Again by Kanaye

[Graeme]

Again by Kanaye

 

What do you do when the one you love can

[Linxe Termoil]

Warning:

 

Do not read this if you are prone to fits of crying, have a hint of sappy emotions, or..well... you get the point.

 

However, I recommend you read a person read it anyways. I loved this. It just goes to show what love SHOULD but, for most people, isn't. I applaud Charlie and his patience, and the willingness to go through all that emotional trauma that, while hinted at, wasn't fully discussed.

 

Regards,

 

Linxe

[Nephylim]

This was just the sweetest story. It was amazing, awesome, delightful, did I say amazing? I loved it loved it loved it. Maybe I am a sentimental old fool but hey I like me that way

 

 

[Dolores Esteban]

This is a very nice and touching story. I liked it at lot. Thanks for sharing.

 

[Kanaye]

Thank you guys! I'm glad you like it. The honey was dripping off my keyboard when I finished. Took me hours to clean it all off, tehehe.

[Lugh]

heh I believe you about the honey. My box of tissues is getting a work out this set of stories, thank you very much. Good little story, well executed.

 

Happy writing.

[David McLeod]

Very sweet, but not maudlin. Some solid emotions, and not just "honey." Very compact...a lot of feeling in those words.

[Kanaye]

Why thank you both. I was originly working on a completely different story but got stuck. Then I was trying to go to sleep one night and, viola, they just popped into my head and I actully remembered the idea when I woke up.

 

Everything just flowed so well, though it is indeed short. I tried to keep it the same length as when I finished. I was afraid if I added more to flesh it out I would get stuck and then Id be in the same boat as with my other one.

[Ieshwar]

Oh, it was so sweet. You really brought out the scene well. I liked it a lot.

 

Take care,

Ieshwar

[Kanaye]

Thank you!