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4. Chapter 4 - Where I Know A Little About My Past... And Regret it. Reviews Book 2 of Tales of The Underworld

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stanollie
Jun 28 2012 09:04 AM

(Chapter 4 Review)

A very interesting premise.  After 4 chapters I think the story would benefit
from the assistance of a good editor.
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Stephen
Jun 01 2012 06:39 PM

(Chapter 4 Review)

What a concept these Dasunai are. I imagine if we gave
starfish another billion years to evolve then we'd have
Dasunai. And you have made them into beings rather
than creatures. I like that part.

Your characters are fun too. I like the humor.
I'll wait for more, curious to see what else you'll
surprise us with...

View Post Reply from JamesAlexander (author)

Hehe, glad you liked it :) I hope there are going to be some surprises, but that's for the characters to tell.. ;)

Cheers!
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