Naked in the Rain by JFalkon

[Graeme]

Naked in the Rain by JFalkon

 

A missing cat and being locked out of the house while naked. Also known as "How to meet the neighbor."

 

 

:nuke: :nuke: Spoilers Below!!! :nuke: :nuke:

[Graeme]

I'm very impressed by how quickly JFalkon is developing as an author. A weakness in their early stories was the dialogue, but that felt very natural in this story. I could feel the embarrassment as narrator asked his neighbor if he could borrow the ladder.

 

I hope Mr. Jingles has a special pride of place in any future wedding as he is a very clever match maker

 

Well done, JFalkon! A great little story.

Edited March 15, 2009 by Graeme

[Prince Duchess]

Aww...this is like a light gay fairy tale I love it

[AFriendlyFace]

As always, I thoroughly enjoyed your story, JFalkon!

 

It was beautiful written, and so sweet and moving! It was also all around delightful and fun to read. I laughed out loud in several places and smiled throughout most of it.

 

Thanks so much for sharing it with us

 

-Kevin

 

P.S. Hot Redheads

[Dolores Esteban]

I agree. A very sweet and romantic story. I saw the end coming. But I very much enjoyed reading your story.

[Linxe Termoil]

Aww. I hope my kitty got my other kitty pregnant. Need some rain too, glad spring is coming upon us.

 

Wonderful story with a great ending

 

Jon

[jfalkon]

Thanks guys! I had a lot of fun writing it.

 

 

P.S. Hot Redheads

 

Funny you should mention that. I was working with one at the time. He has since colored his hair back to its natural brown but he still looks great.

[old bob]

I'm very impressed by how quickly JFalkon is developing as an author. ......Well done, JFalkon! A great little story.

I have nothing to add to Graeme's post. I agree 100 % with him .

Really a very sweet and romantic story.

Waiting impatiently JFalkon's next stories, which surely will come soon.

Dont let us wait too long .

[jfalkon]

Thanks, Old Bob!

I try to write a story every few months. Usualy for the anthologies.

[Camy]

That's a really lovely story, and well written, too.

 

Thanks for sharing.

 

Camy

[Mark Arbour]

Really well done and enjoyable!

[Sir Galahad]

Loved this story, cracked up when he realised he'd be mooning the neighborhood. Well done.