At The Trevi by Prince Duchess

[Graeme]

At The Trevi by Prince Duchess

I said, yes at the Trevi.

:nuke: :nuke: Spoilers Below!!! :nuke: :nuke:

Edited March 12, 2009 by Graeme

[Graeme]

Despite the angst at that point in the story, I had to grin at this line from Jake:

“It’s nice to see you really think you have an opinion in the matter...

That's what brothers are for -- getting your feet back on the ground when you need it.

 

The trick that Jake & Jason set up was delightful, too. And that was just one of a number of wonderful little touches throughout the story. It was a great story throughout, and I hope to read a lot more from Prince Duchess in the future.

 

Thank you!

Edited March 14, 2009 by Graeme

[AFriendlyFace]

Awwww

 

What a sweet, romantic story! I just love the:

 

"...And I want you to know that no matter what I

[Linxe Termoil]

Awwwww. I almost cried. If i ever get my hands on someone I wanna keep, I don't think I'll ever let em go after reading this.

[AFriendlyFace]

Awwwww. I almost cried. If i ever get my hands on someone I wanna keep, I don't think I'll ever let em go after reading this.

Not a subscriber to the whole notion of "if you love something let it go," huh?

[Linxe Termoil]

Not a subscriber to the whole notion of "if you love something let it go," huh?

 

been there done that. (editted everything after this, I was apparently to tired to actually think before typing, sorry for the derail)

 

anyways, now that you mention the if you love something let it go factor. I can see that part in this story. one boy let his boyfriend go on a modelling tour because he didn't want to hold his boyfriend back, and because he did so they both just kinda almost ended up miserable in the end. thankfully the vacation to europe fixed that

Hrm, but, because the boyfriend insisted his boyfriend go on the tour (I'm having a horrible time with names right now, I was up till 8:30 this morning reading "a new brother" by graeme) it made them both realize just how much they really did love each other. So it all worked out

[Zeoanne]

Beautiful Story indeed. Romance, something so many of us are lacking of. Bravo!! for a well written story! And Yes! The Trevi is indeed a majestic and impressive fountain! Thanks for bringing such great memories! I would LOVE to go back to Europe someday.

[Sir Galahad]

I'm not one who normally likes romance, but good job man.

[Tejun]

Hey, it was nice to read a story with a happy ending for once. I am so immersed in horror and tragedy stories that I rarely see something without a major heart wrenching conflict. Not that missing your beautiful boyfriend isn't tragic, but I am use to more, like a plane crash or affair or something more Shakespearean. So your story was a nice read that made me smile in the end.

 

p.s. the song proposal just rubbed me the wrong way. the character seemed, smarter than that. To recite a pop song for a proposal, it was an honest let down for me. I imagine based on the rest of the story you could have penned a proposal that makes that song look like cheese. :-)

[Ambrosius]

...*gasp* I love romance!