Well i think im finally figuring this site out! sorta??? Been dying to get into the review fray since the first chapter! Anyway, good reading Rob. Can't wait for the next post as I'm dying to find out whats next..

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For those of us who are attracted to  someone who is larger, stronger,masculine, aggressive yet gentle,comforting,and loving, you are the perfect author.  Like so many others, I have repeatedly read your stories wherever I could find them becoming truly engulfed in the story.  This story has surprised me as I didn't think that I would enjoy the SF aspect as much as I have.  It goes to show that your ability to write about love and romance and attraction can be applied to any time and/or place.  Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing your gift with us all............M

I think you're a fantastic writer Rob and have been going to your tumblr to make sure I don't miss anything new and was soo glad to hear that you had this new story up.
I just read all 3 chapters and I'm so hooked!
I can't wait for more!!
Cheers!

I'm so excited to have you posting a new story because it's been sooo long since you finished Timber Pack.  I love your work.

I'm enjoying your foray into the fantasy/scifi realm and the direction of your story.  I can't wait to find out what Bastian's been doing that has gotten him in trouble (government spy? abduction?).  It will also be interesting to see how far you're going to take Devin's mutations and how Bastian handles Devin becoming furry since he liked his smooth skin.

After Cia's critique, I like how you handled the how Bastian ended up with an Earth name so I want to point out one thing I don't understand.  Why was Bastian worried about Devin taking semen only anally not orally?
I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

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Hehe, now that was just mean! I'm glad you're doing this story, btw. It's wonderful!
~M

I'm wondering not only is the fur part of Devin starting to mutate, but could he be pregnant? How is it that he was starting to bleed when he woke up in the middle of the night and in such pain, and then in the morning it was gone (well, at least THAT pain). And then to have Bastian go missing: I know it would be hard to keep the faith, but I certainly felt Bastian's loyalty and commitment come through the story. Question is, is the Earth goverment, the Degan people, or some other group that is keeping Bastian away. Come on, Devin: don't give up! Go find your man!

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oh my goodness...Is Devin turning into a Degan himself??? Sure hope so! Though after a week of not seeing Bastion, I would imagine Devin to be a little more...anxious?...He's taking this quite well.

Fantastic chapter! I hope the mutations include a uterus. Love this story

Damn, now thats how to end a chapter,lol, we're so caught in the story,lol.
hmmmm, I dont think Bastien has left... I suspect its something to do with his "Security" consulting. Also, I suspect that some serious mutations maybe on the horizon,lol.
Can't wait for the next chapter to see how it contonues.
Awesome as always Rob.

You've certainly left your readers and our poor hero dangling on the edge of a cliff.  It seems the mutations are just starting and there is no clue as to what has happened to Bastian.  Poor Devin!

Why do I think that it isn't just a bit of fur and it IS a mutation? Hmm... I don't know! Gods, I can't wait to find out what happens next. I think if I had been Devin I'd have been a little bit more sore and little more wobbly after 4 times in a night, but then again, Bastian did say all night long. LOL Then of course we have a great suspense and the chapter ending on a sad note as Devin believes he's been left behind. I hope that Bastian kicks the butt of whomever, or whatever, has delayed him getting back to Devin. Great chapter Rob!

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