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Infinite Density Reviews
NotNoNever
Oct 11 2012 03:01 PM
(Chapter 1 Review)
Enjoyed readingthis and noticed something at the end.......NO CLIFFHANGER! lol.
and thanks for continuing to post stories.
and thanks for continuing to post stories.
(Chapter 1 Review)
Lovely story 
at first I thought this is gonna end badly 
but as I got further into it I'm like is he playing a trick on him lol Loved it the ending was sweet
at first I thought this is gonna end badly but as I got further into it I'm like is he playing a trick on him lol Loved it the ending was sweet
(Chapter 1 Review)
Super story, CJ! I totally loved it! 
Your stories are always packed full of good yuks! 
I really enjoy your sense of humour.
Never did connect Chad's nickname to the title. Geez, I'm the dense one.
Your stories are always packed full of good yuks! I really enjoy your sense of humour.Never did connect Chad's nickname to the title. Geez, I'm the dense one.
Reply from C James (author)
I was in the mood to do a fun story, and in this case, Chad's density was the key. 
Don't feel bad; you weren't supposed to get Chad's nickname until the end; I hid the main clue in an apparent throw-away line by Carroll, when she called him I.D.
Don't feel bad; you weren't supposed to get Chad's nickname until the end; I hid the main clue in an apparent throw-away line by Carroll, when she called him I.D.
(Story Review)
I enjoyed reading this. The details added a lot of texture to the story and the pacing was just perfect.
Reply from C James (author)
I was torn on the details for purchasing the property; I had to include some (but not too much) to show what the resulting situation was (and Chad making some air-headed choices) but not too much... It's a short story, and ended up at 12000 words as is.
(Chapter 1 Review)
oh wow! 
awesome story!
all the apprehension and the guessing... lol. poor guy (s)
such a hot, cute tale! lol. Thanks!
awesome story!all the apprehension and the guessing... lol. poor guy (s)
such a hot, cute tale! lol. Thanks!
Reply from C James (author)
Thanks! Yeah, he managed to make his life miserable for a while... a victime of circumstance, self doubt, and of course, density.
Yeah, he managed to make his life miserable for a while... a victime of circumstance, self doubt, and of course, density. 
(Chapter 1 Review)
The story was as hot as the locale. AZ weather is way too hot for this old guy!
Well CJ you proved again you can write a hot story without even any sex in it!
Well CJ you proved again you can write a hot story without even any sex in it!
Reply from C James (author)
I used to live in Phoenix... I remember my car AC quitting when it was 122 degrees! So did my apartment AC. That was a hot day, even for Phoenix. (56C, for the metrically minded).
CJ
CJ
(Story Review)
'90 Ford Probe - 14 years old... what year are you in? lol
Although I had an inkling, once Jason's attitude began to change, it was well done and I thoroughly enjoyed this.
Although I had an inkling, once Jason's attitude began to change, it was well done and I thoroughly enjoyed this.
Reply from C James (author)
I set the story in 2004, because I felt it worked better then, regarding slightly different attitudes regarding homosexuality, and anonymous handles being far more prevalent in the pre-facebook era. I used the car's age to set the timeframe; 1990, plus 14 years.
(Chapter 1 Review)
I really enjoyed this. You had me guessing from the start and it was a great tale. I was sure it was him but when he used the name it was the nail in the coffin. Seems like fun little place to be, half naked guys in swim suits at college. Yum.
Reply from C James (author)
We never learn for sure all of what happened. It's from Chad's POV so we only know what he knows. Is it a coincidence that Carroll directed him to that discussion group that "Matt" happened to be in? Did that have anyth8ing to do with "Matt" trying to find other people his roomate went to HS with to call? Did that have anything to do with Jason dashing to grab the phone to Carroll at the end?
(Chapter 1 Review)
Expertly done, of course. You manage the twist skillfully, so that it becomes increasingly obvious, bit by bit, but never totally clear until near the end. Enjoyed.
Reply from C James (author)
Thanks!
The pacing and setup gave me some worries... I had to walk a line between too obvious, and not obvious enough.
The pacing and setup gave me some worries... I had to walk a line between too obvious, and not obvious enough.
(Story Review)