After The Fall by Johnathan_Colourfield

[Graeme]

After The Fall by Johnathan_Colourfield

 

Sheltering from nature

[Riley Jericho]

Crikey - that was different! A good tale with lots of twists!

Riley

[Graeme]

Yeah, I agree. The ending was not one I expected. A good story, though Thanks, Johnathan!

[Boy In Doubt]

I just read it and I agree, the ending surprised me as well.

[Johnathan Colourfield]

Yeah i wanted the ending to seem a bit surreal It has links with the whole idea that there wasn't something quite right with the events

 

I mean... 4 teenagers with different purpose on one evening when a mysterious force comes and kills them?

 

I think not

 

All explained next time XD

[Nephylim]

That was a very polished story Jonathan. It read smoothly and you built the tension from the very first line. This was a fantastic story. I enjoyed every word. The end was a hell of a shock but, knowing you, it wasn't if you know what I mean Your skill is improving with every word you write hun. I am impressed.

[Hamen Cheese]

Gave me goosebumps haha (though I must admit I didn't fully understand what quite happened in the end but I guess that's for me to figure out hehe).

[Johnathan Colourfield]

Yeah it is quite an odd ending but its to do with my next anthology entry Its all explained then

[Hamen Cheese]

Yeah it is quite an odd ending but its to do with my next anthology entry Its all explained then

 

Argh! That's 3 months from now!

 

Haha

[Dolores Esteban]

Well done. I could not stop reading until the end. Very creepy and disturbing. I still have that final image on my mind. Will you continue the story?

 

[Johnathan Colourfield]

Yes i am going to carry on the story. Not sure in what format at the moment. It may become a novel but more than likely i am going to finish off my 'Ginger' series of stories with this following anthology