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24. Honesty is Key Reviews

joann414
Aug 11 2012 09:01 AM

(Chapter 24 Review)

Your story is turning into such a mystery, along with the romance, and I love it. I am glad that Drew is having a few sympathetic feelings toward David, because I think David is going to need all of them as friends if he find out his father killed the boy he loved. He will be devastated. Poor Jordan, wanting the door left open, aftermath of all the crap his father put him through, and I am sure that is just the tip of the iceberg. Jordan, adjusting back into society is going to take awhile, but I am sure Drew and his group of friends will be a lot of help and support for him.
I am not really sure about David's father being the killer though. Don't know why, but I just feel like it may be someone else. Guess I will have to wait and see. Loving this more and more girl

View Post Reply from *HJ* (author)

I do love a good mystery to keep things from becoming dull. Where would the fun be if I just brought Jordan back without any dangers lurking in the shadows for Drew and Luke? You are right about David. He is really going to need all the support that he can get. Poor David i think I get a sick pleasure out of making his life horrible, but I do love him dearly. You will just have to wait and see

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cathexis93
Jun 07 2012 06:14 PM

(Chapter 24 Review)

Damn hun!! You sure know how to write an excellent story! Just keep it like that! I don’t want you to stop! But back on track. First of all, I agree with Lisa: I’m glad Jordan’s back and safe, I can see he’s happy being again with his family, but I don’t like the fact that he doesn’t trust his brother’s boyfriend. I mean Luke suffered a lot too. Jordan wasn’t the only one. I think Drew has to make these things clear to him. Nonetheless, I hope everyone gets along with each other.
Moving next, I think David’s dad was the one that killed Tyler. I’m so sure of it. THAT SON OF A BITCH!! He deserves to die as well as Luke’s uncle. SCUMS!!
I also believe that there’s a feeling of 'chemistry' between Jordan and David. But I’m not quite sure of it. So I’ll settle down for the time being.
With that being said now I have to wait for the next chapter. Till next time dear. Bye bye

View Post Reply from *HJ* (author)

What a wonderful review! I am very happy you are enjoying the story. One must realize that Jordan know nothing of the danger Luke is in or the trauma he has been through. So you really can't blame Jordan. Plus, he has saw a lot of people use his brother in the past. It is normal that Jordan is questioning Luke's motives. Now, David and Jordan... that is a whole different story for another time. I hope you do continue to leave reviews! If you have any questions you can PM or leave another review. Hugs, Holly.

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Lisa
Jun 06 2012 07:00 PM

(Chapter 24 Review)

I'm glad Jordan's home. It's gonna take quite awhile before he recovers emotionally. He needs all the support he can get. I wonder why he's getting a negative vibe from Luke. I'm assuming it's a negative vibe, or else why would he tell Drew he didn't trust Luke?

Poor David. If his dad was behind this whole mess with Tyler and his death, David will be devastated. I really feel bad for him now.

Great chapter HJ! Looking forward to more!

View Post Reply from *HJ* (author)

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. As for Jordan not trusting Luke.. Jordan has been through a lot and he is just protective over his brother; just like Drew is with him.