Riley,
I thought that was hilarious.  The atmosphere was so relaxed.  It was like I was there, not only watching, but it felt like I was drunk watching.  I recognised that slightly drunk feeling, when the jokes seem funnier than they are, and you don't really care.  To write like this you have to live it in your imagination.  You certainly captured it in mine.  I love reading your work.  Looking forward to the next chapter.
Paul

hah i liked this chapter. It was cute and strangely humerus. Especially since they were drunk shopping for clothes. I wonder how much he spent on Luke. LOL...
Maybe being drunk was good for them. They said and did things that they wouldnt normally. Haha!
Keep'em Coming!!
Remijay

I just started reading this a few days ago and I have to say its an amazing story. I'm just disappointing that I now have to wait for the next chapter But hopefully the wait won't be too long. I really do hope Luke and Ryan can get together they would be so great together. I know that Luke did mess up not helping him get out of the hang but I think they can get passed that, at least I hope they can. It was quite a difficult read at times, I didn't really know stuff like that happened in same sex schools I suppose I'm a bit naive. I could not imagine going through something like that, Although I think some of you readers have forgot that Ryan actually has been involved in the hang, shaving Kienan's pubes so he isn't all innocent. Don't get me wrong though Ryan is my favorite character and I wouldn't want something like this to happen to anyone.
I think Simon and Toby will get through Toby's past with Grace's help they seem great together and I think they both need each other. I still think Toby has more to share though.
I guess I will start reading In safe hands now until a knew chapter appears and see what Elliot's story is he seems like an interesting character although we haven't seen much of him although I feel that will change soon, I just hope I don't become too attached to him as I have with Ryan as I'm hoping Luke and Ryan get together not Luke and Elliot although after reading In safe hands I probably won't know who I want to get together but I feel Ryan really needs someone in his life hopefully it will work out.
Anyway thanks for the really good read so far and again I hope the next chapter isn't too far away

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Riley, Riley, Riley.
Wow.
I came across this story on another site a year or so ago. The title put me off, but it had a good rating so I read a bit of the first chapter but didn't really get drawn in. Maybe I was looking for something else at the time, ahem. Or maybe I was temporarily insane.
I've just spent a couple of days reading through all your chapters here, couldn't put it down. I even snuck in some reading time on my phone at work, you must be good!
You have captured these characters and their environment so well. I attended a similar school and it really took me back. The two chapters with The Hangs actually made my heart pound, for real. And not in a good way. But hey that's art right, it's supposed to make you feel. And the description of the surgery, I almost feel like I experienced the procedure (cringe). Some sweet moments too, like raspberry smoothies (aww) and drunk shopping (lol). It's been a rollercoaster.
Thank you so much for sharing this story. I can't wait to read the rest (hint hint)!
Hurley

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I agree w/Mike; this was the funniest chapter yet.

Hysterical! Drunk shopping! Ryan is a pisser! And I think there's a lesson in here somewhere, oh  yeah, never ride on an escalator drunk. lol Backwards or forwards. hehe

I can't wait to see Luke's mom's reaction to all those bags of clothes! She's going to know that what they bought was way more than $50.00. lol

Thank God for Ryan. Maybe Luke will model the undies for him? lol

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All is forgiven. Really upbeat and chilled.
I feel a lesson in alway signing out of facebook is about to be learned.

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LOL I thought the no dating till he was 16 a decent out when you take into account the facts that the smartklamp misrepresented him and that he really did have most of his blood south of the border for other reasons.
And of course we want to hear more about Owen and Olly.  You can't simply set up such a first sight connection and leave us hanging!

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This was so funny.  This is also exactly what the boys needed.  They needed to chill and have a little fun.  Drunk shopping.. hahahha.  I have no idea about that.  Really, I don't... Much.  I cracked up at the underware shopping, that was too funny.  It was cute to watch Ry be able to spoil Luke.  Now Luke just needs to be able to model the undies.

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This is a great chapter. I really enjoyed the fact that nothing major happened yet it was as interesting, possibly more, than other chapters. Thanks for the update, I'm going to keep my eyes open for the next one haha.

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Great chapter, and not before time.
I think this was the funniest chapter to date, loved it. =D
Thanks Riley.

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Hola Senior Riley,
Been of reading other stories so I'm playing catch up. Another good infuriating chapter. That said, Scott Landon is a bullying coward and is using this "Hang" tradition as a guise to bully without being labeled as such. Notice how he is always with his other minions Mitchell, Matt and JJ when he's doing these Hangs?  He also tends to take things way to far as is evidenced by his willingness to snip off Simons foreskin, The boy is demented and really needs to a truly severe hang performed on him to see how he likes it, thought I don't really think that he would learn anything from it.
I'm glad that Ryan punched Scott Landon in the nose, though to me it isn't enough for this guy.
Um, guess that's it for now.
H.

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Grace is the absolute best. I'm sure Toby doesn't even realize how truly lucky he is to have a mom who is so cool, so insightful and so supportive of him. Of course this was evident when they moved from Florida. Now at least Simon can feel safe and comfortable at their house.

And of course every mom has to have the 'safe sex' discussion, whether their child likes girls or boys. She's certainly not doing it to embarrass them.

So now Simon realizes that Toby has liked him 'like that' for a very long time. Maybe as long as Simon has liked Toby, 'like that'. Toby has to learn how to talk about his feelings with Simon, not to shun him or block him out and make Simon feel as if he did something wrong.

I'm glad they seemed to work everything out for now. I'm looking forward to the next chapter where hopefully we'll see a drunk Luke and Ryan. lol

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This is really getting good! Thanks RJ

interesting very interesting. i think this is going to be fun to see through

Yay!  A new chapter.  These two little monkeys are adorable.  I feel so bad for sweet little Simon.  I hope he fesses up soon to his parents.  I am interested to see what happens with all that.  Luke's mom handled the whole snip snip situation very well, I bet she just floats along with this too. This was a good chapter. Not so much painful drama but importants stuff none the less.  So all that being said, lets get back to drunken Luke and Ryan.  Oh and also....  El-li-ot????? I think I have some Reese's pieces if that would make him appear sooner, although they might not last long as I have decided to add them to these yummy cupcakes I want to make.
Tootles!
Carrie

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Riley,
As you've pointed out, I know NOTHING about about future chapters, but I have to say that Toby's reaction isn't a good sign. Simon is already starting to have his doubts, their 'make up sex' aside.  Grace may - hopefully - be able to salvage things for Toby, but she can't be with them 24/7 so Toby's gonna need to learn a few things for himself if he wants to keep his golden boy - Simon.
Good chapter.  Now let's get back to a drunk Luke and Ryan.

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I like this chapter.... It was sweet and innocent. Plus Toby's mom having the talk with them, before and after was good. Mother's like that are hard to find. The chapter in all was lighthearted even though Toby kept getting into a attitude. Simon did exactly what i would have. And almost done alot of times...
Thanks for the latest Chapter Riley. Hugs! Keep'em coming. Remijay <3

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Riley:  Thanks for the latest chapter.  I've been reading this and the previous story for sometime.
The first story broke my heart when Miguel's whole family died in the car crash; and Elliott was absolutely forlorn.
The current story's in-depth and ultra personal exploration of circumcision is fascinating.  Since I lost my foreskin days after my birth, I had no recollection of circumcision.
I found the "hanging" tradition at the boy's school  excruciating difficult to read. How a school could "look the other way" at such sexual abuse is beyond me.  
And now we are up to the reconciliation of Simon and the incredibly gifted but socially flawed Toby.  Toby's mother is a great gift to both the boys.  How lucky they are.
Thank you for expanding my glossary of terms with 'punnet', a term unknown to most American speakers of English.
And I'd like to point out the correction of 'break handless' to "brake handles'.  It will read better.

I hope Luke and Elliott get to meet officially soon.  Thanks.

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only recently started reading, im really curious to see whats going to happen with Luke and Ryan.
oh and Simon and Toby. Cant't wait for the next chapter
great job once again Riley

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Wow, nice chapter. Simon and Toby... I wonder whats going to happen now? I would be angry at Toby too for how he handled the situation. But Im glad that his mother told him to chase after Simon. I hope everything will be better for them... As for Ryan, i know that he still feels the sting of being hung, come on man, shit happens. Anyway, Luke and Ryan drinking Tequila? Things are going to either getting heated in the bedroom, or Lukes parents are going to find out and things will not be so pretty for them... I hope for the best for them... Maybe they will explore being intimate.
Keep up the great work... Til next time. Remijay <3

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Oh NOOOO, my NERVES   Tequila? Now they're going to blame it on the TEQUILA ...    whatever happens...Arrrgh!
I share Lisa's sentiments to the T re. Simon and Toby.
I get so mad with some of these boys that I can almost poke my arm through the screen of this laptop hehehe but what a tale we are able to enjoy...Ta stax so much, Riley  

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Wow, didn't see that one coming about Toby. I can see where he would find it hard to trust people after his experience. And wow, they did start young! lol

I'm sure Simon wasn't about to end their relationship b/c of that. I think he just needed to get away from Toby b/c Toby was just venting his anger and saying things he didn't mean. The problem is, Toby thinks he's dirty or not fit to be with Simon, or some othe nonsence. I'm hoping Simon can reassure Toby by his actions that his feelings for him haven't changed.

I LOVE Luke and Simon's dad; he's a pisser! Really funny guy and so cool for a dad! =)

Now, what will happen to L&R while they're up in Luke's room getting trashed on tequila? lol

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You have the talent of making the casual conversation, an interesting read. That's something I've noticed in particular when reading your stories.  I really loved the dialogue between Geoff, Ry and Luke, around work, the ironing, and the 'hidden topi'c relating to Ryan's recent issues.
Similarly a few chapters back, the  conversation between Luke and Lucy in the car coming back from the doctors. They manage to keep the flow of the story an interesting read.

Geoff: "Don’t tell anyone, but he likes to call it his wi…”
What? The English term, 'willy'.. or the American term 'wiener'? I'm thinking 'willy' being that they're Brits and all. but Either one would be an embarrassing fact for an older teenager.

What's going to happen now? I'm thinking it's high time Luke and Ry get together They both deserve it. Could a drunken night on Tequila be the beginning of something special?
Can't wait to find out.
Cheers Riley

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Dude you are SOOO harsh.  Geez, give a guy a little readers choice thingy and he get's all high and might..

Let's recap where you left - Simon and Toby - fighting, maybe over.
Then you give us two very horny teens and alcohol.  Riggghhhttt that's safe place to leave.  :-P
Looking into my crystal ball, I see a new king of cliff in 2013 - Riley Jericho.
Time to chance my signature line.

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I have a feeling that this could get intresting with Luke and Ryan getting drunk

Keep up the good work this story really is amazing

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Hi Riley.
I do hope that there will still be some fall out from what happened to Simon, those responsible need to be taken to task as well as the school for turning a blind eye on this hazing type of activity that it must have known was taking place over the years, as well their mum going through the roof when she finds out about it.

I guess I needed this chapter to calm the poor nerves down a bit after the super-intense previous chapters. Yikes!
Now what I really experience as a tease is the following:
[“This morning?” Luke shook his head in surprise. “It feels like days ago already!” He shrugged. “It was fine. No damage.” And I saw that guy again – from the opticians, he thought secretly.]
And somehow I see trouble on the horizon for Ryan and Luke. But then again, well yes, let 'em roll Riley

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I ditto everyone else; I'm really glad Simon was ok and he didn't get cut. I'm also glad him and Toby seemed to have made up. I'm really curious now about Toby's story about his last b/f. And I think I asked this in the chapter when they first got together, but they are young. How many years before did Toby have this b/f? How old was he? Ten? lol Seriously though, if he's fourteen/fifteen now, (they are freshman, right?), was he like twelve? That is still pretty young. Anyway, I'm looking foward to hearing  about it.

Lucy's great, sorta manipulating Ryan into coming over for dinner. I hope he and Luke have a chance to talk and Luke can try to cheer him up.

Great chapter Riley!

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I read the previous couple of chapters out of order (doh!) but that just made it more tense. I'll have to stop reading these before bed. I'm exited about the sleep over but also looking forward to Toby's story. All good. Thanks.

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Well i agree with Carrie76 and i am glad that Simon was not really hurt. But i also have to add that you hit the breaks really bad. I mean chapter 31 was so energised had so much speed or power in it up until the very end, then you post chapter 32 and all that power is just gone - that was a bit of a bummer. Even so it was a another great chapter and i really look forward to the next one.

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I am so glad that sweet Simon was not hurt.  I like him and Toby together.  This chapter was pretty good.  I like the way you built Ryan back up.  I think he needed to fight his demons so to speak.  I don't usually condone violence but no one gets to hurt people like they did Ryan and especially with what they were planing to do to Simon.  I say good for them that they handled it.  
I have to say though, you are a tease.  I want to know what happens when Ryan stays the night.  I hope its devilishly bad.  This story is so good though.  I can't wait to get it all together.

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I agree w/Remijay! Fuckin' A, man! I'm glad Landon got his but omg, Simon's bits! Luke's bits! They'll both need to go see Dr.T. Holy shit.

I'm thrilled that Ryan came to Luke and Simon's rescue. =) A thought crossed my mind though: although Ryan did 'save them', I wonder what he was thinking when he obviously followed Luke in there and saw what was going on. Was he thinking that, sure, Luke runs in to save his brother from The Hang, but watched and laughed with everyone else at HIS hang yesterday! That's something I would probably be thinking. Maybe I'd be a little annoyed that Luke would so readily run in to save Simon, (ok, granted they are brothers), and just leave Ryan to, well, literally to hang. Not intending that as a pun. But in any case, I am so glad that Ryan did come to their rescue and put his thoughts and feelings aside, (if he had the thoughts I mentioned), for his best friend and his brother.

As far as Toby: I definitely could see why he was so upset with Simon. It seemed like Simon was ignoring him; not including him in his conversations, not inviting him to play tennis with them.....but the way I read it, by Simon saying "us" to whoever he was talking to, I think he meant him and Toby, not him and Luke, like Toby had thought. They really need to talk. Wait until Toby finds out what happened to Simon.

I also have to agree with the majority of the reviewers here: there has to be some action taken against Landon and Matt. JJ was at least trying to talk Landon out of his crazy, psycho actions. When, (and I'm sure it'll be when and not if), Luke's parents find out what happened, they are going to have a fit. I just hope Ryan doesn't get in trouble for breaking Landon's nose.

Terrific chapter Riley! I was holding my breath the whole time Simon was being tortured. Ok, gotta go vote now!

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'K, have to somehow *squint* mine eyes not to see what others have reviewed; but I just wanted to add to the last chapter  (29) I think I agree with our fellow follower about: "circs often get a poor press, but its mostly to do with infant human rights (which is understandable), rarely because cut guys feel badly done by on how well it works afterwards."
My nephew confided to his mothers brother the following: " I'm so glad you *told* mommy to allow us to retract all the time and clean ourselves properly; but what about Zeee; WHY did he grew close?"
What actually happened to Zeee was that [bless the doctor into eternity] he was ENLIGHTENED.He only surgically cut off the TIP of Zeee's foreskin...and Zeee, being an Afrikaner Caucasion South African, is ever grateful for that "curcumcision", 'cause he fits-in.
Zeee is happy today, he still fits in (in South Africa)... so the same with Luke (North America; more specifically USA) ; its a matter of culture, or becoming part of a culture, 'K? or even personal preferance; like Luke, whilst bubbling and stumbling all over their ...whatevers. It is actually sad to read about situations like this;Recall that Simon apparently don't want ANY of this circumcision stuff...heheheh...let's see how THIS ONE is going to *unfold*, eh?
Riley, some of us are waiting in anticipation to see how you are going to handle *this* one
As for now, I'm off onto  our one and only Riley
Onwards - Voorwaarts
I really love this story...

Well, I've just knee-jerked and nail-biting myself blue-and pimple-nickle from where I am This is just too much for my constitution heheheh I couldn't resist to read on and On and ON -- sorry, without any reviews in the interim. But well, WHO is gonna blame me for being totally infatuated with Ryan and Luke (or is it actually Luke and Ryan?)
Now that I've caught up with everything (except for 30 and 31, that I'm gonna tackle RIGHT AFTER THIS) I have to say that my heart ain't going to handle it. I've been reading/monitoring every lil BIT of what is going on - even on the REVIEWS, but just do not go ahead (oh my, just HOW gay can you get? heheheh) This is one out of 7 (SEVEN) stories that REALLY jumps right into me. Luke (gaurgeous guy); Simon (very much my type 'o guy as well [you authors tend to type these youngsters rather *adult*, but Simon is a guy I can REALLY relate to); but RYAN - well, Ryannnn actually blisters me no end...Man-oh-Man, RYAN is actually my kind of guy, OK?!!! He is just WOW the way he is depicted...Eishhh!
I SO much love this story that I'm actually detracted from many others that I also am MADLY in LOVE with...but, these guys - and the frequency they are being posted - is just SUPER, Riley on the par with Billy Chase [my lil heartthrob]

Fucking A! What a chapter. When the fighting started i broke out in a worried sweat. i hope Simon isnt too badly hurt. And I'm so glad that Ryan came to both of their defenses. What are best friends and brothers for? Lol If Luke didnt have the klamp removed he might have survived the kick. All in all though, i hope landon and his gang remembers what they should and shouldnt do. Especially with scissors, wtf? Anyone with a brain, would know that cutting foreskin will make the person bleed, and maybe bleed to death.
Awesome chapter, keep them coming. Remijay <3

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Are these kids insane? I mean cutting off Simon's bits like that? Or at least planning to, and It seems that Landon did actually cut at least partially.
This is a crime, and a police matter.No longer a childish prank. In fact heads should be rolling. Where are the staff?
Very difficult to read, having said that, I understand it's part of the story, and sometimes bad things in life do happen.
Thanks Riley.

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What a barbaric arsehole that Landon is.  I concur with the previous reviews: there needs to be some serious consequences for him and surely the parents, school, and maybe the law would get involved.
I wonder, Riley, if you have in mind for Luke and Ryan to be punished too - that'd be typical fare for a school - and maybe they'll finally get some time alone in detention or something.  I'm busting for them to, you know, just get close to each other.  ;-)

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It does feel good, but I feel like I have been on an emotional roller coaster. Some of these guys have some serious mental issues.

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At last, payback but I think there will be more yet.
What happened to Simon is a criminal act and needs to be delt with. Also the teaching staff need to be woken up to what they are turning a blind eye to. No school can say that teachers and the Head are unaware of this kind of thing (Hanging) in fact teachers hear everything that goes on at a school eventually and this hanging has been going on for some time. Maybe its time for some expulsion's and a new head.
Apart from that can we have more Luke and Ryan kicking the crap out of them a bit more before the teachers arrive .......PLEASE.

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You are damn right, it feelt great. I guess Ryan saw that something was very wrong just by a look at Luke so thats why he went straight after him to deliver a few well placed and very well deserved punches. About Simon, well to be honest i like the fact that he too needs to be circumcised and hopefully he will be but i sure as hell hope he wasnt due to a pair of scissors.

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Jeez! At least the hard part is over, I wonder what the consequences are going to be for everyone involved, as well as Toby.

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Oh god, finally Landon got what he deserved - although a bit late.  Hope Si is alright.

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Dammit, I wanna change my vote and vote you King of the Cliffies! You're killing me here Riley! What did Jacko want? Who's in trouble??? Is it Ryan??????????

I really loved seeing Elliot again! I'm trying to remember: was Elliot originally from England, or did he just live there at one point? Hopefully the boys will bump into each other again. But....stil rooting for Ryan. =)

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I continue to enjoy this great story, especially since the name "Hector" made its way in, though just in passing. I don't know very many "Hectors" except my uncle for whom I was named after, the actor Hector Elizando, and the greek mythical charactor Hector (not sure if he was a god or not). So thanks for putting that in the story.
Now at the end of this chapter you made mention of not-so-mystery-mystery boy and his part in the story. Well I don't usually try and predict what an author is going to come up with next in their story becuase I would always be wrong, but since you asked I'll take a shot.
I see a love trangle between Luke, Ryan and mystery boy and Luke having to choose between the two which will cause Luke great distress.
Anyway can't wait to see what really transpires. I know it will be good.
Hector

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another chapter of finely crafted writing and compelling story telling. I have to admit, I've started obsessing over ET. checking nightly for the latest installment and becoming increasingly agitated until I score a quick fix of a new chapter.
Guess I'll have to re-read it from the beginning just to get my fix until the next chapter comes online. great writing.

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Oh. . .what happened? ? Update soon, please!

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Oooh.. I cliffhanger, huh?
So mean!
Hope Ryan's okay.
I love the way you write the conversations between Luke and Lucy, they're comical at the right moments without being OTT.
Thanks Riley, and you can definitely count on my vote for the awards.
Mike.

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Hey Riley! Thank you so much for putting that little link there to vote for the 2012 stories. I went into the forum section and had no idea where to look! lol So thank you; "English Teen" definitely gets my nom. And Ryan; so glad he's nominated; I love him.

I'm so relieved that Luke's mishap didn't cause any permanent damage. But I must say, like at the beginning when Lucy and Luke went for the consultation, I would not have been in the same room as my son and the doctor. Being a mom, I'd be pretty embarrassed and you know, I wouldn't even have a choice; none of my sons would even ALLOW me in there with them! lol But I would trust the doctor to know what he's doing and plus I wouldn't even know what I was looking for anyway.

Lucy does handle embarrassing situations very well, I must say! As does Luke; it's good they were both able to joke about it! It was funny, when Luke asked about Ella, and Tiberius, (is that how it's spelled? No, it doesn't look right, Now I've got it! lol), said she wasn't the one assisting him today, I thought out would walk Ryans bff. lol Wouldn't that totally mortify poor Luke?

I'm looking forward to the next chapter when Luke gets back to school. I hope things are better with Ryan and of course with Ryan and Luke.

Great job Riley!

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Well Riley,
first of all thanks for another great chapter. I have to admit i was a little confused at the beginning of it because chapter 28 ended with Luke chatting on Facebook and then u start with Luke's Mom trying to calm the sea after a fight between herself and Luke.
But after that i enjoyed the humor and quite frankly you did put much of it in this chapter. Getting a boner in front of a doctor is embaressing enough but in front of your own mother must be almost every boys worst nightmare - hopefully we get Luke's view of this little event in the next chapter.
As for the details of the outcome of a circumcision you really know what your writing about. There is in fact a higher sensibility right after the cut but the owner gets used to it quite fast - at least i did - in about 7 - 10 days.
Anyway thanks again and hopefully you dont let us wait to long for the next one.
Sincery Azrael

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Wow, how embarrassing for Luke? Poor guy. Lol.
I was in a similar predicament when I was a little younger, aged ten, and that was embarrassing enough!
And Simon's next now, good to hear that Luke suffered no permanent damage to his tackle after the fall, and that the procedure went well. Hopefully Simon' will be a similar outcome. If indeed they go ahead with it. Maybe Lucy should book her husband in and see if she can get a '3 for the price of 2' deal? He-he!
And as for the sensitivity after being circ'd, I know only too well how true that is. Very sensitive, indeed. A lot of the negative comments about the subject claim that you lose sensitivity after having one, but in my case I found the opposite to be the case. The inner-pink skin (the sensitive part) is still there, it's just now in a different position. Sort of 'inside out' so to speak.
Anywhoo...Great chapter, thanks Riley.

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Hi Riley.  This was a really funny chapter.  I adore Luke's mom.   I cannot think of even one man who would want to be in this situation with his mother. Luke is very brave.  I feel bad though that Simon is going to have to go through all this too.  He is young though, he will survive. It will be interesting in the coming weeks to see what happens with the boys.

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Poor Ryan. I wonder if he's ever told anyone else about what his dad did to him. I hope he and Luke work things out if only because the longer he spends with Luke's dad the better - perhaps, eventually he could tell Geoff or give Luke permission to tell him.
The last couple of chapters were hard, Riley, but, I suppose, necessary. We're not out of the woods yet, but there are grounds for optimism that it'll work out OK for the boys.
Thanks again.

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Whew! I'm so relieved that Ryan isn't blaming Luke and he's ready to 'fight the good fight' so to speak as far as those asses Landon and Mitchell are concerned.

But I wanted to smack Luke upside his head! What the hell was he thinking, (or apparently NOT thinking!), when he joked about both of them showing their dicks that day. Omg Luke! Just when Ryan was acting like his old self again.

I am glad Ryan told Luke what his father did to him and how it affected him when Landon was smacking him. I'm optimistic that their friendship will remain intact. Haha, not like the Klamp, lol. I actually agree with Luke's mom about going to the ER. I don't know, the pain he was feeling didn't sound so good. He wouldn't want to risk any permanent damage.

One thing I don't get: there are so many stories where gay boys/men, whatever, are lamenting about not being able to have kids and/or not being able to give their parents grandchildren. What's up with that? Gay couples have kids all the time; all different ways. Why would Luke think something that's so outdated, unless he isn't aware that he can in fact, have kids.

Anyway....great chapter Riley!  Hope you had a great New Year!

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This Hang thing makes waterboarding look like a day at lake. Maybe this ought to be used as a form of torture.
Poor, poor Ry. I feel for him.
Great story telling.
Oh and Happy New Year.

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aw, why did it have to end? The chapter I mean. I could just read and read
And what a stark contrast between the last couple of chapters, and today's update? Such a pleasure to read.
And is it weird that the whole klamp removal scene was slightly arousing in a weird way? Hehe. I'm such a perv! Seriously.
Fantastic chapter, I needed that.
Can't wait for ch29.

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Not sure if I'm a 'Hoe', but I'll drop you a note anyway.
That was a bit of a relief to read. Sad, touching (no pun) and funny. Luke's character flaws, as well as his need to put his foot init make him more likeable.
I found peoples reaction to his standing by, rather than saving Ryan were interesting. You seemed to hit a raw nerve. I think everybody has been in both Ryan and or Luke's shoes in one way or another. Feeling like they were abandoned or like they should have done more.
Keep 'em coming.

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I really love this story; I'm always on the edge of my seat waiting for something to happen. I honestly can't wait till the next chapter!

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Great update! I feel like there is hope for the relationship. I hope neither one gets involved with Jacko for some reason. I am glad Ryan confided in Luke and think maybe this is a turning point for them.

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I've read this twice now.  I like the way we've got a glimmer of hope that Ryan be able to let his feelings for Luke, and Luke's trust in him, rise to the surface and help him recover from the trauma that was 'the hang'.  I even reckon there's a bit of hope that the taking apart of the SmartKlamp could, just possibly, result in a wonderful, accidental, but deeply-wanted sexual encounter.  Then again, there's plenty to go wrong on that front, too, with both guys being keen not to be seen to be gay in front of the other.
As usual - can't wait to read what happens next!
Thanks Riley for the terrific story.  

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Jesus.
I put off reading Broken for most of the week, for good reason. That was harrowing. I sped read my way through both and actually felt relief when the smart klamp broke. ugh.
You've knackered me out now. Going to sleep.
Cheers.

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I was truly upset by Chapter 26 and I had to jump to the end part of Chapter 27 before reading all of it.  I had to know that things would be better between Luke and Ryan.

When I become so emotionally involved in a story I give credit to the writer.

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I think Luke falling on the steps was the best thing that could have happened to their relationship. Ryan was understandably lashing out at Luke and I think if Luke didn't trip on the stairs and had gotten to Ryan's room, Ryan still would have yelled for him to leave.

I think they're going to be ok. Ryan didn't hesitate to come to Luke when Luke called him. He didn't tell Luke, too bad, you deserve this, I'm not helping you, see how it feels, etc., etc. He didn't hesitate to help Luke. I don't know why Luke turned on him when Ryan admitted to watching the SmartKlamp video. So what? That just shows us that Ryan really cares b/c he wanted to see what Luke was going through.

I was really pleased with Simon also. I'm glad he lashed into his brother. It doesn't matter that Luke regretted not helping Ryan, it doesn't matter that he felt so guilty; he needed to know that it wasn't ok that he didn't do anything. Deep down inside he know that Ryan would have tried to put a stop to it if the roles had been reversed. Yes, and plus Ryan saved Luke from that humiliation.

And Landon and Mitchell: they're a bunch of assholes. Landon just brushes it off as if it were nothing; as if he didn't humiliate and disgrace a "friend" in front ot so many people. He thinks Ryan will be fine? He thinks Ryan will just forgive him? He's delusional.

Terrific chapter Riley! Now I can breathe a sigh of relief, for now anyway, that Ryan is at least talking to Luke. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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you know me... i have been following this story since last year. Grant it... It's no where near the chapter that it was last year but oh well. A good/great read anyway. The detail and the imaginery that you have put into this chapter, not including other's. It's wonderful, i know a few people that were "hung" but they came back from the humilation of it... Great friends stick with you until the end, even then it goes beyond that... Ry, for his sake took the bullet for a friend. But he didnt expect what happened to him, did. At least he is still the caring friend. Also it helps that he loves Luke.
Keep'em coming.
Remijay <3

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Ok Riley.  You fixed it and did it wonderfully.  Its almost like Karma said " haha kiddo!  gotcha back!"  I am glad that Luke and Ryan were not seriously hurt.  It will take time for the boys to come back together but Ryan helped Luke when he needed it.  He is still in his heart so there is a chance.   Luke said the one thing that will give them a chance.  Luke admitted  he needed him.  Ryan will need him too and hopefully know it shortly.  They will be ok though.  One day at a time.  
P.S.  You are for serious going to have to like send these two to Disney, or Six Flags.  Maybe Comic-con or something. Hell right now I would settle for them just going out for an ice cream cone!  Keep up the good work dearest and I will be right here waiting for the next chapter... Well maybe not right here because I have to eat left over dinner from last night.  

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* Re posted*
I'm still feeling angry about the chapter before last, though I need to clarify that I was angry at the events that unfolded. Not at the story itself, or the author. I genuinely love the story, and I had up until that point also really liked Luke. I think I still do, but he made a big mistake, or more appropriately didn't act on something he should have. I also think it's cause I've really taken to Ryan. Perhaps more so than any other character in both the story, and all the other stories I've read over the years. I can just really connect with him. I hope he continues to be a part of the story in some shape or another.
His actions to helping Luke after that awful fall, cement my feelings even more.  Despite still hurting physically and emotionally from "the hang" and feeling betrayed by his best friend and his other friends, he still managed to put all that aside when Luke needed his help.
Onto Luke, I'm in two minds, I'll probably know how I feel, better as the story progresses. Though I do hope there's no serious damage to his 'member' after the fall. I feared the worse until they had managed to examine it. He might not have acted the way he should have, but he's not a bad person. Now Landon? I really hopes he gets his. He sooo deserves knocking down a peg or two.
Cheers, Riley.  

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I wanted to say what a great story you have written in “An English Teen, Circumcised in the USA”. I discovered it on a Saturday, and could barely tear myself away from it to go to sleep so that I could begin reading again on Sunday. I just moved, so I had plenty of things that I should have been doing, but I couldn’t bear not knowing what happened next in the characters’ lives.
Let me say now, after having read Chapter 26, “Broken”, I wish that I wouldn’t have discovered the story until it was completed! I don’t think that I have ever read anything faster than the words of that chapter, devouring it in order to discover what happened next to poor Ryan. You skillfully sucked me into the story until I was emotionally invested in the characters, and it is terrible to now have to wait for the next chapter to see how Ryan reacts to the horrible molestation that he suffered!
I had to get hold of myself after I was finished with the chapter, because it caused a darkness in my heart and soul as I mourned Ryan’s mistreatment and betrayal. I had to mentally shake myself as I actually said aloud, “The characters are fictional, and the situation is not real, dammit, so snap out of it!”
I think that the obvious thought that occurs to any reader who empathizes with a character is a story is, “What would I do in (in this case) Ryan’s place? If he retreats from the world as much as possible, quits tennis, lets his grades at school go, broods in his room; he is bound to run into his abusive father. I don’t think that there would be any tolerance of that kind of behavior from his dad. How would his father respond if he learned of the hazing, especially the sexual aspects of it? Would he say, “Chin up and take it like a man!” or would he see the sexual assault of his son as a personal violation of himself? Since Ryan obviously is made of “strong stuff” due to his survival of his father’s abuse, maybe he will stuff his emotions inside and put on a brave face.
However, you did choose to name the chapter “Broken”, and I suspect that you didn’t use that title capriciously. You even described the moment at which Ryan went over the emotional precipice, and was broken.
I hope that you won’t let any of your tender-hearted readers (of which I am one) influence you to sugar-coat Ryan’s response so that he will be “all better” now. You’ve written a very compelling drama here, and I hope that you will portray the ugly consequences that result from the terrible things that Ryan has endured.  I completely agree with other reviewers that Luke doesn’t deserve Ryan since he made no move to go get a teacher! He even allowed his own lust and curiosity at seeing Ryan masturbated to cause him to let the abuse continue! With friends like him, who needs enemies?
Thank you for sharing your talents, and for the emotional roller coaster ride! Please don’t be too long in continuing the story. It was really great reading it all in one go over an almost non-stop period of three days! I hope I can continue to read it while the characters and events are still fresh in my mind. Great work Riley! Really great!

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I am conflicted with this chapter. On one hand the violence tempered by the humiliation inflicted on Ryan makes me sick, however the fact that your writing conveys such strong feelings and responses is a credit to its power an impact. It is even more powerful given that it is a fairly long chapter that sustains the feelings and tension within a single prolonged scene. So even if I personally don't seek out or appreciate this amount of violence, I was moved by its force and its emotion. On a lighter note,time will tell if Luke was the one to call out that Benson was coming and has redeemed himself a little.

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We now see that Luke and Elliot have had their first sighting of each other.  That was an interesting tactic used there by Elliot.  Smooth and not to obvious, lol....who are we kidding??...He intentionally and blatantly pulled his shirt up to be flirty and a tease to Luke.  I am guessing that quite some time has passed for Elliot.  I just don't see him being like that unless quite a bit of time has passed and he has learned to live with the pain of his loss.

ps...   I must not be a very good 'gay boy' as I don't have an iPhone LOL  

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That was just horrible. How can anyone of those kids think that that was ok? The spanking? Landon was really getting into it. The kids were all laughing. It was horrific that these kids are so immoral. They don't know right from wrong. Yeah, I can see a simple wedgie; I've been hearing about those for years, but this, this Hang, is appalling.

I ditto wildone: I would hope to God that Luke was grinning and laughing at Riley's distress. I hope it was just Riley's poor state of mind that thought he saw Luke grinning, but really didn't. But I gotta tell you Riley, I am extremely disappointed in Luke. I can see where he knew whatever he would have said to try to get those guys to stop the Hang would fly over deaf ears, but when Landon starting spanking Ryan, that should have been the point where Luke screamed at them to stop. Then he should have high-tailed it out of there and found a teacher. And the teachers; what the fuck is up with them? It seemed like those boys were in the bathroom for HOURS. Didn't any teachers roaming the halls HEAR ALL THE FRIGGEN NOISE IN THE BATHROOM???

And you know, I wouldn't blame Ryan if he never talked to Luke again. I know that it wasn't Luke's fault that these Neanderthals started the Hang, but he could have stopped it. He could have gotten someone from the staff, anonymously and the boys in the bathroom wouldn't know it was him who ratted them out. I am so disappointed in Luke. He did not step up to the plate. He was no best friend to Ryan. And Ryan took all this shit trying to fucking protect Luke! Gah, I'm so angry.

Anyway....I also noticed in other chapters, but in this chapter in particular, that you like to use the term 'safe hands' or 'in safe hands' a few times throughout the chapter. Just reminds me of poor, sweet Miguel......you torture me Riley. lol

It's three a.m. but I'm so distressed over this chaper I gotta read something funny. Damn you.lol

Please hurry up and update; I wanna make sure Ryan isn't going to retreat inside his head and shut everyone out. And agreeing with Rebel's review, I hope that Ryan doesn't suffer psychological damage. I can definitely see his spirit breaking; he has a horrible home life and school and his friends were the only things keeping him sane. Now all his friends are mocking him and he feels that he lost Luke as a best friend due to his "grinning" and inactions, so what else is there to live for?

Ok,I'm gonna shut up now. =)

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i remember this chapter. i know it wasnt easy to write. Let alone read after it was finished. But some things have to be written. It fiils in the story with more depth... Now, if i was put into the situation like that, i wouldnt allow myself to become hard. I'm glad that i have controll over something like that Anyway, what happened to Ry is what happens when you take a fall for a friend. You never know the outcome until its finished. I also remember the next chapter. Great chapter btw, Remijay

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I forgot how close to the edge(over the edge) this went.  As others have noted your skill at dragging Ryan and us to this point will move us as well as Luke and Ryan on. I hope the subsequent chapters are posted soon so we and Ryan are not long kept in this horrid place.  Thanks for all your work.  Pax.

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Don't understand where that came from -- seem like gratuitous violence and out of context for this story -- just to "sex" up and otherwise sturdy story.

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Wow, that was painful to read even though I wasn't there

I do have to admit that I didn't really understand what the 'hanging' was with all the explanation from the last chapter. Now, sadly, I do understand and wish I didn't. The fact that Ryan really has so much against him in life with his parents, his hidden sexuality and now to be exposed as ridiculed as not being 'adequate' (high school term, not mine), this may have been the straw to break the camels back.

I feel Luke was the one that yelled about the principle. I hope that Ryan in his distress looking to see Luke smiling was just that a delusion.

Yes what the other students did was illegal and criminal, the scary thing is until recently things like this went on (and sadly still do) in fraternity froshing and I'm sure some schools have the same initiating freshmen in High School.

Am I mad at you Riley...No. As an author you have pushed your characters and your audience to a dangerous precipice, now we will see what happens to ease everyone down gently. I am confident that you will do this for all of us .

People would argue it should be toned down but I need to see the chapter in the entire context of the story before I make any such judgement.

Thanks for the chapter Riley ....... I think

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I have to admit that I only scanned these last two chapters. It was just too brutal for me to read in detail.

This incident is the stuff of lifelong psychological complications and definitely took this story down a dark path. Ryan was sexually harassed and almost raped by bullies. I know that they won't go to anyone higher up but even reading about a fictional event like this had me at a rage. Thank god a bystander screamed that the principal was coming. It broke the mob mentality and reminded them that what just happened was too far.

I want Landon to suffer. I could see someone actually killing the bullies and a lot of innocent bystanders because of the hang. Please don't let it come to that.

Finally, I will definitely continue to read your updates but if this is a tragedy then let us know. I don't read tragedies.

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That was so hard to read and almost like the wreck on the side of the road you can't look away from. I hope Luke can help Ryan get his self confidence back. Poor Ryan having to deal with this humiliation on top of a painful homelife. Reading this was painful.

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That was painful to read. If I had my way, every one of those little twats would be rounded up and publicly tormented and humiliated ten times worse than what Ryan just had to endure.
There's schoolboy pranks, and then there's ganging up and bullying someone who's defenseless. I don't see much difference in what they did, and molestation, and in a way, it was.  Molested and humiliated for their sick pleasure. And Luke *grinning*? I expected better from him.
He doesn't deserve Ryan.

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RILEY!  Grr.  Poor Ryan.  Luke will help him pick up the pieces if Ryan will let him.  I just hope Ryan lets him.  That was a hard chapter to read but true, you didn't promise it would be easy.  I don't think a story would be good if it was all sunshine and roses.  I am still mad at you though.    Post the next chapter so I can get unmad at  you.   ( p.s. It was still awesome and you are still wonderful.)

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Riley if memory serves you have expanded this section and made it clear that this is a tradition at the school and perhaps a bit more understandable as such.  I would hate to be hung but you have made both the tradition and the terror very real.  I continue to love your writing and am glad to see you moving along with the story.  Thanks as always for your work.  Pax

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Those kids are ruthless! Omg, how mortifying! Poor Ryan. This whole thing started when he was protecting Luke from being found out with his SmartKlamp, right? I sure hope Ryan doesn't blame Luke. I hope he's not angry with him.I do think that Luke should have made more of an effort to stop this. Even though he couldn't stop it, he should have tried, b/c at least then Ryan would know that Luke was on his side. You know what I mean?

I hope Ryan isn't so embarrassed that he's going to avoid Luke now. I mean how humiliating is it to know the boy you're crushing on, who happens to be your best friend, is watching you?

Ah, I'm on pins and needles Riley! Great job!

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Just dragging out the agony, for Ryan, Luke and your readers. Can't wait to see where this goes. This story could have been trite and it is so very good. thanks

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Poor Ryan.
Those kids are brutal! Lol. There's no way I'd be forced to 'spill my seed' in front of a crowd of hooligans. Lol
When 'hanging' wedgie was first mentioned, it made me think of someone who's hanging on a hook or something from the back of their underwear. The 'hanging wedgie' in this one is ten times worse, hehehe.
Thanks Riley.
Oh, btw. I see there's a LondonLolly FB page on Facebook...Any relation?  

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Still loving the story although I must admit.  I don't see the big deal that Luke is making over all this circumcision thing.  Maybe its just me.  I do tend to be a live and let live kinda of guy though.  Each to their own!  I also think Luke and Ryan would make a rather cute couple

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A rather interesting thought.  Could both brothers be gay?  That would certainly put a twist to the family.  Again I'm loving the closeness of the brothers in this story.  The respect and confidence they have in each other.  Maybe Luke should confide in Simon his possible feelings for his best friend.  Maybe that is for another day.  We'll see.

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Three years since the Summers family has emigrated - so Luke must be 15 years old. 'K, just had to get my bearing
I appreciate the background info, i.e. contrasting Brittain with the US, bringing us to "the world of the circumcised dick":
Had to laugh about the description of the clipped willy's in the school showers, and I must add that in my country it is - or maybe nowadays was - just the other way around when we were younger. It used to be the clipped ones that were the odd ones out Talk about cultural differences heh
Lucy to Geoff, "Luke seems to think he needs to be circumcised" (my italics). Yikes! From what I've gathered so far is that poor Luke is the one in dire need to be circumcised, and maybe Luke's dad should not have repeated his gramp's quip of "If it's not bust, don't fix it!" I find it slightly difficult to accept that Luke's folks - or at least his dad - didn't try to do a physical fatherly check-up. Really...
And if I may add, clipping is definitely not the one and only argument for "health and wholesomeness" downstairs. Proper parental instruction/education for young ones will allow them to remain not only intact but healthy and clean as well. 'K, I guess I've belaboured this specific point by now Anyways, so far I really enjoy this story tremendously - just a bit of soliloquy-ing going on in my skull-congregation whilst enjoying this read
Ta stax for sharing with us, Riley

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Interesting story so far.  Quite a unique subject being discussed as well.  I'm loving the closeness of the brothers and no I'm not speaking of the bedroom scene between them.  I'm speaking of the closeness they have with talking and being able to share.  The mom seems a bit high strung but rather nicely balanced by the dad's laid back attitude.  I think this will be an interesting ride reading this story.  One I will thoroughly enjoy.  Looking forward to the next chapters.

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Ouch, poor Ryan, I can't wait to see how this turns out. Keep the awesome chapters coming!!!

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Seems to me I'm lagging behind the crowd, but here I am to offer my off-beat (?) opinion of this very interesting prologue. I must admit that it would have taken me much longer to open this story-file if it was not that I've enjoyed Riley's In Safe Hands just recently...
Firstly let me state that in this very first installment there is quite a clear object lesson for any male who has not been circumcised
It's amazing how often one hear of menfolk who are in need of surgery just because they have not been taught by their parents to retract their foreskins and clean appropriately when the have a bath or shower - if this simple routine has been instilled from childhood, how could there ever be occasion for such drastic measures of wiggling some cold chrome instruments under the cav of the patient? It's rather beyond me that Luke did not know that 'under ther' actually existed! Really - and this is not meant judgmentally at all. So much more reason for a socalled enlightened age to arrive properly where there ain't no bashfulness or false modesty not to want to tallk aobut these essential personal hgiene "tricks" that needs to be administered on a daily basis. And, yes, hoping against hope that all "untouched" gaylings reading this story will take note. Who ever would have thought that GA could be the ideal primer in many respects for many dirrerent kind of readers
In closing, I really appreciated that bit about nothing on but his t-shirt and socks! Me thinx its rather sexy
Ta stax, Riley, for - what I can allready feel in my bones - is going to be another great story

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Man, Luke better think of something to get, (or give, lol), Ryan; Luke owes Ryan big time for this! He sacrificed his own red undies to save Luke from being injured himself. I hope Luke realizes this. But what the hell does "HANG HIM!" mean? Now I'm really worried for Ryan!

I really love Mel! I thought it was great that she bonded, (ha, watching Bond, hehe, sorry, couldn't resist), so well with Luke. Luke liked her so much he couldn't be jealous. Glad though that Ryan cleared up the whole 'not dating Mel thing' for Luke.

One thing that bothered me though was when Luke and Ryan first got in the bathroom.Luke told Ryan that he had called him the day before and Ryan acted like he didn't know that and shrugged. Well, you would think if someone is crushing on someone else, and that someone else called, you would think this person would call the other person back asap. Why did he act so nonchalant about it? Even if he didn't know, (no caller ID, or whatever), why didn't he act more sorry? I don't know; it just seemed like Ryan didn't care.

Also loved the Jacko reference! I didn't realize it ALSO had to do with the Jackson Five! lol I'm slow that way. =)

Something else I'm really curious about Riley. I know that it's been a few years, (I forgot how many; at least four or five, right?), since Luke's family moved the the states. I was just wondering why he hasn't taken up any like American terms. Such as: loo for bathroom, queuing for waiting in line, note for money, can't think of any others off the top of my head,oh, revision for studying, but that wasn't in this chapter. Anyway, I know when I went to school in Boston, I was talking like a true Bostonian even years after I came back home. So I guess I'm wondering why Luke is speaking more like an American after being here for that long. Just curious....

Anyway, can't wait to find out what's gonna happen to Ryan! It better be nothing bad.....

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Ryan showing his love for Luke by getting wedgied, but will Luke escape the same peril? Can't wait until the next chapter to find out.
OK! So I just finished reading the last four chapters at once and a lot has transpired.
Simon and Tobey finally 'find' each other and consumate their love.
Toby tells Simon that his mother already knows about him and she's fine with it but Simon won't allow Toby to tell her about Simon. I kinda wish that Toby would have talked Simon into allowing him (Toby) to tell his (Tobys) mother about them being together. It would have allowed Simon to be a little freer while at the Skerrits house.
We learn a little more about Ryans abusive father, and the rest of his home life.
I take umbrage at how you seemed to paint the Alexis family as being 'All American' what with Captain Alexis being all controling, brash and manipulative. That is not the embodiment of the 'All American' family because you find people like Capt' Alexis in all cultures.
On to Ryan being gay. I was hoping this was the case and I hope that he and Luke "find each other".
Mel is a pretty awesome big sister to Ryan. So nice he needs someone to talk to.
Um can't wait to see Lukes klamp get removed. You did such an awedome job detailing his circumcision that I felt like it was me getting one, and I'm already circumcised.
Nuff said.
Still like the story and the author even if he ticks me off every once in awhile.

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I agree, the 'wedgie war' scene was awesome! Lol.
I'm so happy for Toby and Si, though I won't count my chickens quite yet. As often the case in romance, things can change, and suddenly, especially young love.  Still, I'm really happy for them both.
The day is almost upon Luke, a moment he's been waiting years for. I hope he's  happy with the results.
I also loved the exchange between Luke and Mel. I found it pretty amusing.
Also worth noting is Ryan willingly sacrificing himself to the wedgie for Luke's benefit. I only hope that Luke realized it.
The more I read about Ryan, the more I'm liking him. He's a good guy and a great friend to Luke.

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I love this story.  The wedgie battle killed me.  That was just too damn funny.  It seemed like Ryan took one for the team there because Luke is still all Klampified. What a good friend.  I liked the tone of this chapter too.  It moved the story forward very nicely and it was like a peek into every day life.  Good job on that.  I sure can't wait to see what happens next.  
Simon and Toby are just the cutest little guys too.  The funniest part is for being the youngest little imps, they seem to have figured out what they want and how to get it.  Awesome.

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Things aren't looking good. Wedgies can be cruel and physically dangerous. I hope nothing too terrible happens to Ryan.

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I remember this chapter, along with the chapter that follows... I do indeed agree with NInecila, poor Ryan =\ But all is well after awhile... Very good at detail, i see you still have it. I love reading this story it's entertaining and funny at times.
Keep'em coming.
Remijay

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Oh boy, poor Ryan!
But I wouldhave thought Lukes appointment to get the clamp Remonde would have been on monday.

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Oh Riley Riley! What a fantastic chapter! Although I am really saddened by Ryan's home life. I feel so bad for him.

And my mouth dropped open when I read that Ryan prefers guys! Holy shit! And Mel, (who I already adore), likes girls! AND SHE'S DATING DR. T'S DAUGHTER!!!!!! Double holy shit!

I have a feeling that Luke is gonna think that Ryan and Mel are together. I hope it doesn't turn out that it's gonna break Luke's heart. Mel has to figure out a way to hint to Luke about Ryan. I don't want Luke thinking that Ryan and Mel are together and then is going to be so depressed and it'll totally ruin the evening.

Now to the beginning of the chapter: I so love Toby's mom! She's a pisser! "Are you decent?" So she's expecting Toby to be naked all night with Simon? lol  "And maybe you can open the windows!" Omg, she is funny! Subtle, huh?

Another awesome chapter Riley! I'm really looking forward to their night out!

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OK, some of the obstacles are out of the way. Toby and Simon are together and Ryan is just as much in love with Luke as Luke is with Ryan. I'm relying on Mel to make one or other (or both) of them see sense at the cinema this evening.

Thanks for another great chapter.

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If you could only see the smile on my face when Ryan said that Mel was the only person other than himself that knew he liked guys

Wow, in the past 3 chapters we've had Simon finding out that Toby is gay, like him and getting to fool around. Then we had the whole Ryan and Luke in Luke's bedroom scene with Luke boning up. Now we find out that the love of Luke's life, Ryan is gay too. I just so hope that Luke and Ryan figure each others out sooner than later Hopefully Mel can help out with that. I guess the only thing that could make that happen for sure is if Mel shows up with her girlfriend to the movies and Luke is shall we say...taken aback when he realizes that Ryan knows the person who painted his dick for him

Great chapter Riley! Thanks for posting

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I am thoroughly addicted to the story; I am literally shaking with suspense because I so badly want to find out what happens next. This chapter and all the previous ones have been excellent, and I recommend this story to anyone and everyone who comes across this, you won't be disappointed.

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I was worried about some of the foreshadowing earlier and I'm glad the we've gotten that out of the way. Now the hard part is going to be seeing Ryan deal with the homophobia of his father.

A quick question: is this pre or post DODT? It might make things easier for Ryan if it were post.

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:::Kermit arm flail:::  Yay!  Ryan is gay!  Good for Luke.  I was  sad to find out about his home life being perfect but it will all work out.  This chapter was really funny with the addition of Mel and the whole Gizzy watching thing.  Man, cats sit on the floor and lick their own behinds but then they judge what humans do for fun.  I just don't get it.  It just totally cracked me up though.  This chapter was a turning point chapter though, it was one that lets you peep around the bend.  I just hope there is something good coming for the boys.  Simon and Toby are really going to have a lot to deal with in the future.  I think Luke will help them too.  This chapter was fun and I can't wait for the next.
Oh and the whole Hitchhiker parts?  Floored me.  I have more than one yelled Don't Panic at a meeting at work and I am also very likely to yell out So long, and thanks for all the fish! As well.

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Oh my... I LOVED this chapter.
There's so much to say I'll probably forget some of it.
First of all, this one was huge!  A pleasant surprise and kept me busy for a good half hour.
Oh and, omigod! Ryan's gay?!? Yes! That's awesome news for Luke then.
The attention to detail in this one I think is unmatched by any previous chapter. I really enjoyed the glimpse into Ryan's home life. And still he continues to amaze me, despite having lots to complain about, or feel down about, he's so positive in his outlook on things. How he deals with an overbearing father figure, a distant alcoholic dependent mother,  being an only child, hiding his true sexuality from almost everyone, and coming up fairly 'short changed' in the trouser department. And having a huge crush on his 'straight' best friend, Luke. (His perspective) it's like he still manages to see the bright side of things.
Oh and of course then there's Ella and Mel! I remember that Luke mentioned in his notes that Ella would be a person to reappear in his life again at a later time, but I never would have guessed like this, lol.
I think that's it. Except just to thanks, Riley. I loved the chapter!
Mike

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We came so close to the double there. If only Luke could find in Ryan what Simon's found in Toby. Well, there's time yet and who's to say that Ryan isn't as nervous as Luke. Until you've done it a few times and have a solid set of friends to support you, it can be a daunting prospect.
Looking forward to the next instalment - thanks again.

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Man that Ryan's a pisser! lol He had me cracking up with his cracks about styles and trimmed pubes.

I also have a feeling that he pretty much diffused the situation when Luke mentioned  what he mentioned. By gently putting his hand on Luke's shoulder it told Luke not to worry, it's all cool. At least that's what I got out of it.

I was surprised at Stacey's dad calling to apologize. He seems to be a stand-up guy.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter; I'm curious to see if Simon comes clean to Luke about what happened at Toby's.

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Great chapter Riley

You are a bit of a tease here, you know That exchange in his bedroom of the gawp was....interesting. The thing is, we still don't know if Ryan does have feelings for Luke or not.

I imagine why Simon is so excited to be home, lets hope he doesn't burst into the room and blurts out what he did with Ryan still in there.

I also think Luke is now on the radar of his mother. She did talk to Stacey's dad and obviously he mentioned that Luke had said his parents didn't want him dating till he was 16. Caught in a lie, me thinks

Looking forward to the next chapter, thanks again

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I think this is my favorite one of the chapters to date. I really like Ryan. He's a funny guy too. And is good for Luke to have someone to confide in about his procedure among other things.
Stacy's dad calling was a bit of a surprise. Something tells me we haven't heard the end of that little situation quite yet either.
Thanks Riley, brilliant as usual!

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Oh my stars.  I thought Luke was going to come clean on in that one.  I think Ryan wants Luke too.  I am curious to see if its true.  I noticed this post took a little longer than the others.  I hope you are ok on your end.  I truly enjoy your work and I hope you are living happy as well.
Thanks,
Carrie

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I guess it's a lot easier to come out when you're a bit older. Everything looks so much bigger from inside than it really is. At least, that's been my experience.
I gather that total trims are OK even amongst straight guys at school. There's nothing like the feel of freshly shaved balls though. And a neat trim up top looks much better.

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"It was so unfair, Lucy mused. Sadly it just wasn’t quite right in the current climate for any proper parent to question their son as to why he felt he was in need of a new dongle – especially when the poor lad had just been circumcised!"

Hehehe... Did Lucy assume Luke meant a 'new penis' or something when he mentioned 'buying a new dongle'? I know you said before, that she was not familiar with PCs and that would include 'tech speak' too I would assume.
I loved the chapter. And loved catching up with Luke again. Poor guy, the dream was pretty intense (and hot). I hope everything's still ok 'under the hood' with him humping in his sleep with the device still on.
Toby and Si' make such a cute couple, too..
Thanks, Riley!

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Holy crap! I too saw chapter twenty-one posted and started reading it when I realized this isn't where we left off. So I went to chapter twenty and realized I didn't read this one and thought I missed the recent story update column and the notice on the home page. I thought b/c I was out of power for awhile I missed the seeing the update. Oh, and I remember last Monday I read that you were updating again on Wednesday and I even checked my phone from Wednesday on, looking for it. But my phone would cut out all the time b/c the cell towers were down or screwed up or something.

Anyway...so this is a review on the last two chapters. Toby, Toby, Toby! I was pleasantly surprised at his revelation! =) I want to be happy for Si and I don't want him to get hurt, so I hope Toby doesn't disappoint him. And what did Toby mean when he said he messed around with another boy "a long time ago." "A long time ago"? Isn't he like fourteen or fifteen? They're freshman, right? And Luke's a sophomore? Unless I got it all wrong. Anyway, so when did Toby mess around with this boy, when he was ten? lol

And what the heck is a dongle????? Wait, I'll Google it. lol

Terrific two chaptes Riley! I'm looking forward to reading about Luke and Ryan's day and also the rest of Simon and Toby's day.

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Now you are just showing off, it is not enough to develop one major story line with wit depth and aplomb, you have rocketed Simon story line to the same level and everything is holding together beautifully. I am not sure whether to be jealous or just inane. Great story

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I loved the last chapter and this chapter... I already know what happens so i wont spoil it for anyone else... Just know you're a truly talented writer. Keep up the good work...

Remijay <3

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Oh noes!  I had to go chase this story down.  I am so glad I did.  Holy fricken crap!  Who the hell knew that a simple touch of the hand could be so hot.  I have read a lot of your work and I believe that may possibly be my favorite scene you have written.   I love the way this story is going.  I still think these two are little devils.  Cute as buttons but trouble waiting to happen.  
I love the little guys but I am curious to know how our buddy Luke is doing. ( once had a friend name Luke, we called him Lukifer, like Lucifer, because he was once an angel too.  Not so much anymore. hehe)  Anywho.  Please do write more.  

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Aww, this was a GREAT chapter!

First of all though, the 'alert' to a new chapter didn't show up and I assume it hasnt for the others either, maybe that's why there's no reviews yet when there usually are by now.

At first I was like "Another Toby and Simon chapter?" and while I enjoy them and realise they're also important to the story, I'm real eager to find out what's going on in Luke's world too. Especially for him to take that contraption off and discover his newly modified piece of equiptment, heheh.
But this really was a big moment between Simon and Toby, and so sweet and cute the way it played out.
Although something tells me, between Toby's weird reaction and the author's note at the end, that not all is as perfect as it seems in their world.
Thanks, Riley. Loving it!

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Great story and great chapter, but I just can't help but think that you gave Toby a cat just to put in this line(Delicately, he removed the boxers from his friend’s pussy and laid them over his wash bag.).

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Well, Simon and Toby sure are lucky their storm was so minor. Lucky they didn't get stuck in Hurricane Sandy....and Wednesday's posting I most probably won't be able to read b/c I'm assuming I will be w/o power for at least a week.

Anyway, back to the story. Simon is so cute. I loved reading about his thoughts and his predicament regarding Toby. I also lke the fact that you had this take place the same time as Luke's party, so we don't really miss anything from anybody.

I'm also looking forward to the next day when Ryan comes over. lol

Great job Riley!

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I love this story.  The boys are really cute.  Simon and Toby are little imps.  I say that Toby should at least give things with Simon a try.  They are young.  They would be so dern cute together too.  
Gizmo cracked me up in this chapter.  Maybe it was because I turned on the light and alerted my two fuzzballs to the fact that I was awake.  Ripley ( named after the Alien movies) and Daisy ( named after the song Hal sings before shutting down in 2001) are happily standing outside of my door meowing at me!  Sucks to be them, I would rather read and figure out what is happening between Luke and Ryan...  While we are figuring out what is happening with Toby and Simon, Luke and Ryan could be doing wonderful things!  We need one of those Dukes of Hazard voice overs...  Mean while on the other side of the neighborhood, people were up to no good, well at least depending on who ya asked...
Also,  where is Ell-i-ot? I am curious to know how he is doing.  
Great chapter as always!  I can't wait for Wednesday.  Wednesday is going to rock so far, lots of new stories and simply buckets of new music coming out too.  I may have to resort to reading because my hears have shut off in self-defence...

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I really wish Simon the best, although it would be more realistic if Toby were straight. Maybe they'll be up for some experimentation later on.

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A great chapter. I like catching up with Simon's life as well.
Thanks, Riley.

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You're making us wait til Wednesday??? What idiot gave you . . . .  oh wait - never mind.  I think this chapter captured things really well. You can feel for Simon and how much it hurts to be there, but how he wouldn't be anywhere else if he had a choice.  Nice chapter.

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Adding another layer of tension is a good move, and I'm glad you used Chick-Fil-A.  I think it is a great company (no I don't work for them) and I enjoy eating their chicken sandwiches.  I'm above petty politics.

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Well if Daddy works for Chick-fil-A I already hate him.  And there is the church group, yeah, douche of the year contestant.  Poor Luke, starts to chuck some wood, then has to dance with the princess and then she thinks SHE's the cause of the woody and when she grabs at the opportunity, he rejects her cold.  Hmm me wonders just how long he's gonna be in the closet.  (And since, even as your beta reader I haven't read beyond this chapter, I don't have a clue.)
Okay reality time - I really do like the little bits you sew into your story - little bits are not to be confused with naughty bits.  But the way things pop up they give the story an realness that makes it easy to relate to.  Good job Riley.

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I will reiterate what I said in my last review: I LOVE Olly! He just cracks me up! I would love to find out what Olly and Owen were up to. Well, besides playing Yu-Gi-Oh. lol

I was wondering why Stacey ran off like that. I guess I can understand how she could feel embarrassed by sort of asking Luke out and not getting the response she hoped for, but why didn't she just say ok, so maybe when you turn sixteen? Why just run away? She seems like such a sweet, down to earth girl, I can't see her getting angry with Luke, oh, unless she saw right through his lie. I just thought of that. Maybe she saw thru his lie and was even more embarrassed and that's why she ran off. Hmmmm now I feel bad for her. And just moments before she thought he was hot for her. lol I guess he'll just have to apologize or something to her another time.

I'm looking forward to Luke and Ryan's 'studying'', lol. Great chapter Riley!

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This chapter had me laughing my head off

The predicament Luke found himself in on the dance floor was just too funny. Not to mention his excited state while thinking about who was in the bathroom, but to have here think the smartklamp was his actual erection was too funny.

I am really interested in Olly and Owen. For the two to hit it off so quickly definitely makes me want to know more. So you can put down 3 votes for me, myself and I

Great chapter and thanks for posting

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Whew! Lucky Luke, not!
Hehe - Real bad timing there and unfortunate that Stacy felt the 'hard lump' sticking between his legs and came to the wrong conclusion.
​I'm betting Luke can't wait to get that device off too..
Why did Stacy run off like that at the end? Was it because he turned her down, and with her being rich and spoilt she's used to getting everything she desires? Or is she just one of those oversensitive girls?

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Oh my God! Lol
What a predicament... And the first thing he thinks of is he can't date until he is sixteen
Looking forward to more....

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What a great chapter Riley! I loved the banter back and forth between Luke and Damon. And it's so true what Luke said to Damon; it's so much easier talking to someone you never met face to face, than it is talking to your friends sometimes.

And Owen's mom was funny: she'll pick them up at 9:30, lol, more like 12:30 A.M.!! haha

So what's with the Chick-Fil-A, isn't that that homophobic company? Oh wait, is this a sign of things to come? The fact that Todd and Stacey belong to this HUGE church (I never heard of so many people belonging to the same church!) and the Chick-Fil-A....this doesn't sound like it's gonna bode well for Luke if he ever tells Stacey about himself. He might have to; I think she's almost ready to attack him,lol. The little ho.

But....she has this wonderfully, hysterical brother Olly! He is a pisser! And I suppose being crass (although it's funny) and self-deprecating is his way of dealing with his disability or with the way people act around him. It's his defense mechanisim. I really want to find out more about him. I'm glad Owen at least found someone to hang out with. And play Yu-Gi-Oh with! lol Don't remember which are better: God cards or the Blue Eyes White Dragon (was that the name of it? All I know is we got a bunch of both cards, hehe)

I was really feeling bad for Owen, sitting all by himself and moping. I'm glad Luke at least tried to get him involved in conversations. After all, we've all been in Owen's place at one time or another. Well, maybe not Luke, lol.

Oh, speaking of Luke, well actually his mother: so, she's not computer savvy, huh? Then how does she read her gay porn? Don't all moms read gay porn? Oops, that must only be me.

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I cant comment anymore... i already know what happens... But i still love this story.

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Great chapter, thanks

So with a couple of mentions of things, I'm beginning to wonder a lot about Stacey. First, was the Chick Fil-A mention on the DJ's bass stand, was it? Second was Todd and Stacey's involvement in what seems to be a mega Church. Even though Luke has accepted the fact that he is gay, I can't help but wonder if Stacey and her family might not be as understanding

I too agree that maybe Olly and Owen together might be a good pairing. It seems Olly has a big chip on his shoulder about what life has dealt him and Owen we know has one firmly in place. Maybe the two will be good for each others.

Thanks again Riley!

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I kinda like Olly I think it would do Owen some good to Hang Out with him some more - he would get dragged Out of his depressed attitude.

I got a feeling that Luke has to do something about Stacy - and really soon, if it isn't already too late....
And I got a feeling, that sometime in the future there is going to happen something between Luke and Damon. There was this ominous sentence "Maybe he should have known, even then."

Can't wait to see

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Damon's a funny guy. Had me laughing out loud at the comment about size and Luke assuming he meant the clamp device.
Maybe Olly and Owen can hit it off and become good friends, it must be difficult for Owen, not having settled down properly in the US yet, like everyone else seems to have.
And I'm still curious to know how things will go with Stacey and Luke, too.
You have me well and truly hooked now, Riley
Cheers, Mike.

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Loved the chapter, particularly Luke and Si's 'moment' in the games room.
Ryan seems like a good friend for Luke too.
Can't wait for more.
-Mike,

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Great story.  to be honest, when the story started i did not see how you could make it work so well. I started on the basis of your previous story and am not disappointed. I love the way you are managing a handful of characters which are being developed independantly and are distinct personalities. I can see the plot starting to thicken.  thanks

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Great chapter Riley

I know I haven't left a comment in a while so thought I'd just leave one to say I'm still really enjoying this story very much. Keep up the great work!

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Luke should have known that Ryan would never make fun of him or joke about him with their friends. A true friend wouldn't do that.

I'm glad Luke confessed to Simon. They need to stick together since no one else knows. I wonder when that will change?

I feel so bad for Owen. Oh, it Owen wants anymore Yu-Gi-Oh cards, I have binders and binders of them that are just sitting in my storage room. I can ship them out to him if he wants. lol And I remember sitting on the floor with that stupid large paper on the floor, putting the Yu-Gi-Oh cards down depending on their health and strengths, something like that. Who knows, I always lost. (On purpose actually just so my kid would win and leave me alone) lol. Horrible mom, huh?

I'm looking forward to reading about the party. Hopefully Luke can try to cheer Owen up. Maybe convince him he doesn't need to run away from Georgia......

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Heh, i like this chapter.. i liked it the time before also. But nonetheless, it's amazing how friends in a private high school treat each other... The emotions that you had running through both boys were awesome. They confessed to each other and Luke even felt trusted enough to spill his dirty little secret, even though he didnt tell Simon about Ryan.

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Oh my.  YAY!  I really liked this chapter. There were several reasons.  The first and usual reason, I am a geek.  Star Wars makes me happy.  Windows updates.  UGH.  There is the reason I am a MAC.  And Stone Mountain.  I went there on my honeymoon.  It was so much fun.  As for the story, I am so glad that Luke and Simon have each other.  They are so close and they are going to need each other.  Poor Owen will need Luke too.  I think he will be able to help him.  I also thought it was a good thing that Ryan discovered Luke's surgery.  I hope Luke doesn't get Ryan out of his head.  I love those two together.  I can't wait to read the next couple of chapters.  I think it shall be fun to see if the damn thing still works. Tee hee hee!  Now, I am off to do what I was supposed to be doing which is studying for the entrance exam to the Masters program.  The G.R.E. is a damn hard test!  )

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SOrry about the spolier in the other review. And i actually liked this chapter. I havent read it in a while, it was a good re-fresher. Luke is like any other male out there, we all have to inspect our injuries or whatever foreign thing that got attached to our bodies. LOL it was funny.
Thanks again Riley for posting this very good and light hearted story. Til next time.

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Good for Luke for agreeing to go to Stacey's party and help Owen at the same time. And who knows; maybe Ryan will be there and he can APOLOGIZE to him. It didn't sound like Ryan believed his lame dentist story anyway. =)  And I know I keep bringing this up b/c I keep forgetting: I thought Ryan was the only one who knew about Luke's surgery?

I was cracking up at the visual of Luke pissing all over the shower! Holy crap! What's he gonna do on Monday in school if he has to pee? Climb naked into the urinal and piss all over? lol

I know what Luke's mom is all about; my fourteen year old needs lessons on how to piss in the toilet w/o missing. It's called AIMING!!!! Something he needs to learn. lol

As always Riley; you have me wanting more! =)

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YAY!   I liked that.  Poor Luke.  I feel sorry for him.  Of all the places I can think of to be in pain, that is the last one I would wish on my enemy.  At least he is on the mend though.  There is good news though...  Peeing in the bathtub is good for the environment.  No extra flushing they say.  I am glad this story is not over.  He and Ryan need to get it together.  He needs to tell him about the surgery and whatnot. I am looking forward to more.  ::: Kermit arm flail:::  Yay!!!!!

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Um? That is not the end of story... I remember when you first started to write this story. It has alot more left to be written and read... Dont get me wrong, the story is great, but i remember him and Ryan, plus Ryan's sister. I know there has to be more to it... But anywho, i love this story. The detail, the emotions, and turmoil that you put the characters through. And FYI i know Ryan is GAY... I remember a chapter where he finds out that LondonLolly is actually Luke.

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I forgot to ask you Riley: wasn't Elliot (from the Elliot and Miguel story) sort of introduced in this story, way back when they were at the mall? I thought Luke was going to meet Elliot in some way.......

Wait, what? What just happened? What happened that was bad that Luke had to see Dr. T. again? Who was the "he" he was writing this for? AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU HOPED WE MADE IT TO THE END INTACT???????????????? WHAT END????????????????????? You can't possibly leave it like this!!!!!! I wanna know about afterwards; how Luke's coping, how it turned out after the SmartKlamp was removed, Ryan, all that good stuff!

Unless you're planning a sort of sequel......and if so, for the love of God, get started writing Riley!!!!!  

And I loved the, "Just a small prick." Well thanks, mate! That was really funny!

Oh, and in the paragraph where Luke was getting those shots and he didn't feel anything, I think you meant to write down nada. De nada means you're welcome but nada means nothing. (I'm pretty sure)

Ok, so awesome chapter! I, along with Daddy, was also cringing even though I don't have any boy bits to cringe to. haha I guess I just felt empathy for Luke. And now at last I can picture everything and I'm pretty sure I know what he's gonna look like afterwards. =)

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Things seem to be getting ominous. I'm worried about the procedure and Luke's future troubles you hinted about. Gah! I can't wait to read more.

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ACK!  The end?  You mean of the procedure right, not just of the story.  If it is the end of the story that is not acceptable!  No, I am not saying that your story wasn't good either, it was wonderful but now I need to know what happens with Ryan and Luke.  Maybe a follow up story of some variety?  
Anyways,  This chapter was very good.  I am glad that Luke came through everything ok and that while it was scary, it wasn't too painful for him.  I know those injections had to hurt like all get out, its good that  you wrote him brave.    I sure hope you have something else up your sleeve for me to read.  I loved this one.
P.S.  Yes, I am a girl geek.  I love all things Star Trek and Star Wars, FireFly and Battlestar Galactica.  I won't even get into the video game part of my geekiness.  That is just an whole different story.

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The "short needle" and the "small prick", understated and you really had me almost writhing in my seat.    It was a bit clinical, but then I think that is what the story called for.  Good job.

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Haha I wasn't sure whether to feel nervous for Luke with his impending circumcision procedure, or laugh at some of the more awkward & comical moments.
I think the fact that Luke has phimosis is important to the story, if he'd merely wanted the procedure for aesthetical reasons I'm sure you'd have some comments on here talking about how unethical it is etc. For some reason as of late the topic of circumcision has become a sticky one online.
To me circumcision is a personal choice, and at Luke's age it can be said for sure he does have a say in the matter, unlike RIC patients.
Back to the story, I hope his surgery goes well. The hint at the end worried me slightly, My own background is very similar to the one of Luke's except to say I'm not, nor ever been to America, and I was a little younger too.
So it's been an interesting read for me so far and brought back memories.
Please be quick with the next chapter, can't wait for it.

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Ahhhh, what do you mean Luke could be wrong about the ending being in sight? lol What's gonna go wrong????

I was actually surprised Luke's mom was planning on going into the procedure room to watch the operation. Would the doctor even allow this? I would NEVER plan on doing something like that! I don't even think for babies or little kids the doctor would allow anyone other than medical professionals wearing masks and whatnot into the operating room.

I am also a bit confused about the procedure. I thought the whole term circumcision meant taking off the foreskin. But the doctor mentioned that an option would be that it being high and tight, is that what it was called? Where a lot of the foreskin was left on and it would hide the scar. Are these for guys who only get the operation done as a medical necessity, but they really want to keep their foreskin? I guess I was just confused b/c I thought being circumcised meant you had no foreskin.

I'm glad Luke was able to finally relax with Ella there. I can imagine how embarrassed he'd be with a young girl there! It's bad enough he has to be there half naked with the doctor! lol

Another awesome chapter Riley!  Looking forward to the operation now.

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Oh my.  At first I was a little worried about reading this story.  It is such a good story though!  Poor Luke.  I am not sure which would be worse, mom or a female nurse.  I have learned that nurses have seen everything, however, they have not seen MY everything and therefore it is different.  
I am glad I decided to read this story.  I can't wait to see what happens next.
Something I almost forgot to mention:  I think you are doing a wonderful job keeping the medical jargon under control and easy to understand.  Good research on your part.  I like that there is enough information to progress the story and explain the procedure but its not overwhelming.  
I know I am being greedy because you just posted this chapter but post quickly.
One last thing, this is a really silly question.  Did you name the doctor after James Tiberius Kirk from Star Trek?  The geek in me wants to know.

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I am glad to see Luke figuring out who he is and he seems to be dealing well with it.  I am curious to see what happens with DamonJ.  I think he will help him alot.  I can't wait to see what happens.  Please post fast.

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It's great that Luke finally came to the realization that he's gay; that was a big step for him. I'm glad that Damon was able to confide in him the frustration of feeling like you have to live in the closet.

Luke should tell Simon though. If Simon finds out that Luke has realized this for some time, he will be upset that Luke didn't trust him enough to tell him. And like Luke said, he can at least talk to Simon about it and vice-versa.

Great chapter Riley! Looking forward to C-day! lol

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On the surface it seems that Luke is well adjusted about his revelation. He's accepted the fact that he's gay but he still has to deal with if and how to come out. Plus his other issues- the circumcision and being an expat.

I really enjoy your stories. The characters are so complex and their growth is quiet amazing. Thank you for the update.

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Great update, I enjoyed it.
His curiousity in the gym locker room reminded me of my own curious times back in high school, lol. Comparing the other guys etc. Lucky Ryan bought Luke's half truth excuse, too.
Awesome!

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HI Riley, Welcome Back. Hope you had a great summer. Now that that is out of the way, I am likiing this story very much. You come across as a very knowledgeable author and that makes this story believeable. Please keep it going. Thanks for your fine upstanding authorship.

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So glad to see Luke and Simon back!

And every boy needs to know about manscaping. lol It's not just for the boys you know. =) Girls like it too.

I am surprised Luke didn't tell his best friend Ryan about his circumcision plans. Even though he wanted this, he is doing it mainly because it's medically necessary. Why wouldn't he share something like this with Ryan? And why didn't Ryan even question it? Why isn't he wondering why on earth his best friend wants to go under the knife for something like this?

Anyway, great chapter as always Riley. =)

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Luke's fantasy with Ryan "mirrored" my own experience of self discovery. I had always been gay but it was that alone point where I found myself fantasizing about some of the boys in my class that it hit me. Hopefully Luke deals with it better than I did at the time.

Great chapter and thank you for updating. Everyone's lives are busy but I really enjoy this story.

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You're still writing??

Okay never mind that - I liked this chapter quite a bit.  Well aside from Luke using his dad's beard clipper to trim his nads.  Remind me to NEVER leave the hair trimmer alone when you're around.

The part with Ryan was really well done. I like how his interest is conveyed, but not so, and that Ryan is completely unreadable.  If he finds out Luke's into him will Ryan kirk out? Kiss him? Shrug it off?  No way to tell at this point.    [I'd give you an around the world and back snap, but there isn't an emoticon for that.]

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Poor Simon!  His angst, misgivings, loneliness and aching were portrayed well without being over the top or maudlin.    Good job.
Now get the next chapter to your beta reader!

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So great to have you back. I was afeard you were not doing well and worried for you.  It is of course great to see you back and updating your great story.  I would have hated to see it cut short....

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I blame you for my not getting sleep last night!
I found the title titillating, and saw that it took place in North Georgia, having just moved from Dahlonega myself. I thought I’d sample a chapter or two, just to see, but got sucked in and read all ten. I enjoyed the story, the writing was good, and I look forward to it being continued, but I do have some comments:
To me, this story should be written from the first person, especially as it has a tone of being told in reflection, through experience, than from the point of view of a young teenager; if it were ‘of the moment’, his uncertainty, as a young teenager, doesn’t work well for me. Also, I found the ancillary scenes, without Ryan, a little jarring.
I can see this getting gratuitous, as in the water bottle scene. What you’re writing is bold and rings true, but should be focused to your audience. If this is for young men, then it’s too explicit. If this is for older men, then it runs the risk of being porn.
It also needs to be edited for content. You present such strong characters and situations that I found myself skipping over sections of nostalgia, looking for what happens next.
Like I said, I look forward to reading more, and seeing what happens to the guys.

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Yay you're back! I was getting worried,

Simon's turmoil and his inner angst were so well written. I just wish Luke would fess up to Simon so at least they would both have someone to talk to.

I could also feel Luke's inner struggle with going along with the Landon and his stupid insults, or sticking up for his brother. (well, not directly at least) I think it's only the most confident of kids who would be a mensch and call Landon out on his discriminatory insults. Even though Ryan didn't do this, thank God he did say something when all Landon wanted to do was help beat up that kid.

Great chapter Riley. I'm glad you're back.

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Enjpy??  What the hell is that?  Another Rileyism???  

Honestly, this was one of your better chapters - Simons internal angst was amazingly well done - I think I told you that when I read it over for you - but really, reading it again you really have a great feel for that kind of writing.  I could feel Si's turmoil - and in a way remember feeling that way eons ago - I'm old after all so it's been a hot minute since I was that age.  

Hopefully you're back for a bit and we can get on with the rest of this - I mean I'm your bloody beta reader and you only give me one chapter at a time so I'm not any further ahead than anyone else.  

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This was a great chapter. The characters are really developing and I really felt how conflicted Luke was throughout the name calling.

Great chapter! Hope to see another one soon (but don't feel pressured!)

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Hey Riley, I hope everything's ok with you. It's been about two months since you updated this great story and that's not like you. lol

So, I'm just checking to make sure you're all right...

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Yep, still enjoying the story thus far, only dimmed slightly with the agonized waiting for the next installment to hit the screen... but it's a "good" pain and instills a sense of patience in my sense of self ;-)

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Loved it! I'm liking how it's coming along, and poor Simon. Maybe someone should talk to him about non-circumcision phimosis correction, If circumcision isn't for him.  -- I also liked getting a glimpse behind Si' in the first half of this chapter while Luke was at the mall.
Can't wait for more to come.  :-)

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Good job Riley.  Nice development of the story.

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Poor Simon. I feel like you're giving us as readers a clearer view on his and Toby's relationship that Si has. They're perfect together

There was a feeling of unease throughout this chapter and I find myself waiting for the other shoe to drop. I can't wait for it.

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Totally threw me off on who everyone is talking about! I guess it's because from the way I read it, the family that came into the store, had a little girl and two brothers, but for some reason I was thinking the brothers were close in age. Dunno why I thought that.

Now of course I know I'm wrong. lol

Hopefully Luke will see him again.

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I may or may not know who the other guy is too

Great chapter Riley, I really enjoyed it

I have to admit, with the whole thing about Luke's Mom joining him at the doctor's in the last chapter and his idle conversation with his Dad about his phimosis, I certainly can't relate. Growing up, it was never  discussed or shown to anyone. To tell the truth, I just found our a couple of years ago that my dad isn't circumcised. Weird eh?

I would hope that most families could talk this way but looking back I would have died of horror if my dad, or even my mom, discussed my penis with me

Looking forward to more

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Hmm.. could this boy be a character I recognise from elsewhere?   Great to see him added to the mix, and looking forward to seeing where things go from here.
As to the 10% circ' I noticed in the gym class - I can remember 3 boys  excluding myself being done, in a class of about 30 ish.

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Ri,

So I generally don't like to comment on stories I beta for, because I worry about giving away something I know that the readers don't, but I wanted to comment here. The last part where Luke 'meets' umm well someone we know from somewhere else    Watch Luke interact with 'him' I could totally 'see' the shop, the way 'him' was dressed, the way Luke stretched out watching, how he ignored the giggling girls, etc.  That's really great stuff when the reader can see what's happening clearly in their mind.  So   on chapter 8!

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And so it begins.  Our soon to be cut protagonist is definitely showing signs of being interested in a guy.  And iPhones!

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Hey Riley! A very informative chapter! lol Well, it turns out that Luke actually NEEDS the surgery. And is it hereditary? Is that why Simon may need it too?

I'll tell you; I'm sure I would have turned away or even walked to another part of the room when the doctor was examining Luke. Being a mother myself, I would have given my kid some 'privacy', and only looked if the doctor thought I needed to see for myself.

Oh, the doctor mentioned two different ways of doing the surgery. Freehand resection and a SmartKlamp. What's freehand resection as opposed to the Smartklamp?

I find the whole procedure very manageable; it's not like one long drawn out surgery.

I look forward t the next chapter Riley. I'm certainly learning something here! lol

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Good job of explaining something most of us never want to experience.  (phimosis)
I never quite understood those unalterably opposed to circumcision and yet there doesn't seem to be the same hue and cry against piercings or even tattoes on the penis, never mind metal bandings etc.  
Poor Simon, he too will probably have to undergo a procedure.
Choosing 'high and tight' seems a bit drastic after having a long dangling prepuce, especially with the shaft skin already stretched?!  

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Always embarrassing when the parent has to be there.  I have noticed that the frequency of circumcision in the US has changed a lot.  Rural, more conservative areas see it more frequently than urban, more liberal areas.  Still, I like the approach this story has taken to the overall issues.

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And here I am, thinking that his circumcision would happen quickly. Great chapter. Really good flow and dialogue.

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Wow, poor Luke. Lol. How awkward with his mum being there while he was being examined.
The similarities between Luke's situation and my own keep on coming up. I went through the same experience in my local Drs with my mum also being present, and I too had phimosis, and was embarrassed with my own mother being there. Though I wasn't quite 15 at the time.
In reponse to your earlier reply .... It is fairly uncommon over here. Though judging my my own experiences in the gym showers during school. I think about 10% of us were cut . That was only about 9 or so years ago.
Another great chapter, Riley.

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I'm really loving this story so far. I've always found the cross-cultural them interesting. Being British and circ'd I guess I can relate to this, that way too. I can't wait to see where you take the story next.
- Mike

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I'm really enjoying the story -love how it differes from the usual fare, great premise and great execution.

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Not only did our young protagonist have to go see the urologist with his mom, but our contrary author left us dangling at the precipice....(Not the prepuce!)

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Love how this story is developing. Wish I could offer up some useful form of critque, but I'm too much of an advid fan of the story to pick at it.   Really just commenting here to show my appreciation.
Marcus.

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going for circumcision, not with dad but with your mother......

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I chuckled when I read the last paragraph. Poor Luke. We as the readers already know it's going to happen, but he doesn't yet.

Ryan is an interesting character. Your hints are pretty big, but Luke is oblivious as always. Great chapter and thanks for posting.

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Well, I just got a MacBook Pro and have no freakin' idea how to use it! lol I have to wait until my fourteen year old can teach me....

I was hysterical when Luke was writing about how ordering breakfast is so different in the states than abroad. The whole egg scenerio was so funny! It had me crackin up b/c it's so true!

Anyway, nice chapter Riley; I look forward to the next one. Hopefully we'll learn a little more about Damon.

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I think it moved the story along nicely.  Luke's talk with his dad at Longhorns was insightful.  Good job.

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Nice interlude chapter. It sets up future events well and we got to know more about Luke and Simon. I also enjoyed the outside perspective on America's restaurant culture. If you can't tell, I'm trying really hard not to be impatient

Thanks for posting and I really enjoyed reading it. Hopefully we learn more about Damon later.

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Absolutely love the way the story has unfolded thus far. It’s quite readable and flows well. I don’t recall any truly awkward spots. I realize gushing about the story isn’t helpful for structure, but at this point, it’s all I can offer. I like the story. Please keep writing.

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Well, somehow I missed the last chapter when it was posted. Must have been hiding under my rock.

I totally did not see that one coming with Simon confessing to Luke. Why didn't Luke tell Simon he was feeling the same way? But I am glad that regardless of how he's feeling, he didn't turn his brother away. I'm glad he's gonna be there for Simon if Simon needs him. I think Simon would feel better about himself if Luke confides in him too.

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Hm. I didn't think Simon would come out before Luke but it fits with the rest of the story. Hopefully things work out for Simon and Toby and Luke can use his observations of his brother to become more comfortable with who he is.

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I've read all four chapters, and I wanted to say that I think it's really good. The story flows easily, even when you change between present and diary. The charaters are shaping up and I want to know more about them (I just hope it's not one of them stories where "everyone" suddenly turns out to be gay). I like the british elements to the story, they feel more familliar to me (being from Europe). I really like this story and I will eagerly await more chapters. Keep it up!

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Certainly not the 4H club....

Nice chapter!

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"I think if somebody had told me that the tip was meant to be loose and skin back down the shaft on its own accord, to show off the glans when stiff, I could have saved myself months of irritated frustration. But mine didn't and his didn't and there were no other foreskins around I could compare them too."

Aha! Now we see more of a medical reason for a possible circumcision.  An unretractable foreskin is a primary risk factor for balanitis.  

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Thanks for posting. I wonder what Luke meant about the future in his diary?
Regarding Elliot, people don't have to worry. Nothing was revealed and if they're curious about who he is they can read your other stories. Which I highly recommend.

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Who's Elliott?

As being a first time reader to this story, I thought I would come in and leave a review. Should I stay away from the reviews if people that got to read the original release comment about what they have had the privilege to see?

Sorry, maybe that was harsh of me , but please try not to give away anything that I don't know as starting to only read and all the way up to Chapter 2 I don't have the option to read ahead to see what is happening like a completed story has.

So I'm glad in a way that the elephant has been recognized early in the story . I can't help to figure that the story was about circumcision (I know, call me a genius if you want ). The side line at this point is Luke's interest in dicks in general, so look forward to see how that develops.

Kudos for this one line:

The one ray of hope was when the official at the customs desk looked through his spanking brand new passport and stared at him, intently. Luke glared back defiantly. Go on – throw me out – do us both a favor! But, instead of putting him back on a plane to where he rightly belonged, he’d brought his stamp down in final judgment.

I think I reread that line a couple of times so I could calm myself down from laughing so hard .  It made me wonder, do all kids immigrating to a new country think the same thing? It would be interesting to see what would happen if Luke had taken it further . Having experienced US Border Guards is intimidating enough as it is, I wonder if they have an actual grace for surly, pissed off teens
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Thanks for the chapter Riley, looking forward to more

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Wait, Elliiot's coming? Then Luke should wait; Elliot isn't cut either, right?

I can see where Luke wants to fit in with his friends, but to go as far as to get circumsized at that age; I don't know. I think that'll be more painful that he realizes. They do it to boys as babies for a reason, lol.

This chapter was very comical! I'm looking forward to how he finally convinces his parents to let him go thru with it. When I read the prologue, I was under the impression that Luke came to the US just for the surgery. I wonder how he talked his parents into it. =)

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Luke wants to be circumcised out of conformism and because the idea arouses him. I find this an honest description of his motives. The author doesn't question them though, which I think is a bold point of view. Pretending that Luke has been convincend by the often cited medical reasons would have been much easier.

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Luke's mom seemed dismissive of his request.  His dad's calm demeanor and concluding line about not fixing what isn't broke was slightly better.  Still a lot of story to cover to getting to the part where he is cut I hope!  

I'm really not in favor of any kind of 'cosmetic' surgery, just for cosmetic reasons unless it is a true deformity.

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Is it selfish of me to be chomping at the bit for Elliot and his brother to arrive?
Great chapter. While I don't agree with Luke's point of view his thoughts and feelings were really expressed well.

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i've read quite a bit of this story when it was first on here, im excited your giving it another get go

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I hope many more become friends of this great story this time around.  I am so very happy to see you return to it.  I have been hanging out with a Brit who had been a friend many years ago and is now back in  the US.  This has added a bit more color for me on this rebirth of your tale.  Thanks again for a great story.

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I have been looking forward for ages for this story coming back

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Glad Luke is back in town(?). This was the kind of story I was looking forward to and missed it when it was discontinued.
I can't remember anything so seriously wrong that could people give reason to complain about so let us just enjoy the humour that this story has.

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I am really looking forward to this story and I'm so glad you're continuing it.

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Yikes, after reading this first chapter, all I can say is that I am so glad I was cut as a baby.  There is NO way I would want to go through all that as a teenager.

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Riley! Riley! Riley! I'm so glad you're posting this story! Since quite a few readers mentioned this in their review of "In Safe Hands" (still crying, btw), I've been eager to read it! =)

From what I gathered in the prologue, something was wrong under the foreskin, that's why Luke is being circumsized, right? I mean I've never really heard of any one other than babies getting circumsized in a hospital or at a bris.

Looking forward to the next chapter Riley!

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I remember this story Riley.  The first time I read it, it was awesome. I can't remember though if you put that much detail in the first time... anyway, getting off track.

I really liked... you never did finish this story .. I have been waiting patiently... yay I give you an A+ very well done...

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Ouch.  What a hook!

To all those who want to ban circumcision, this story could be a revelation. But then again, noting human stubbornness, probably not....

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