I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.

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Posted 04 May 2007 - 02:05 AM

Hello,


I thought this story was really good. The underlying physically driven romance was interesting.. lol. I don't think I've ever romanced someone by stripping.. :o

anyway, the, "Is this finally real?" - part was extremely cute. Probably the most well written and original part of a story I've read for a little while and it had me outwardly smiling because it let everyone know that it just wasn't erotic, that there was real feelings there and too long subdued by the characters. :)


So yes... :2thumbs:

Good job,


Krista

#11

C James

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Posted 04 May 2007 - 02:33 AM

Excellent, Luc!! :2thumbs:

I think the most moving part of it, for me, was the remaining unknown; why hadn't Chris acted on his feelings before? Just like like, some things are left unknown, and to me that was part of what made this story "click".
:2thumbs:


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#12

Luc

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Posted 09 May 2007 - 10:23 AM

:hug: Thanks, all of you. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed wriiting it, though it was hard to focus on...at times 0:)

The inspiration for it was a dream I had a LONG time ago. The setting was a little different (you would all laugh hysterically and make fun of me if I told you where it was originally set in my dream), but most of the 'important parts' were the same.

Thanks again, for reading and for letting me know what you thought.

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And answered “I Myself am Heav’n and Hell”
- Omar Khayyam

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Especially if you post something in my discussion forums..
(...ok, maybe I won't actually "do things" because Mark would not like that...but I'll be very appreciative and pleasant and... ok, will shut up now.)



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