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15. Chapter 15 Lessons Reviews

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Kiltie69
May 13 2013 04:36 AM

(Chapter 15 Review)

Been a year since I last did some reading and reviewing on the site.  Glad I started with re reading of Trials, forgot how good it was.  All ill say Billy is your writing can get an auld Scotsman to have wet eyes on a public train.  
Chapter was intense, looking forward to what is to come.

View Post Reply from Billy Brat (author)

It's awesome to have you back! I'm sure more than just me are glad to see you again, and writing.

Sorry about the water filled eyes :)
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PrivateTim
Apr 30 2012 07:44 PM

(Chapter 15 Review)

I wonder where we can go from here? You seem to have tied up a lot of storylines in the last couple of chapters.

I can't imagine a judge in KY imposing a $1,000,000 bail on someone who only earns probably no more than $40-50k. That would be a pretty clear violation of the 8th Amendment and the ADA wouldn't have asked for $1,000,000 knowing that. The ADA would ask for remand (no bail) since the preacher is new in town and therefore a flight risk and the severity of the charges. It would be up to the defense to ask for a reasonable bail, like $100,000, or even an OR release and then it is up to the judge to either split the difference or go with remand.

The remaining, but minor sub-plot might be what happens with JT? Is his experience today an epiphany or just temporary? If it is life changing then CPS has another case to deal with.

View Post Reply from Billy Brat (author)

Thanks Tim for the thoughtful review. Nothing was decided in the chapter concerning bail, or any other issue. Perhaps we'll learn what happened in the next chapter.

Again, thanks for taking the time to add a review. :)
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Lisa
Apr 30 2012 12:44 PM

(Chapter 15 Review)

Wow this was an intense chapter. I'm glad Andy finally was able to put his mom to rest. Funny, no matter how old you are, when you lose your mom, it's like part of you dies too. And no matter how old you are, you still miss your mom. And poor Andy had to lose his mom at such an early age.

I'm concerned about the trial for Joey's "parents". I use that term loosely. lol The judge already ruled about bail, so why should he give a fuck if the Adams' can't afford it? It's their problem, not the Judge's.

Judge Whitt should just lock 'em up and throw away the key. Oh, and why wasn't Andy's dad there at the trial? Shouldn't he have been there since he's the "foster" family?

Another great chapter Billy! Looking forward to more!

View Post Reply from Billy Brat (author)

Thank you Lisa!

I always look forward to your reviews :)
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comicfan
Apr 29 2012 11:08 PM

(Chapter 15 Review)

Another chapter down. I see you made some other changes to the story which flowed nicely since my last view of the tale. Can't wait for more.

View Post Reply from Billy Brat (author)

Thanks Wayne. I have some soul searching to do before the next chapter.
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