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The Hostage Reviews
(Chapter 3 Review)
I so love it when I read a story that is completed. This a great and fun story. Can't wait for the meeting on the field and find out if Bradley know who his keep was all along.
(Chapter 1 Review)
So interesting. Why do I have the feeling that Bradley will have no problem figuring out shere he is? Well, guess I will see. on to next chapter
(Chapter 4 Review)
Yay! I think everyone wanted that to happen in the end! 
if Frosty thinks she sucks at reviews you havent read my shitty ones yet lol.
So I'll leave it on a 'I loved the story and hope you write much more in future'
if Frosty thinks she sucks at reviews you havent read my shitty ones yet lol.
So I'll leave it on a 'I loved the story and hope you write much more in future'
(Chapter 3 Review)
oooh this is fun So bradley only had nagging thoughts, but he wants to know if he was right. hmm gonna be a shock. 
Oh, there was one thing wrong... you saying that we are tolerating your crap. let me tell you...It's not crap!!!!!!!!!!! It is a really fun story that, edit or no edit, I really like. so no more comments like that at the bottom (stop waving finger )
So bradley only had nagging thoughts, but he wants to know if he was right. hmm gonna be a shock. Oh, there was one thing wrong... you saying that we are tolerating your crap. let me tell you...It's not crap!!!!!!!!!!! It is a really fun story that, edit or no edit, I really like. so no more comments like that at the bottom (stop waving finger
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(Chapter 2 Review)
Wow...hot 
Again that chapter flew by! Like Maria said, it sounds like Bradley has figured out it's Andrew, wonder what will spiral from this now.
Great storytelling, don't you stop
Again that chapter flew by! Like Maria said, it sounds like Bradley has figured out it's Andrew, wonder what will spiral from this now.
Great storytelling, don't you stop
(Chapter 1 Review)
Well this is a very interesting start
Again, I like the style of your writing and the first chapter has plenty in it to make me want to move on
I'll say more once I've read more, but I like so far
Keep up the good work, there are people here that need you're stories like sweets
(yes I go overboard on emotes so shoot me lol)
Again, I like the style of your writing and the first chapter has plenty in it to make me want to move on
I'll say more once I've read more, but I like so far
Keep up the good work, there are people here that need you're stories like sweets
(yes I go overboard on emotes so shoot me lol)
(Chapter 4 Review)
That's what i'm doing right now Really nice
went through so many diff emotions through the story! ummm.. 
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well, what do ya know.. i suck at reviews
(Chapter 4 Review)
I'm just so happy. This was a perfect good night story, it went the full circle and left a smile on my face. Thank you for writing this!
(Chapter 3 Review)
I'm grinning, this is so much fun. *__O
Too much fun actually, I should be sleeping by now
Too much fun actually, I should be sleeping by now
(Chapter 2 Review)
Now this I did not expect... blindfolded best friend begging to be touched and boy did Andrew tough him I'm thinking Bradley had recocnized his best friend somehow and saw his opportunity coming? Hmm...
Such a good narrator you are, you create a delightful and easy to imagine picture of the situation. Me likes!
I'm thinking Bradley had recocnized his best friend somehow and saw his opportunity coming? Hmm... Such a good narrator you are, you create a delightful and easy to imagine picture of the situation. Me likes!
(Chapter 1 Review)
Haha... Interested much! After found out that this will link with the Last Pose, nothing would keep me away from this!
The start was interesting and the GAME, well... imbish but sounds like a fun plot device! Toy are such a great author, I'm so happy to have found you.
**reads on**
The start was interesting and the GAME, well... imbish but sounds like a fun plot device! Toy are such a great author, I'm so happy to have found you.
**reads on**
(Chapter 4 Review)